2016考研英语书信作文这里有你努力的方向

凯程考研辅导班，中国最强的考研辅导机构，考研就找凯程考研，学生满意，家长放心，社会认可！凯程考研，考研机构，10年高质量辅导，值得信赖！以学员的前途为已任，为学员提供高效、专业的服务，团队合作,为学员服务，为学员引路。2016考研英语书信作文：这里有你努力的方向！▶0-4分▶第一篇DearElle,IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyougavemehelpattheschoolpartylastSunday.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinyoulendmeyourbeautifuldress,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenappearinginonceayearcampusdancingparty.Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogenerouslyoffereddresstome.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.Yourssincerely,LiMing修改意见：DearElle,Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyougavemehelp(for后面不能加句子，可改为yourhelp)attheschoolpartylastSunday.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinyoulend(改为lending)meyourbeautifuldress,IfearthatIwould(加not)havebeenappearing(appeared)in(改为at)onceayear(可以用一个定语从句来修饰，此处删掉)campusdancingparty(加上,whichisheldonlyonceeveryyear).Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogenerouslyoffered(加the)dresstome.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.Yourssincerely,LiMing2分微点评：第一段的最后一句话中，由于没有写not，使文章的意思完全相反，因此，一定要好好研究一下虚拟语气的用法。另外，for后面是不能加句子的。▶第二篇DearBob,IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyoutohelpmetoimprovemyEnglishduringthesedays.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinteachingmevariousknowledgeincludingthecultureofEnglish,ThenhelpmetopracticeEnglishfacetoface,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenseektothewayoflearningEnglishforalongtimewithoutyourhelp.Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhoarewarmlyandlikelytohelpotherswithoutthepay.凯程考研辅导班，中国最强的考研辅导机构，考研就找凯程考研，学生满意，家长放心，社会认可！凯程考研，考研机构，10年高质量辅导，值得信赖！以学员的前途为已任，为学员提供高效、专业的服务，团队合作,为学员服务，为学员引路。Again，Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.修改意见：DearBob,IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyoutohelpmetoimprovemyEnglishduringthesedays.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinteachingmevariousknowledgeincludingthecultureofEnglish,Then(删除)help(改为helping)metopracticeEnglishfacetoface,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenseek(改为seeking)tothewayoflearningEnglishforalongtimewithoutyourhelp.(删除)Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhoarewarmlyandlikely(likely是很可能的意思)tohelpotherswithoutthepay(itwas…who..是强调句，此句可以改为，itwasyouwhoaresowarmlytohelpothersforfree).Again，Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.4分微点评：写完书信要有yourssincerely和你的名字。英语的句号是.此外，建议你看一下关于强调句和虚拟语气的知识。▶第三篇DearBob,IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforthehelpyougivemeaboutlearningEnglish.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinavarietyofactivitiesincludingholdingfunnydiscussionswithme,teachingmesingingEnglishsongs,playingsimpleEnglishgames,andsoon,IfearthatIwouldhavebeensearchingawronganddifficultwaytolearnEnglishandfeelingunhappytolearnit.EveryoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogivememanyopportunitiestospeakEnglishloudly,beacuseyouknowthatIamsoshytotalkwithothersbyEnglish.YourhelpraisemylevelofproficiencyinEnglish,andnowIenjoygreatestinterstinEnglishbothlisteningandwriting.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.Yourssincerely,LiMing修改意见：DearBob,Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforthehelpyougive(改为gave)meaboutlearningEnglish.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistancein(in后面要加doingsth.)avarietyofactivitiesincluding(删除)holdingfunnydiscussionswithme,teachingmesingingEnglishsongs,(加and)playingsimpleEnglishgames,andsoon(删除),IfearthatIwouldhavebeensearching(改为going)awronganddifficultwaytolearnEnglishandfeelingunhappytolearnit(删除).Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogive(改为gave)memanyopportunitiestospeakEnglishloudly,(改为.because首字母大写)beacuse(拼写错误，改为because)youknowthatIamsoshytotalkwithothersby(改为in)English.Yourhelpraisemylevelofproficiency(中式英语)inEnglish,andnowIenjoy(have)greatest(改为great)interst(拼写错误interest)inEnglishbothlisteningandwriting.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.Yourssincerely,凯程考研辅导班，中国最强的考研辅导机构，考研就找凯程考研，学生满意，家长放心，社会认可！凯程考研，考研机构，10年高质量辅导，值得信赖！以学员的前途为已任，为学员提供高效、专业的服务，团队合作,为学员服务，为学员引路。LiMing3分微点评：标点符号与后面的单词之间空一格。叹号后面的第一个单词首字母也要大写。单词拼写的错误尽量避免。建议你好好学习一下有关虚拟语气的知识点，多读一些英语文章，可有效杜绝中式英语。▶第四篇DearBob,Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhelpintheprocessofmyseekingjobconformedtomypastdecadestraining,afterigraduatedfrompekinguniversity.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinrecommendationtotheprestigiouscompanyinChina.ifearthatiwouldhavebeenonthejobroadbackandforth.ireallyappreciatethispreciousopportunity,whichyouoffered.everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhowrotealettertotheesteemedcompanyboss,regardingasmyqualifications,educationback–ground,andmyspecialskillsatcomputerprogramwhichihaveahugeintrestin.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!pleaseacceptmygratitude.修改意见：DearBob,Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhelpintheprocessofmy(删除my)seekingjobconformedtomypastdecadestraining,afteri(大写)graduatedfrompekinguniversity(两个单词的首字母大写).Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinrecommendation(改为recommending)totheprestigiouscompanyinChina.i(大写)fearthatiwouldhavebeenonthejobroad(中式英语)backandforth.ireallyappreciatethispreciousoppotunity(拼写错误opportunity)whichyouoffered.everyone(首字母大写)agreesthatitwasyouwhowrotealettertotheesteemedcompany(删除