1高三英语(人教版)第二轮专题辅导讲座专题六:英语短文改错专题【命题趋向】短文改错是一项主要测试考生的判断能力,观察能力、纠错能力语言基础知识及语言的综合运用能力。短文改错的趋势:1改错短文以以记叙文和说明文为主。2文章内容贴近学生生活,没有生僻词汇和复杂的结构,文章简单易懂,错误设置也很简单,多为学生平常作文中常出现的错误。3.短文一般100词左右,错误有9处。4常见错有三种;错词;多词;缺词;错词占60%左右【考点透视】一.错词的热点1.动词—时态语态非谓语;主谓关系2.联系词—关系代词和关系副词;连词;连接词3.名词—可数名词、不可数名词,可数名字的单复数变化。4.介词—介词和动词的搭配错误5.形容词/副词—词类错用6.冠词—定冠词和不定冠词的错用7.代词—人称代词;物主代词;反身代词8.惯用法—固定句型,固定短语。二.多词和缺词热点1.冠词2.介词3.副词4.代词5.关联词6.小品词to【例题解析】一.错词1.动词错误:(1)时态和语态、主谓一致的错误。【1】整体时态:*WehadguestslastnightwhohavenotstayedinaB&Bhotelbefore.定语从句的时态在主句之前发生,故have改为had。*Highoverthewater,theydiscoveraholeintheballoon.Theholebecamebiggerandbigger.全篇使用过去时态,故改discover--discovered【3】主谓一致*Havingfunwiththeirfriendsmakethemhappy.2动名词短语做主语,谓语动词用单数形式makes。*Butthemostwonderfulthingaboutjackwerehismusicalability。主语为themostwonderfulthing故此,系词为was*Butnotallinformationaregoodtosociety.主语不可数,所以动词用is。(2.)动词错误:*InAmericanbigcities,thousandssellticketstowatchfootballorbasketballgames.(buy)根据句子意思,数千人买票去看比赛。故sell改为buy。(3)非谓语动词【1】动名词错误*Iamlookingforwardtoseeallofyouagaininthenearfuture.(seeing)解析:to为介词,故此see改为seeing*Notonlyitmakesusgrowuptallandstrongbutalsogivesusasenseoffairplayandteamspirit.解析:主语应为动名词,故Playfootball改为Playingfootball【2】现在分词*Theairkeepstheballoonupwasescapingquicklyandtheballoonwascomingdown.解析:分词做定语,故keeps改为keeping*Ifoundasmallhousestandinginafieldwithalightshonefromthesittingroom.解析:withalightshone改为withalightshining。alight和shining为主动关系。【3】不定式*Ijustwanttothankyouforhelpingmebecomingadifferentperson.(become)解析:helpsbdosth故改becoming为become*Hedidnotwantsharethingswithothers.解析:wanttosharesth.want后可跟不定式做宾语。【4】过去分词*Ihavesomerecordsgivingtomeasbirthdaygifts.解析:havesthdone,somerecords和give是被动关系,故改为given。2.连词错误:*Icameintothelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthelight.解析:根据句意,“我看到他们中的一个人走进厨房,并且打开灯。”两个分句子之间是并列关系。故改but为and*Wewouldreturnatnighttohearthathe`dpickedupfromtheradiointheday.解析:考查宾语从句,pickup缺宾语,故改that为what*Theclasseshelpedmeunderstandwhattheworldworks解析:根据句子意思,“这些课程有助于我了解世界是怎么运转的”故改what为how。3.形容词/副词错用:*Youalwaysgavemespeciallyattention.解析:名词应该被形容词special修饰。*Itisrealagoodchancetohavemetallofyouhere.解析:副词really修饰系词,故改real为really。*Myhometownhastakenonanewlook.Howgreatithaschanged!解析:great修饰动词,故改为:greatly4.冠词错误:*ThisismyfirstvisittoaAmericanfamily.(an)解析:American第一个音标的音素是元音,故用an.*Eachplayermustobeycaptain,whoistheleaderoftheteam.3解析:有定语修饰,the特指captain.*Suddenly,IcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacherinthecrowd.解析:固定搭配catchsightof.故此去掉冠词a。5.代词错误:【1】反身代词*Ijustsmiledtomeandthought,…解析:主语和宾语相同,故此me—myself。【2】形容词性物主代词*Besides,theforeignteachershereworkhardandtryhisbesttomaketheactivitieslivelyandinteresting.