定语从句与写作公开课

GrammarandwritingLead-inEnjoythesong-theoneyouloveIknowyouneedafriendSomeoneyoucantalktoWhowillunderstandwhatyou'regoingthroughWhenitcomestoloveThere'snoeasyanswerOnlyyoucansaywhatyou'regonnadoIheardyouonthephoneYoutookhisnumberSaidyouweren'talone,butyou'dcallhimsoonIsn'thetheguyTheguywholeftyoucrying'Isn'thetheonewhomadeyoublueWhenyourememberthosenightsinhisarmsYouknowyou'vegottamakeupyourmindAreyougonnastaywiththeonewholovesyouOrareyougoingbacktotheoneyouloveIknowyouneedafriendSomeoneyoucantalktoWhowillunderstandwhatyou'regoingthroughWhenitcomestoloveThere'snoeasyanswerOnlyyoucansaywhatyou'regonnadoIheardyouonthephoneYoutookhisnumberSaidyouweren'talone,butyou'dcallhimsoonIsn'thetheguyTheguywholeftyoucrying'Isn'thetheonewhomadeyoublueWhenyourememberthosenightsinhisarmsYouknowyou'vegottamakeupyourmindAreyougonnastaywiththeonewholovesyouOrareyougoingbacktotheoneyouloveSomeone'sgonnacrywhentheylearnthey'velostyouSomeone'sgonnathankthestarsabovePracticeoftheAttributiveclause1.Aplaneisamachine___________canfly.2.Thecar____________myuncleboughtlastweekwasstolen.3.Theman_________iswalkingontheplaygroundismyoldfriend.4.Thewoman_________yousawintheparkisourEnglishteacher.which/that(which/that)who/that(who/that)5.Isawawoman_______bagwasstolen.6.Thereason______hewaslatewasthathegotuplate.7.Istillremembertheday_______IfirstcametoBeijing.8.Itisanimportantday________Iwillneverforget.9.Thepark__________theypaidavisittoisbeautiful.whosewhywhenWhich/thatWhich/that定语从句在写作中的应用Part1:高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：1.2013年全国高考新课标你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。Youknow,myuncleLiMingisgoingtothecitywhereyoulivetoattendaninternationalmeeting.我让叔叔带去你想要的中国画。I’veaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepaintingyouhaveaskedforbefore.2.2013年广东高考那些做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展。Thosewhodosimpleandordinaryjobsarealsopromotingthedevelopmentofthesociety.正如我们都知道的那样，扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。Asweallknow,cleaningstreetsisoneofthehardestwork.Part2:写作中定语从句的主要作用1.增加词数2.可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词的重复和句式单一。3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容。Part3:如何写出定语从句1.题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。Solution:1找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物。2将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）Forexample:我们班是一个大家庭。这个大家庭包括17个男生和7个女生。Ourclassisabigfamily.Thefamilyconsistsof17boysand7girls.Ourclassisabigfamily,whichconsistsof17boysand7girls.Practice:把下面各题中的句子合并为一个含有定语从句的主从复合句1．a.Seeingthesechanges,wecannotforgetthem.b.Theygaveusunselfishhelpwhenwewereintrouble.__________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Seeingthesechanges,wecannotforgetthosewhogaveusunselfishhelpwhenwewereintrouble.2．a.Ifeelgreatlyhonoredtohostthecontest.b.ThecontestissponsoredbytheStudents'Union.________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Ifeelgreatlyhonoredtohostthecontest,whichissponsoredbytheStudents'Union.3．a.Theysenttheelderlysomefruits,cleanedtheroomsandhadagoodchatwiththem.b.Theelderlyalwaysfeellonely.__________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Theysenttheelderlywhoalwaysfeellonelysomefruits,cleanedtheroomsandhadagoodchatwiththem.4．a.Thelibraryisnotfarfromhere.b.Thewriteroftendoessomereadingthere.__________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Thelibrarywherethewriteroftendoessomereadingisnotfarfromhere.5．a.I‘vealwayslongedforthedays.b.Iwillbeabletobeindependentthen.________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：I'vealwayslongedforthedayswhenIwillbeabletobeindependent.Practice:1.我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。2.我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。3.他居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。4.我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。MybestfriendisLiMing.Hisnicknameishippo.MybestfriendisLiMing,whosenicknameishippo.Idon’tlikehisnickname.Thereasonisthatitdeeplyhurtshim.ThereasonwhyIdon’tlikehisnicknameisthatitdeeplyhurtshim.我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。她居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。HelivesinKaiFeng.Peoplecanvisitlotsofscenicspotshere.HelivesinKaiFeng,wherepeoplecanvisitlotsofscenicspots.(注意此处不再有here)我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。Weusedtoattendpaintingclasstogether.Iwillneverforgetthedays.Iwillneverforgetthedayswhenweusedtoattendpaintingclasstogether.2.题干中只有一个孤立的简单句Solution:找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。Forexample:开封是一个历史名城。KaiFengisafamoushistoriccity.KaiFengisafamoushistoriccity,whichhasalonghistoryofmorethan2700yearsandlargenumbersofhistoricspots,suchastheIronPagoda,LongtingParkandsoon.有多久的历史？因何出名？Practice:1.即将到来的端午节是中国的传统节日。2.李明是一个热心肠的人。TheupcomingDragonBoatFestivalisaChinesetraditionalfestival.TheupcomingDragonBoatFestivalisaChinesetraditionalfestival,whichiscelebratedtohonorournationalhero,QuYuan.(节日的目的)李明是一个热心肠的人。LiMingisawarm-heartedman.LiMingisawarm-heartedman,whoalwayslendsahandtoothers.(具体化)直击高考（2013年高考山东卷）描述你的假期打算（包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob,whichwillhelpmeearnmoneyandaccumulateworkingexperience.Travelingisoneofmychoices,whichwillenrichmylifeandbroadenmyhorizen.Iwouldliketodovoluntarywork,whichwillmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety.Travelingisoneofmychoices,Iwouldliketo