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1专题六英文书面表达随着我国高考英语试题的不断改革和发展，特别是实行英语标准化考试以来，对英语书面表达的要求也开始在试卷上体现得越来越高，这是社会需要和不断发展对英语教学所提出的要求，要想全面提高学生的书面表达能力，实现新课标的基本要求，并最终在考试中取得好成绩，对学生进行专门的写作训练是必不可少的。高中学生在写作上出现的问题，总结起来有以下几种表现：1.卷面欠整洁，尤其是勾抹痕迹严重；2.字数达不到规范要求，字体大小不一，所写内容的摆放与卷面整体感觉严重失衡；3.单词拼写错误较多；4.时态运用混乱，与写作要求不符；5.句子结构及语法错误层出不穷；6.逐条翻译所提供的写作信息，句子之间缺少衔接；7.句式过于单一，且表达不够精炼；8.缺乏专业训练，甚至不能在规定时间内完成。注意事项：1．审题要细把握好文体、人称、和时态。2．编拟提纲简洁列出要点，防漏或过度发挥。3．表达用“拿手句”,忌生般硬套、胡编乱套。4．扩展句子，并连句成文。写错了尽量用一条杆划掉，不要乱涂保持卷面整洁5．仔细检查文体格式、人称、时态、语态；要点是否遗漏，是否正确；大小写、拼写是否正确;（如字母g.p.q,f等占位）。上下文是否连贯，过渡是否自然，语言是否得体；句子结构是否多样化等。书写上的具体问题①一致问题：Hefindthereare（应改为：is）…/Hedon’t（应改为：doesn’t）knowwherehissonis./Butheneverstop（应改为：stops）./Somecybercentersprovidebadthingsforteenagerswhois（应改为:are）tooyoung./Thefatherare（应改为：is）worriedabouthiskid./Thereis（应改为：are）toomanycybercentersinthestreet.②词语误用：…afatherisfinding（应改为：lookingfor）hissoninthestreet,…./Cybercenterswillmake（应改为：have）badinfluencesonteenagers.③比较级连用：Playingcomputergamestoolongwillmakeoureyesightmoreweaker（应改为：muchweaker或去掉more）.④反身代词拼写错误：Inmyopinion,studentsshouldpreventthemself（应改为：themselves）fromgoingtocybercenters./Asforourself（应改为：ourselves）,whenfeelinglazy,weshouldthinkaboutourparentsandthencheerup.⑤句子出现“双谓语”现象：Thereareevenalotofunder-agechildrenplay（应改为：playing或在play前面加who）computergamesincybercenters.⑥句子之间的衔接：学生句子之间的衔接问题是一个比较大的问题，要解决它就必须让学生掌握下列衔接词：表示时间：now,then,afterwards,soon,fiveminuteslater,beforelong,shortlyafterthat,soonaftersupper,justnow,justthen；表示顺序、动作过程：first,firstly,firstofall,second,secondly,atfirst,atlast,next；表示转折：ontheotherhand,but,yet,however,although,otherwise,inspiteof；表示结果：thus,therefore,so,asaresult,seeingthat,luckily,unfortunately；表示强调：aboveall,indeed,surely,certainly,ofcourse,afterall；表示并列：and,aswellas,andthen；表示递进：besides,what'smore,inaddition,oncemore,whatwasworse；表示解释和说明：thatistosay,namely,forexample,actually,andsoon,suchas,believeitornot,totellyouthetruth,infact,asamatteroffact；表示比较、对比：justlike/as,inthesameway,moreorless,soonerorlater,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand；表示总结：finally,inconclusion,inaword,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,inshort,asyouknow,intheend；需要注意的是，使用上述过渡性词汇时必须依据上下文需要的原则，力求自然，决不可牵强附会，让人感觉别扭。英文书写赏析4.