(his--their)解析:主语是第三人称复数,因此tryone`sbest【3】it/that/them/us*Ithoughtthatwasdulltowatchagameinwhichplayerskickedaballtoeachother.解析:that不可以做形式主语,故改为it。*Itwasaboutnoonwhenwhenwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.前后人称错误。故此改them为us.6.名词单复数和名词的所有格的错误*Shemarkedstrictlyonstudent`sperformance.(students`)解析:根据句意,学生们的表演,故改为students`performance*Physicsisoneofthemostdifficultsubjectforus(subjects)解析:oneof说明后面为复数形式。*WepracticethreetimeseveryweekandoftenwatchfootballmatchonTVtogether.解析:常常看比赛,故此match改为matches.*Ihavenopaperstowriteon.解析:纸不可数,所以改为paper7.介词错误*HeleftShanghaiatacoldnight.解析:一天的部分被修饰时,介词用on,*Iamanewcomerofasmalltown.解析:根据句子意思,来自一个小镇comefromasmalltown.*Iwascaughtbytherainlastnight解析:固定短语becaughtintherain遇上雨。8.语意错误*Thousandssellticketstowatchfootballorbasketballgames.解析:句子意思:数千人卖掉票去看足球或者篮球比赛。故此错误,sell—buy*Notallpeopleliketoworkandeveryoneliketoplay.解析:句子意思:并非所有的人都喜欢工作,并且所有的人喜欢玩。语意错误,应该为转折关系,and—but二.多余词多词一般为:冠词/连词/介词/系词be助词等。【1】连词多余:*Theydidnotwantbreakfastbecausethattheyweregoingoutearlyinthemorning.解析:连词多余,故此去掉(that),原句是状语从句。【2】介词多余:*ThecrowdwaitingfortogreettheminEnglandwasverysurprised.(for)解析:没有宾语,所以去掉for。【3】冠词多余:4*SuddenlyIcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacherinthecrowd.解析:固定短语,catchsightof:偶然看见。【4】系词/助词多余:*Mymotherwasasked:“Haveyoutakenmedicine?”解析:根据句意,是妈妈问:故为主动语态。三:缺词缺词一般为:冠词/连词/介词/系词be助词/【1】缺介词*Hewaslookingforaglass^thecupboard(in)解析:根据句意,inthecupboard做状语。【2】缺冠词*However,thepopularteacherisat^sametimetheonewhoshouldbestrictwithstudents.(the)解析:形容词same和the搭配使用,故给same前加the。【3】缺连接词*Inoneclass,Ilearned^itrained(why)解析:根据句子意思可知,缺连接词,句意为:“在一节课上,我知道了下雨的原因”。【4】缺系词*What^yourfavoritesport?(is)解析:句子中缺系词,在What加is.【专题训练与高考预测】此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行作出判断,如无错误,在刻行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列清况改正;该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉,在该行在边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词:在错的词下面划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词注意:原行没能错的不要改Passage1Iwentouttoseefilmwithmybrotherafter1_______supper.Byourwaytothecinema,wemetanAmerican2._______girlnamedAlice,shehadgotlostandlookedvery3.._________anxious.Wewentuptoseethatwasthematter.We4________thentookhimtothehotel.Whilegoingthere5_________Itoldherthegreatchangethathadtakenplace6_________inourcountryinthepastfewyearsbutAlicetold7__________usalotabouttheyouthinAmerica8.________Althoughwemissthefilm,wefeltveryhappy9_______foritwehadnotonlyhelpedAlicegetoutoftrouble10_______alsoknewsomethingabuttheStatesWeseeEnglishcanstr