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四级作文练习答案第一部分遣词造句I.选词1.CustomhabitCustom表示民族、群体的习惯或习俗；而habit常用来指个人的习惯2.arousearoseArouse是及物动词，意思是“激起，引起”，宾语多数是抽象名词。而arise是不及物动词，意思是“发生，产生”，也是常用于抽象事物，大多是含有困难、麻烦、问题等意思的词汇。3.Adopt意思是“采用，采纳”；而adapt意思是“使…适应，改写”。4.satisfactory;satisfied。5.raised;risingII.改错1.Discuss是及物动词，后面的about应删去。2.改为tellsusabout.Tell只有在tellhimastory(thenews)等句子中可以有间接宾语和直接宾语，但不能任意类推。如不应说tellyouourschoollife,而应说tellyouaboutourschoollife。3.Weshouldnotlookdown(on/upon)physicallabour.4.negative是形容词，在这个句子里误用为动词，可以改为：Nonecandenytheimportanceofmoney5.Therearemanywaysforustolearnabouttheoutsideworld.6.Wecanalsoknowsocietybyservingitourselves.7.ThefoodinmycountryisverydifferentfromthatoftheUnitedStates.8.Knowinghowtostudyandlearningtobudgettimeareimportantforuniversitystudents.9.Thepriceofthegoodsinourcollege’sstoresisveryhigh.10.Englishisveryimportantinourcollege,whichishardtolearn.11.Inmodernsociety,peopleareundervariouskindsofpressure.12.Itmaybenotgoodtoourhealth.13.Ithinkitnousetellingthestory.14.Wecanalsoknowsocietybyservingitourselves.15.Iampooringrammarandvocabulary.III.改写1.Onetestends,butanotheriswaitingforyou.2.句中不定式短语todowellincollege逻辑主语不清楚，可以改为：Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades.3.Thefreshwater与逗号后的it不连贯。It与things在数方面不一致。改为：Freshwateristhemostimportantthingintheworld.4.Onceonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo).v5.Ihavebeenstudyinginthecollegefortwoyears.6.Itmayalsohelpyousucceed/obtainyourgoal.7.Wemustpayattentionandfindasolutiontotheproblem.8.attheageoften并没有说明谁十岁时，而按一般推理，不可能是mygrandfather,改为:WhenIwasten,mygrandfetherdied.9.Asastudent,wemaygetaverylowscoreinourcomposition.10.TherearestillmanypeoplewhospeakEnglish.第二部分组段和谋篇I.例子：Paragraphone:Whyaredisposableplasticbagswidelyused?1convenient2free(cheap)Paragraphtwo:Whatproblemsarecausedbyusingplasticbags?1damageourenvironment2Itishardtodecompose(recycle)3rubbish(whitepollution)Paragraphthree:Themeaningoftheban:1Savenaturalresources2Ourcityhasbecomecleaner.3Raisethepublicawarenessofenvironmentalprotection范文：LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBagsWithitsgreatadvantageofconvenienceandendurance,disposableplasticbagsarebeingwidelyusedandhavebeenanindispensablepartofourdailylife.We’vebeenusedtoenjoyingreceivingfreeplasticbagsofferedbyshopassistants,wheneverwebuyclothes,shoesandfoodatsupermarketsordepartmentstores.Itseemsthatlifewithoutthemisunimaginableformostofus.However,theydocausealotofproblems,especiallybringingseveredamagetoourenvironment.Notonlydotheyaffectthebeautifulnessofourlivingsettings，butalsodoharmtoourhealth，becausetheyaremadefromsomekindofchemicalmaterialwhichcannotbedisposable.Onceweburnthemorburythem,theymaypolluteourairorwaterheavily.Thus,it’simperativeforustotakeeffectivemeasurestolimittheuseofdisposableplasticbags.Suchactionsareofgreatsignificance.Itishelpfulinsavingnaturalresourcebesidesmakingourcities’facescleanandbeautiful.Furthermore,itcanhelpreduceharmfuldamagetoenvironmentandthustoourhuman’shealth.Inviewofcurrentbadeffectsmadebyusingdisposableplasticbags,weeveryoneareresponsibleforlimitingtheiruse.Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveabrightfuture.II.（略）III.BEDCKJFIHGAAttendYourClassesRegularlyNowadays，itisaverycommonphenomenonthatsomeuniversitystudentsarelatefororevenabsentfromclasses.Andstilltherearesomestudentswhoslipoutoftheclassroombeforetheclassisover.Classattendancehasbecomeathornyproblemtoboththestudentsandteachers.Infact,itisveryimportantforthestudentstoattendtheirclassesregularly.First,itwillensureyoutocatchupwiththeteachersinyourlearning.Thatisveryhelpfultoyouifyouwanttodoagoodjobinyourstudy.Second,attendingclassesregularlyisawayofshowingrespecttoyourteachers,too.Yourteacherswillfeelbadifthestudentsdonotattendtheirclasses,which,inturn,willaffecttheirteachingandbenogoodforthestudents.Third,attendingclassesregularlywillhelptoformagoodhabitofpunctuality,whichisofgreatimportanceforthestudentstodoagoodjobinthefuture.Therefore,weuniversitystudentsshouldformthegoodhabitofattendingourclassesregularlyfromnowon.Andsomedaywe’llbenefitfromit.IV.ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?Nowadays,manyfamousuniversitycampuseshavebecomeoneofthepopulartouristattractions.IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothateveryyearthousandsandthousandsofmiddleschoolstudentsvisitTsingHuaUniversityandPekingUniversityandotherfamousuniversitiesinChina.Intheplacefarawayfromthecapitalcity,thelocalstudentsalsovisittheuniversitiesfamousintheirownprovince.Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingtoopentheuniversitycampusfortourists?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingforthestudentstovisitthefamousuniversitycampusinthatitcanenablethemiddlestudentstogetmoreinformationabouttheuniversityandtheycanhaveenoughtimeandopportunitytopreparethemselveswiththechancetogetintotheuniversity.Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,thepublictourismwillhavenegativeeffectontheuniversitiesbecauseitwillnotonlydoharmtotheenvironmentbutalsototheintellectualatmosphere.Inmyopinion,thetourismtotheuniversitiesisnotagoodthing.Thecampusismainl