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新西方外语学校新西方外语学校-1-【河北省石家庄市2013二模】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分}假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。LiYueandZhangHua-wenttonursinghomeanddidsomevoluntaryworkonMayDay.Attheirarrival,theywerewarmwelcomed.Theypresentedtheelderlypeoplewithflowersandfruits.Then,theystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweptthefloor.Everythingdone,theysitintheyardchattingwiththeelderly.Whenitwastimeforthevolunteertoleave,theelderlythankedthemfortheirkindness.LiYueandZhangHuawereveryhappybecauseofwhattheydidbringjoytoothers.Italsoenrichedourownexperience.Theymadeapromisewhichtheywouldcomeagaintoseetheelderlywhenevertheywerefree.新西方外语学校新西方外语学校-2-【参考答案】改错（10×1=10）：LiYueandZhangHuawentto∧nursinghomeanddidsomevoluntaryworkonMayDay.aAttheirarrival,theywerewarmwelcomed.AndtheypresentedtheelderlypeoplewithflowersOn/Uponwarmlyandfruits.Then,theystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweptthefloor.sweepingEverythingdone,theysitintheyardchattingwiththeelderly.Whenitwastimeforsatthevolunteertoleave,theelderlythankedthemfortheirkindness.LiYueandZhangHuawereveryvolunteershappybecauseofwhattheydidbringjoytoothers.Italsoenrichedourownexperience.broughttheirTheymadeapromisewhichtheywouldcomeagaintoseetheelderlywhenevertheywerefree.that新西方外语学校新西方外语学校-3-短文改错(2010·内江、广安模拟)LastSaturdaywehadapartyathome.Dad'sfriendscome1.________alongwiththeirfamilies.SinceMomwasnotathome,Dad2.________andIhadtoprepareeverything,soitturnedoutsuchamiracle3.________thattheydidmakeit!Everythingwentperfectlyfine.4.________Alotofkidswhocamethatday.Ihadthemostwonderfultime5.________withSteven.Itwasjustamazedtofindsomeonesomuch6.________likeme.Wehadalotofthingsbycommon.Thetimeseemed7.________shorttome,andIwishedwecouldhavehadsomemoretime8.________tocontinuetheconversation.Hopefulwe'regoingon9.________atriptogethernextsummer,andalsosummerafternext.10.________新西方外语学校新西方外语学校-4-答案与解析：1．come→came整篇文章为一般过去时，应把come改为came。2．√3．so→but前后语境为转折关系，应把so改为but。4．they→we根据上文可知作者使用了第一人称，此处指作者和父亲俩人，因此应把they改为we。5．去掉who本句为简单句，去掉who。6．amazed→amazing主语为it，应用amazing作表语，表示“令人惊异的”。7．by→in固定短语have...incommon表示“有……相同之处”。8．去掉hadwish后的宾语从句用虚拟语气，谓语应用情态动词＋动词原形，因此把had去掉。9．Hopeful→Hopefully副词hopefully放在句首，表示“希望”副词作状语修饰整个句子。10．在also后加thenextsummer指明年夏天，thesummerafternext指后年夏天。新西方外语学校新西方外语学校-5-短文改错(2010·郑州质检)Weallknowthathealthyisveryimportanttous.Both1.________studyandworkdependbystrongbodies.Doingsports2.________andgameshelpsuskeepstrongandhealthy.Ifwedonot3.________takeanyexercise,wemayfeeltiredbutgetsickeasily.4.________There'smanydifferentkindsofsportswecandothem，5.________suchasplayingballgames,running,walkingandswim.6.________However,nowwehavetoomuchhomeworktodoin7.________everyday.Wehopethatwe'llbegivinglesshomework8.________andhavemoretimetakepartinsports.Wealsohope9.________thatourschoolcanholdasportsmeetingeveryterm.10.________新西方外语学校新西方外语学校-6-答案与解析：1．healthy→health这里是句子的主语，因此用名词形式。2．by→on/upondependon/upon是固定搭配。3．help→helps这句话的主语是动名词短语doingsportsandgames。动名词短语作主语表示一件事时，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。4．but→andfeeltired和getsick是并列关系，不表示转折，因此将but改为and。5．去掉them这是一个定语从句，从句中作动词do的宾语的关系代词that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。6．swim→swimming应用动名词与前面的running，walking并列，故应用swimming。7．去掉ineveryday可以单独作状语，前面不需要加介词。8．giving→given这里是被动语态，因此用过去分词。9．take前加to此处考查的是havetimetodosth.的结构。10．√新西方外语学校新西方外语学校-7-【海南省海南中学2013高考英语】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Onlineshoppingisincreasingpopularamongpeopleinrecentyears.Somepeoplelikedtobuygoodsonline.AndIdon’tlikeit,becauseonlineshoppingismorereliablethanthetraditionalsale.Firstly,somedishonestmerchantoffercustomerstofalseinformationonline.Secondly,consumerscan’tfeeltheitemsthatisusuallypresentedbymeansofpictures.Thismeanstheitemsdeliveringmaydifferfromwhichconsumersexpect.Asaresult,theymayriskreturningtheitemsattheirownexpense.Thirdly,theitemsmightbedamagedduringdelivery.Inword,onlineshoppingisn’treliableatall.新西方外语学校新西方外语学校-8-【参考答案】短文改错：Onlineshoppingisincreasingpopularamongpeopleinrecentyears.Somepeopleincreasinglylikedtobuygoodsonline.AndIdon’tlikeit,becauseonlineshoppingismorelikeButlessreliablethanthetraditionalsale.Firstly,somedishonestmerchantoffercustomersmerchantstofalseinformationonline.Secondly,consumerscan’tfeeltheitemsthatisusuallyarepresentedbymeansofpictures.Thismeanstheitemsdeliveringmaydifferfromwhichdeliveredwhatconsumersexpect.Asaresult,theymayriskreturningtheitemsattheirownexpense.Thirdly,theitemsmightbedamagedduringdelivery.In∧word,onlineshoppingisn’tareliableatall.新西方外语学校新西方外语学校-9-短文改错(2010·河南五校联考)AfterIfinishedtheschoolthisyear,Ibeganto1.________lookforwork.Nowseveralmonthlater,Istillhadn't2.________foundthejobthatIwasinterested.LastSundaymorning.3.________IreceivedaphonecallfromamancallinghimMr.Smith.4.________Hesaidtomeonthephone,“Ihearyoudoverywellinyour5._______