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嘉兴英语教学网页知识点九：书面表达一、中考作文都有提示性词汇，或中文提示、或词组短语、或英文提示。我们在进行写作时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词。将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题二、语言通顺，表达准确１、避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。２、多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。三、不会表达，另辟蹊径中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采来打分。造句越简单准确越好。复合句很好，但造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不多给分。”如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。以下给出09年各地中考话题作文以供参考练习。话题1.健康随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISEONEHOURADAY,KEEPILLNESSAWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。注意：1.词数80—100左右。2.要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。参考词汇：buildupone’sbodystrength强健身体reducediseases减少疾病构思方法1.认真阅读、理解和思考题目中给出的所有信息点。信息点是围绕着提示从文字中扣出来的。2.这个题目的信息点应该是：a.阳光体育；b.政府重视中学生身体；c.提出的标语；d.参加了各种体育锻炼；e.有利于强身健体；f.增强了学习效果；g.校园生活丰富了。写作方法1.安排以上信息点在文中的逻辑关系。2.用所掌握的词汇、词组、固定句型将所有信息点表现在文章中。(TheSunnySports,payattentiontothehealthofthestudents,raisetheslogan,takepartintheexercise,buildupone’sbodystrength,reducediseases,andmakestudyeffective,schoollife,colorful)3.文章最后加入个人评价(观点)。范文1AstheSunnySportsisdevelopinginourcountry,thegovernmenthaspaidmoreattentiontothehealthofthestudentsandraisedtheEXERCISEONEHOURADAY,KEEPILLNESSAWAYslogan.Sofarourschoollifehaschangedalot.Nowwehavemoretimetodosportsinthemorningorafterschool.Weplayfootball,basketballandsoon.Theyletourbrains嘉兴英语教学网’stakeexerciseeveryday.Itcanbuildupourbodystrengthandreducediseases.范文2Doingsportbuildsupourbodystrengthandreducesdiseases.Thoughweliveabetterlife,ourhealthisbecomingworsenow.SoEXERCISEONEHOURADAY，KEEPILLNESSAWAYhasbeenraisedbythegovernment.Atnoonorafterschoolweplayballgames,swimmingandrunning.Look!Theplaygroundseemssmallerbecauselotsofstudentsareplayingonit.Theschoollifehasbecomecolorfulandweareenergetic.Asaresultwestudyharderandbetter.TheSunnySportshasbroughtanexcitingchangetous.Let’skeepondoingit.例2健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；3.饮食要健康；4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；2.80—100词左右；3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。构思方法1.找到信息点。2.这个题目的信息点应该是：a.作为儿(女)担忧父(母)的身体状况；b.上班最好步行；c.每周至少一次到体育场馆从事体育锻炼(球类运动、游泳等)；d.健康的饮食；e.早睡不熬夜。1.首先要谈到对父(母]的身体状况担忧。2.然后引出希望父(母)怎么做。3.作为小辈向父母提出建议和要求时，要注意语气，不可以命令。4.注意信的写作格式。范文1DearDad(Mum),You’resobusyeverydaythatyoudon’tpaymuchattentiontoyourhealth.I’mworriedaboutyourhealthallthetime.I’dliketogiveyousomesuggestions.Ihearwalkingisthebestsport.Yourcompanyisn’tfarfromhome,isit?Whynotwalktotheoffice?You’dbettertakeexerciseatleastonceaweek,suchasplayingtennisinthegym.Goingswimmingisalsoanicechoice,too.What’smore,it’snecessarytohavehealthyfood.Trynottostayuptoolate.Havingenoughsleepcanhelpyourbrainworkbetter.嘉兴英语教学网!Yourlovingson(daughter)Tom(Mary)范文2DearDad(Mum),You’resobusyeverydaythatyoudon’tpaymuchattentiontoyourhealth.Iamworriedaboutyou.Ihopeyoucankeephealthy.Youoftendrivetoyouroffice.Itisnotfar.Whataboutwalkingtherebecauseitcanmakeyoumuchstronger?I’dlikeyoutoplaybasketballorgoswimminginthegymatleastonceaweek.Itisimportanttoeathealthyfoodsuchasvegetables,meat,eggsandfruits.Thoughyourworkishard,Istillhopethatyoucangotobedearlysothatyoucangetenoughsleep.I’mlookingforwardtoreceivingyourletter.Yourlovingson(daughter)Tom(Mary)话题2自行车自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多的人…,这使得…而骑车既可以….,又可以…那么你更喜欢哪种交通工具呢?为什么?BicyclesarestillpopularinBeijing.Itiseasytogotoschoolortogotoworkbybike,forwaitingabusalwayswastesussometimeandalwaysmakesusworried.Nowmoreandmorepeoplebecomerichenoughtobuycarsanditmakesairdirty.Ridingbicyclesisgoodforus.Itcanhelppeoplekeephealthyandsaveenergy.Ipreferridingabikebecauseitischeaperanditcanalsohelpkeepairfrompolluting话题3吸烟有害IthasbeenprovedthatsmokershavemadeuphalfofthepopulationinChina.Andthesmokersarebecomingyoungerandyounger,evenincludingsomemiddleschoolstudents.Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplehaverealizedsmokingcandoharmtopeople'shealth.However,somepeoplestillenjoysmoking.Why?Becausesomeofthemthinkitisakindoffashion,somethinkitisofgreatfunandothersthinkthatsmokingcanrefreshthem.Infact,smokingisabadhabit.Itcancausealotofdiseases.Meanwhilesmokingisawasteofmoney.Besides,carelesssmokersmaycausedangerousfires.Smokingisharmfulanditisnotonlybadforsmokersthemselves,butalsobadfornon-smokers.Therefore,Ihopeallthesmokerscangiveupsmokingforthemselvesandalsoforthepeoplearoundthem.ItissaidthatthereareabouthalfofpeopleinChinaaresmoking.Manyyoungboysandgirlshavethehabitofsmoking,thoughtheyaremiddleschoolstudents.Asweallknow,smokingdoesgreatharmtohumanbeings.Moreandmorepeoplehavecometorealizehowseriousthisproblemis.Buttheyareneverbored嘉兴英语教学网