范文学习（Possibleversionlearning）向学生展示范文，并要求学生指出他们认为比较好句子或表达方式(话题针对网络的议论)Aswecanseeinthepicture,afatherisanxiouslylookingforhissonaddictedtoonlinegames.Itseemsthathehasgreattroublefindingtheboybecausethestreetisfullofcybercentersandhehardlyknowsinwhichonehissonisenjoyinggames.Nowadays,moreandmorecybercentersarebeingopenedundercoverofimprovingintelligence.Inreality,theseareplaceswherelargenumbersofteenagersrunintoonline2chatorgamesandcanrarelybepulledout.Inmyopinion,seriousmeasuresshouldbetakentoreducethenumberofcybercentersaswellastohelpteenagersdevelopsomeotherhobbieswhichdothemgood.Onlinechatorgamesandcanrarelybepulledout.Inmyopinion,seriousmeasuresshouldbetakentoreducethenumberofcybercentersaswellastohelpteenagersdevelopsomeotherhobbieswhichdothemgood.备考库话题一（熬夜看球与健康问题）2014年六月，世界杯如期而至，许多学生球迷借假期时间观看球赛，最近网络显示出一球迷因熬夜看球引发猝死事件，引发人们关注的健康和生命话题，请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法，写一篇120词左右的建议。（1）作为中学生，应该早睡早起，熬夜看球影响健康（2）注意饮食和食物的摄入，在你看球赛的时候，不妨准备些食物（3）适当的活动非常有必要，不管多忙一位久坐的人也要花费时间去活动活动（4）可适当发挥HerearemyadviceabouthowtokeepfitwhentheWorldCupisaroundthecorner.Asmiddleschoolstudents，first,weshouldgetenoughsleepduringthenight.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth,especiallywatchingthefootballgame.Thenyoushouldpayattentiontoyourdietormeals.Eventhoughyouhavethetimetoenjoythematch,don’tforgettopreparesomefood,suchaschocolate,juice,breadandpurewater.Third,appropriateactivitiesareneeded,nomatterhowbusyasedentary(久坐的)personis,heshouldtaketimeoutforexercise.Ihopeyouarehealthyandenjoyyourlife.话题二学生安全问题学生的人身安全的英语作文120字左右，关于以下几点内容：1不打架2不独自下河游泳3上学放学途中注意交通安全4遇紧急情况，立即报告老师或警察寻求帮助Nowadaysstudentsshouldbemoreconcernedabouttheirsafety.Firstly,studentsneedtobemorepatienttotheotherssothattheydonotinvolve(参与)themselvesinanyfightingneitherinsidenoroutsideoftheschool.Besides,swimmingaloneintheriverisverydangerous,especiallyforstudents.Accidentsareunpredictable(不确定性)andnoonewillknowwhatwillhappen.What'smore,itisimportantforstudentstobecarefulwhileontheirwaytoandfromschoolbecauseoftheheavytraffic.Lastly,studentcanalwaystelltheirteacherorcontact(联络)thelocalpolicewhenevertheyareinproblem.Onlyinthiswaycantheygethelpassoonaspossible.Takecareofyourselfandleadabetterlife.话题三假期计划暑假将至，要求学生写一篇自己假期的打算，关于以下几点内容：1放松自己2和父母会乡下老家和自己的小伙伴们玩3学生的天职是学习，不能忽略读书4说说自己的弱科，发表个人观点要求：英语作文120字左右，Thesummerholidayiscoming.Iexpectitverymuch,becauseitisthelongestoneamongtheholidays.First,Iwillrelaxmyself.ThistermIworkveryhard,soduringtheholiday,Iwanttohavefun.Myfamilieswillgobacktothehometown.Icanmeetmybestfriendsandjoininvariousactivities.It’sfunnyandwarm.Second,studycan’tbeignored.Afterashortrest,Iwillspendsometimedoingexercises.AndIwilldosomereviewsfornextterm.AsfarasIamconcerned,Mathismyweaksubject,soImustworkhardtoimproveit.Thisismyplanforsummerholiday.