高三英语短文改错专题复习教案(共1节)张远哲Teachingaims:HowtodoproofreadingTeachingemphasis:MastermainmistakesappearinginthetextandthemethodstocorrectthemTeachingprocess:I.Leadin1.AsktheSssomequestionsaboutthemistakesappearingintheirlife.(1)Haveyoumadeanymistakesinthepastthreedays?(2)Ifso,whatwillyoudofacingthemistakes?(3)Anddoyouthinkthereisamanwhohasnevermadeamistakessofar?(4)Doyouconsideritseriousifyoumakeamistake?2.lettheSshaveadiscussioninpairsanddrawthefollowingconclusion:inourdailylife,everyonewillmakeamistake,ifwecorrectthemintime,wearegoodfellows.II.Presentation1.inourdailylife,everyonewillmakeamistake,ifwecorrectthemintime,wearegoodfellows.Andalsowhenweareusingalanguage,wemaymakesomemistakes.Doyouwanttocorrectthem?Ok,todaywearegoingtolearn“howtodoproofreading.(showthistopicontheslide)”2.givethefollowingsentencesontheslide:①It’sagreatfun.②I’lldobesttohelpyou.③Thereare70%ofthestudentsagreetothisopinion.④Thefirefightersputoffthefirequickly.3.analysethekindsofmistakesappearinginthesesentences.unnecessarywordmissingwordwrongword4.showthetableontheslideandlettheSsknowaboutwhatkindsofmistakesoftenappearinproofreaing.年度试题冠词名词连词形容词/副词代词动词时态主谓一致动词本身介词文义2007113111120081211121120091121111120101131111201113113III.Practice1.Givethepassageontheslideandaskthestudentstodiscussit.Thisisastorytoldbymyfather:“whenIwasboy,1.___________ThemostexcitingthingwaswhentocelebratetheSpring2.___________Festival.Mygrandmawasthebestcookerintheworld3.___________butcouldmakethemostdeliciousdishes.Onetime,Ijust4.___________couldn’twaitfortheSpringFestivaldinner.AsIwas5.___________abouttakeapiecefromacookedduck..Isawgrandmain6.___________thekitchenlookingatme.Shakeherhead,shesaid,“it7.___________isn’tagoodtimetodothat,dear.”Atonce,Iapologize8.___________andcontrolledmeatmebesttillthedinnerstarted.You9.___________know,thatwasadinnerwehadwaitedforseveralmonth.10.___________2.checktheanswerswiththestudentsandexplainthemistakesinit.IV.showthefollowingtechniquesofdoingproofreadingontheslide.Anddosomeexercises.短文改错解题步骤与方法解题步骤1通读全文,从语篇入手,理解文章大意2在理解大意的基础上,审查句子结构3从语法结构入手,进行语法改错4通读全文解题方法:从以下方面入手1.冠词:注意固定结构,特指泛指,Suddenly,IcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacher.2000Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.20032.名词:注意单复数,可数不可数,主谓一致OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicture.2002Theirwordwereagreatencouragemettome.20033.连词:注意句子逻辑关系,连词对称性Itseemsalwaysdifficultformetodothingswellasmyclassmates.2004I’mtryingtoimprovethesituationgsinceitdoesn’tseemtowork.20044.形容词/副词:注意形容词副词混用,比较级最高级用法,修饰比较级的副词Iwoulddescribemyselfasshyandquietly.2004Shecalled119immediate.2004福建5.代词:注意前后一致,人称代词偷换错用,少代词Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.2004福建Wehavetodothewashing,cleaningandshoppingbyus.2004天津6.动词:注意时态/语态,第三人称单数,非谓语动词,主从句时态一致Irememberedherwordsandcalmdown.2000Todayitismucheasiertobehealthythanitisinthepast.93Playfootballmakesusgrowuptallandstrong.2000TheywilldoalltheycanmakesurethatIgetagoodeducation.20017.介词:注意固定短语.介词后宾语形式I’llspendthewholeweekendreadingandpreparfortheexam.01北京I’mlookingforwardtohearfromyousoon.94V.Groupwork.1.Giveasecondpassageontheslide.Dividethestudentsintogroupsoffourandhaveacompetiton:whichgroupcangetthecorrcetanswersfirst?Payattentiontotheabovemethods.Livingisrisky.Crossingtheroad,drivingacar,flying,swallowinganaspirintabletoreatingachickensandwich—theycanallbefatal.Clearlysomerisksworthtaking,especially71._______whentherewardsarehigh:amansurroundedbyflamesandsmokegenerallyconsidersthatjumpingoutofasecondfloorwindowisanacceptablerisktosaveitslife.Butinmedicinea72._______fewprocedures,drugs,operationsortestsarereallyamatterof73._______lifeanddeath.Theremaybesoundmedicinereasonsforac-74._______ceptingelectricalshocktreatment,butsuchreasonsaretotallydependentinthebalanceofrisksandbenefitsforthepatients.75._______Surgeryforcancermaycureorprolongalife,butthere-movaloftonsils(扁桃体)cannotsaveanythingasorethroat.76._______Bloodpressuredrugsdefinitelyhelpsomepeopleliveafteraheartattack,butthesesamedrugsmaybebothnecessaryand77._______harmfulforthosewithonlymildbloodpressureproblems.Decidinghowmuchdiscomfortandriskwearepreparingto78._______putupwithinthenameofbetterhealthisahighpersonalmat-79._______ter,notadecisionweshouldremaintodoctorsalone.80._______2.letthegroupthatfirstfinishitgivetheiranswersandcheckthemwiththewholdclass.VI.consolidationShowthefollowingrulesontheslide:短文改错注意问题1.词序不改,一词不改成两词。2.做题方法规范,严格按照要求。VII.SummarySummarizethemethodswithdealingwithproofreading.VIII.Homework:finishaproofreadingexercise.