托福独立写作body段论点句的写作方法

1、独立写作body段论点句的写作方法T.S（topicsentence）+development（论述）+（conclusion）specificexamplesanddetails范文：综合写作T.S必须能概括全段必须只包含论证的一个方面（或一个原因）不能过于笼统：first,Englishisveryimportant(*)==Englishisveryimportantwhenwearelookingforajob.不能过于详细：论点句简单粗暴，没有论证TPO17Thesisstatement:inUSA,therewillbefewerandfewerbirds.Firstly,humanpopulationandsettlementsleadstothedecreaseofbird’spopulation除了观点，某些事实，名人名言也可以作为T.S使用最无耻的是，某些both-agree的题目，改写题目也可以【例】Aboveall,theworldtodayhasbecomeaglobalvillage,wherenotasinglenationisisolatedfromothers.Infact,diversifiedmeasuresarebeingtakenbythegovernmenttolimittheuseofcars.Firstly,emphasisshouldbeplacedonwhathasbeensuggestedinthefamoussaying“interestingisthebestteacher”.Ontheonehand,thankstotremendousaccomplishmentofscientistsinmanyfields,people’sliveshavebeenmademuchsimplerthaninthepast.简单的判断方法——能否从论点句中推文章的核心观点？===》包括分论点和立场==》要将一个分论点同题目/立场相联系论点句写作利器：1》动名词做主语2》结果状语的表达A.Topicsentence(结论）的写法（形式角度）分论点关键词+Causemakelet+句+Leadto,resultin,contributeto，exertnegative/positiveeffecton+词组(Becauseof,resultfrom,dueto)+主观点的同义改写分论点关键句+，which.....,making......,thus/so/sothat+主观点的同义改写【例】youngpeopletodayaremorelikelytohelpothersthanyoungpeoplewereinthepast.立场：disagree_年轻人不再乐于助人(S.S)A社会竞争压力大==》年轻人不乐于助人B社会风气不好==》年轻人不乐于助人C独生子女==》自私==》不乐于助人ThefiercesocialcompetitionmakesyoungpeopletodaybelesslikelytohelpothersThefiercesocialcompetitionexertsnegativeeffectonyoungpeople’smutualhelpThefiercesocialcompetitionexertsnegativeeffectonyoungpeople’sofferinghelptoothers.Thebadsocialatmosphereresultsinyoungpeople’sbeinglesslikelytohelpothers.Therearelessandlesschildreninthemodernfamily,makingyoungpeoplebecomeselfish,whichexertnegativeeffectonyoungpeople’sofferinghelptoothers.Therearelessandlesschildreninthemodernfamily,makingyoungpeoplebecomesoselfishthattheyareunlikelytoofferhelptoothers.B.Topicsentence(结论）的写法（内容角度）冰淇淋法：Independenceandaltruism(独立与利他）Safetyandtechnology(安全与科技）Cooperationandcompetition（合作与竞争）Communicationandtrust（交流与信任）Cultureandvalues（文化与价值）Convenienceandtime（方便与时间）Knowledgeandemotion（知识与情感）Rightsandperseverance（权利与毅力）Economyandefficiency（经济与效率）Environmentandhealth（环境与健康）Moneyandinterest（金钱与兴趣）【例】1.Aneffectiveleadershouldtrytomakeothersfeelthattheyarepartofthedecisionmakingprocess.Cooperation:需要同被领导者合作得出更好更全面的结论（正）更好更全的结论resultfrom合作==》应该这样做Communicationandtrust:交流产生信任、消除误会（正）Time:沟通耗费时间（反）Interest：参与决策使得被领导者更有动力做事情（正）===》Agree:Gettingtheteammemberinvolvedinthedecisionmakingprocesscanhelptheleadertomakeamorecomprehensivedecision.团队成员合作==》更完善的决定Theteammembers’sharingideaintheprocessofthedecisionmakingwillhelptoestablishthesenseoftrustamongcolleagues.团队成员合作==》信任感Theteammemberswillbemoreinterestedinthetaskiftheyareapartofthedecision-makingprocess.绝对观点反驳法：Thebestwayforparentstoteachchildrenaboutresponsibilityistohavethemcareforananimal.Mostbusinesspeoplearemotivatedonlybythedesireformoney.拆分法：个人、社会、国家学习、工作、生活科技、社会、文化儿童时期、青少年时期、成人时期Peopleareneversatisfiedwithwhattheyhave;theyalwayswantsomethingmoreorsomethingdifferent.Societybenefitsmorefromtheworkofgreatartiststhanfrompoliticalleaders.都好都同意中庸法