广东省2014高考英语一轮短文改错书面表达训练(5)

-1-广东省2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（5）附参考范文短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。IwasborninafarmerfamilyinSuizhongcounty,LiaoningProvinceinJune,in1965．WhenIwasachild,Idreamedofflyinginthesky．IjoinedthearmyinJune,1983．In1992,Iwassenttotheairforcebase．InAugust,1996,Iwasoneofthefirst14membersfrom1,500pilotsthroughthephysicalexamination．Iworkedhardly,becauseIwasamongthefirstastronautsofourcountryin1998.Iwaschosenoneofthefirstmanspaceaircraftastronautslater．OnOct．15,2003,Isuccessfullyflytospace,circledaroundtheearthabout14circleandthenreturned．IwashonoredtohavegiventhechancetobethefirstChinesetotravelinspace．参考答案短文改错1．farmer改为farmer,s2．去掉1965前面的in3．anairforcebase。4．把hardly改为hard5．把because改为so6．在chosen后加as7．manned8．flew9．把circle改为circles10．在have后面加been20090318-2-*******************************************结束假设你是李华,你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人学中文,唱中文歌才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文,你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事,并表示可以提供帮助。比赛时间:7月18日报名时间:截止到6月30日报名地点:北京电视台注意:1.词数:100左右2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯3.参考词汇:才艺大赛-talentshowDearPeter,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaGuidedwriting:DearPeter,IreadinanewspapertodaythataLearnChinese,SingChineseSongsTalentShowwillbeheldinBeijingTelevisionStationonJuly18.ItisintendedforforeignerswhoaregoodatChinese.Iknowyoulikesinging,andyouareinBeijingduringthatperiod.NowthatyouhavestudiedChineseforseveralyearsatauniversityinBeijing,Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyoursingingtalent,andhowwellyou'velearnedChinese.Ifyouwouldliketotry,you'llhavetogototheTVstationtosignupbeforetheendofJune.IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,Iwouldbemorethangladtohelp.Yours,LiHu*********************************************************结束1.（201*·陕西卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。-3-修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。LastSundaymorning,whenIwashavingawalkintheparknearmyhome,Icameacrossacrewmakeanewfilmwithoneofmyfavouriteactor.makingactorsIdidn’thavemycameraWithmeatthattime,butIrushedbackhometoget∧.Unfortunately,So/anditbythetimeIgotback,theyhavefinishedthesceneandactorcouldn’thadbeseeneverywhere.Iwasreallydisappointingandabouttoleavewhenanywheredisappointedhewalkedout∧abuilding.Hewasrightthereinfrontofme!Iofcouldn’tbelievemyluck-notonlydidIhadmyphototakenwuthhim,buthavehesignedhisnameonmyshirt!2.（2011·全国II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。-4-DearGeorge,It'sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenow76._______backhome.Thankyouverymuchforshowingthemaround77.______yourcityandprovidingusforthewonderfulmeals.After78._______wesaidgoodbyetoyou,wewenttoWashingtonD.C.,79._______wherewestayedforthreedays.Mybrotherwassomuchfond80._______ofthemuseumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostaying81．________anothercoupleofday.However,myfatherhadtoreturnto82.________workonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.It83．________wasreallyaniceexperience.Ifyou'dliketomaketripto84._______ourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.85._______Yours,Mike【参考答案】76.after---since77.them---us78.for---with79.正确80.去掉much81.staying---stay82.day----days83.fly---flew84.trip前a85.better----more**************************************************************结束高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类3.假设你的英文名为Jack，是英国诺丁汉大学的中国留学生。你负责为在该校就读的32名中国学生筹划圣诞节期间的苏格兰之行，为期7天，请你给诺丁汉的STA（Students’TravelAgency）经理Phil发一封电子邮件，联系有关事宜。要点如下：（1）希望能够派车接送；（2）需要一名说标准英语，并非常熟悉苏格兰的导游；（3）请求告知旅行日程及就餐、旅馆、费用等情况；（4）你的联系方式：电子邮箱地址：[e-mail]或电话号码：[phone]注意：（1）词数：100词左右；（2）开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数；（3）参考词汇：旅馆住宿accommodation；旅行日程安排itinerary；长途客车coachHi,Phil,I’dlikeyoutoorganizeatriptoScotlandforus.Ihavehereagroupof32ChinesestudentsstudyinginNottinghamUniversity,whowanttogoonaseven-daytourduringtheChristmasdays.IhopewecanhaveacoachwhichwilltakeustoScotlandandthenbringusbacktoNottingham.WealsoneedaguidewhospeaksstandardEnglish-5-andknowsScotlandwell.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucanworkoutanitineraryassoonaspossibleandtellmeaboutouraccommodation,mealsaswellashowmucheachofushastopay.Ifyouhaveanyinformation,[e-mail]*********************************************************结束高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类4.加拿大高中生David在互联网上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化。假设你是重庆实验中学的李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发出一封电子邮件。主要内容包括：①.你怎样得知他的愿望②.你愿意成为他的朋友③.你打算如何帮助他④.你盼望他的回复注意：词数：100词左右DearDavid，IamLiHua.IamgladtoreadyournoticeontheinternetandIknowyouwanttomakefriendswithaChineseinordertolearntheChineselanguageandculture.Iwanttobeyourfriend.NowI’dliketointroducemyselftoyo