2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习

-1-2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习（1）及答案【甘肃省天水市一中2013模拟】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）（请在答题纸上作答，否则无效）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。LastSaturday,momandIwenttobuyadownjacketformygrandpa.Whenwegottoabigstore,wesawdownjacketsofvarycoloursandstyles.Thereweresomanyofthemthatitspentusquiteawhiletodecidewhichonetobuy.Finally,underthehelpoftheshopassistant,heselectedablackthickjacketforgrandpa.Immediately,wereturnedbackhometoshowittomygrandpa.Seeingit,hewasveryhappyandcouldn’twaittoputon.Butwewereannoyingtofindsomethingwaswrongwiththezipper.Hurriedly,Itookitbacktothestoreandexplainedtheshopassistanttheproblem.Tomysatisfaction,sheisverykindandhelpedmechooseanotheronepatiently.Standinfrontofthemirror,mygrandpalookedathimselfinthenewcoat,smilingcontently.HowdelightedIwas!参考答案May18，2013短文改错：LastSaturday,momandIwenttobuyadownjacketformygrandpa.Whenwegot-2-toabigstore,wesawdownjacketsofvarycoloursandstyles.Thereweresomanyofthemthatitvariousspentusquiteawhiletodecidewhichonetobuy.Finally,underthehelpoftheshopassistant,tookwithheselectedablackthickjacketforgrandpa.Immediately,wereturnedbackhometoshowitwetomygrandpa.Seeingit,hewasveryhappyandcouldn’twaittoput∧on.Butwewereannoyingitannoyedtofindsomethingwaswrongwiththezipper.Hurriedly,Itookitbacktothestoreandexplained∧theshopassistanttheproblem.Tomysatisfaction,sheisverykindandhelpedmechoosetowasanotheronepatiently.Standinfrontofthemirror,mygrandpalookedathimselfinthenewcoat,Standingsmilingcontently.HowdelightedIwas!【命题趋向】短文改错是一项主要测试考生的判断能力，观察能力、纠错能力语言基础知识及语言的综合运用能力。短文改错的趋势：1.改错短文以记叙文和说明文为主。2.文章内容贴近学生生活，没有生僻词汇和复杂的结构，文章简单易懂，错误设置也很简单，多为学生平常作文中常出现的错误。-3-3.短文一般100词左右，错误有9处。4.常见错有三种:错词、多词、缺词。错词占60%左右【错误类型】1.错词2.多词3.缺词4.正错【考点透视】一．错词的热点1．动词—时态语态非谓语；主谓关系。2．联系词—关系代词和关系副词；连词；连接词。3．名词—可数名词、不可数名词，可数名字的单复数变化。4．介词—介词和动词的搭配错误。5．形容词/副词—词类错用。6．冠词—定冠词和不定冠词的错用。7．代词—人称代词；物主代词；反身代词。8．惯用法—固定句型，固定短语。二．多词和缺词热点1.冠词2.介词3.副词4.代词5.关联词6.小品词to【短文改错主要特点】1.语言材料取自于学生的习作。2.短文为贴近学生生活的话题或学生身边事。3.短文难度符合学生水平。4.语言简单易懂。5.没有生僻的语言现象或繁难的语句结构。【例题解析】-4-一．错词1.动词错误：（1）时态和语态、主谓一致的错误。【1】整体时态：*ThenIaskhim“Grandma,howcomeyouhavesomuchlinesonyourhand”全文为故事，故ask改为asked。*Highoverthewater,theydiscoveraholeintheballoon.Theholebecamebiggerandbigger.全篇使用过去时态，故改discover--discovered【2】主谓一致*Havingfunwiththeirfriendsmakethemhappy.动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数形式makes。*Butthemostwonderfulthingaboutjackwerehismusicalability。主语为themostwonderfulthing故此，系词为was*Butnotallinformationaregoodtosociety.主语不可数，所以动词用is。（2.）动词错误：*InAmericanbigcities,thousandssellticketstowatchfootballorbasketballgames.(buy)根据句子意思，数千人买票去看比赛。故sell改为buy。（3）非谓语动词【1】动名词错误*Iamlookingforwardtoseeallofyouagaininthenearfuture.(seeing)解析：to为介词，故此see改为seeing*Notonlyplayfootballmakesusgrowuptallandstrongbutalsogivesusasenseoffairplayandteamspirit.解析：主语应为动名词，故playfootball改为playingfootball【2】现在分词*Theairkeepstheballoonupwasescapingquicklyandtheballoonwascomingdown.解析：分词做定语，故keeps改为keeping-5-*Ifoundasmallhousestandinginafieldwithalightshonefromthesittingroom.解析：withalightshone改为withalightshining。alight和shining为主动关系。【3】不定式*Ijustwanttothankyouforhelpingmebecomingadifferentperson.(become)解析：helpsbdosth故改becoming为become*Hedidnotwantsharethingswithothers.解析：wanttosharesth.want后可跟不定式做宾语。【4】过去分词*Ihavesomerecordsgivingtomeasbirthdaygifts.解析：havesthdone,somerecords和give是被动关系，故改为given。2．连词错误：*Icameintothelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthelight.解析：根据句意，“我看到他们中的一个人走进厨房，并且打开灯。”两个分句子之间是并列关系。故改but为and*Wewouldreturnatnighttohearthathe`dpickedupfromtheradiointheday.解析：考查宾语从句，pickup缺宾语，故改that为what*Theclasseshelpedmeunderstandwhattheworldworks解析：根据句子意思，“这些课程有助于我了解世界是怎么运转的”故改what为how。*Hewassilentforamoment.Soheansweredslowly:“Eachoftheselinesstandsforatrouble”解析：根据句子意思，So改为Then/And3.形容词/副词错用：*Youalwaysgavemespeciallyattention.解析：名词应该被形容词special修饰。*Itisrealagoodchancetohavemetallofyouhere.解析：副词really修饰系词，故改real为really。*Myhometownhastakenonanewlook.Howgreatithaschanged!解析：great修饰动词，故改为：greatly4.冠词错误：-6-*ThisismyfirstvisittoaAmericanfamily.(an)解析：American第一个音标的音素是元音，故用an.*Eachplayermustobeycaptain,whoistheleaderoftheteam.解析：有定语修饰，the特指captain.*Suddenly,IcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacherinthecrowd.解析：固定搭配catchsightof.故此去掉冠词a。5.代词错误：【1】反身代词*Ijustsmiledtomeandthought,…解析：主语和宾语相同，故此me—myself。【2】形容词性物主代词*Besides,theforeignteachershereworkhardandtryhisbesttomaketheactivitieslivelyandinteresting.(his--their)解析：主语是第三人称复数，因此tryone`sbest【3】it/that/them/us*Ithoughtthatwasdulltowatchagameinwhichplayerskickedaballtoeachother.解析：that不可以做形式主语，故改为it。*Itwasaboutnoonwhenwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.前后人称错误。故此改them为us.6.名词单复数和名词的所有格的错误*Shemarkedstrictlyonstudent`sperformance.(students`)解析：根据句意，学生们的表演，故改为students`performance*Physicsisoneofthemostdifficultsubjectforus(subjects)解析：oneof说明后面为复数形式。*WepracticethreetimeseveryweekandoftenwatchfootballmatchonTVtogether.解析：常常看比赛，故此match改为matches.*Ihavenopaperstowriteon.解析：纸不可数，所以改为paper7.介词错误*HeleftShanghaiatacoldnight.-7-解析：一天的部分被修饰时，介词用