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开心写作坊：我最喜欢的科目在你所学的科目里，你最喜欢的科目是什么？请以“Myfavoritesubject”为题，写一篇英语作文。词数：60~100。技巧点拨这篇文章要求学生介绍自己最喜欢的科目，并简要介绍该科目，同时说明自己喜欢这一科目的原因，还要写出今后的学习计划。文章主题贴近校园生活，让学生既有话题可写，又有内容想表达。建议学生在写作时充分结合自身的学习经历，简明扼要、有理有据地说明自己喜欢这一科目的理由，并有条理的列举自己的学习计划。写作提纲时态：一般现在时，一般将来时人称：第一人称内容：1、介绍你最喜欢的科目是什么，以及你对该科目的了解；2、写出你喜欢这一科目的原因；3、谈谈你对该科目今后的学习计划。重点词组：我最喜欢的科目myfavoritesubject喜欢的favorite努力学习workhard有趣且实用interestinganduseful在未来inthefuture重点句型:…ismyfavoritesubject.Itis…for...todosth.Ilike...because...Iaminterestedin...Iwill...过渡衔接在介绍喜欢这一科目的理由时，可以使用because,becauseof,inaddition等词或词组衔接上下文，使文章的条理更加清晰，内容更有说服力。一类文MyfavoritesubjectDoyouknowwhatmyfavoritesubjectis?TheanswerisEnglish.Aseveryoneknows,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageintheworld.Soit’simportantforeveryonetolearnEnglishwellinourrapidlydevelopingworld.AfterlearningEnglish,wecanreadmoreforeignbooks.Thishelpsustogainmoreknowledge.Itcanalsobroadenourhorizons.InordertoimprovemyEnglishskills,IwillreadEnglishnewspapersandlistentotheradioinEnglishasmuchaspossible.IalsoboughtlotsofclassicEnglishbooks.I’llreadthemwheneverIhavetime.Peoplesay“tohaveanotherlanguageistopossessasecondsoul.”Solet’slearnEnglishwell.【点评】首先，作者开门见山地介绍了自己喜欢的科目是英语，并接着道出了学习英语的重要性和学习英语可以拓宽眼界的好处。Aseveryoneknows；Itisimportantforsbto...等句型和inorderto；asmuchaspossible；broadenone’shorizons；gainknowledge等表达的使用为文章增色不少。最后以一句引人深思的名言结尾，画龙点睛。二类文MyfavoritesubjectDoyoulikemath?Ilikeitverymuch.Therearemanysubjectsinmyschool.Theyareallveryimportant,butIthinkthatmathismoreinterestingthananyothersubject.Learningformulas(公式)isinteresting.Therearemanyformulasinmathforustouse.Whenyousolvemathproblems,theformulasareveryuseful.Theyaresosimple,yettheycanworkoutdifficultproblems.Youwillfeelveryproudandfulfilled(满足的)whenyousolvedifficultmathproblems.Inaddition,youcantellyourclassmateshappily,“Ididit!”Thatisreallycool.Iwanttogetbetteratmathinthefuture.Iwillmakemoreeffortstostudythesubject.Iwilllistentomyteachersmorecarefullyinclass.TobeLearningmathisnoteasyatall,soIwillalwayskeepitup.IbelievethatIcandoitwell!【点评】文章通过问句引出作者最喜欢的科目。第二段，作者道出自己喜欢学习数学公式，并配合细节描写，作者解决难题后的兴奋与成就感仿佛跃然纸上。在最后一段中，作者道出自己的学习计划，并表示为了学好这一科目必须加倍努力。美中不足的是，作者在内容表达上不够精练，文章显得有点啰嗦。在语言上，作者能够准确的把握时态语态，并恰当地运用morethan,makeefforttodosth,notatall,keepup等表达，增强了文章的可读性。三类文MyfavoritesubjectThereareplentyofsubjectsinmyschool.Amongthesesubjects,IlikeEnglishbest.Letmetellyouwhy.Ithinkeveryoneshouldknowatleasttwolanguages.Languageisatoolcommunication.Englishisimportantanduseful.SoallofusshouldstudyEnglishwell.Inaddition,IthinkitisinterestingandrelaxingtostudyForthesereasons,IlikeEnglishbest.Thisyear,IwillstudyEnglishharder.IplantoreadmoreEnglishbookssoIcanlearnmorewordsandexpressions,aswellasunderstandWesternculture.Iwillputmyplanintopractice.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.IthinkIcangainalotthroughhardwork.