2014届高考英语一轮复习全方位配套训练人教版必修一Unit1Friendship本单元写作指导

第1页共3页2014届高考英语一轮复习全方位配套训练人教版必修一Unit1Friendship本单元写作指导如何写劝说性建议信【单元写作呈现】MissWanghasreceivedaletterfromXiaoDong.Heisalsoaskingforsomeadvice.ReadthefollowinglettercarefullyandhelpMissWanganswerit.DearMissWang,I’mastudentfromHuzhouSeniorHighSchool.Ihaveaproblem.I’mnotverygoodatcommunicatingwithpeople.AlthoughItrytotalktomyclassmates,Istillfindithardtomakegoodfriendswiththem.SoIfeelquitelonelysometimes.Idowanttochangethissituation,butIdon’tknowhow.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.Yours,XiaoDong【写作分析】本单元的写作要求是根据XiaoDong的一封来信，假借MissWang的口气写一封回信。体裁属于劝说性写作（persuasivewriting）范畴中的“建议信（letterofadvice）”。话题“无法融入班集体及交友的苦恼”是中学生成长过程中经常遇到并感到困惑的问题，题材贴近学生生活，属于开放性的话题，思维空间相对较大，有利于学生自由发挥，运用自己的思维方式去解决问题。这符合书面表达的要求，即能够正确运用英语进行交际。【审题要素】写作时应注意下面几点：1.确定文体：这是一篇应用文，是学生熟悉的书信，写作中应注意书信的常规格式。2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3.主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以应该以第二人称为主。4.内容要点：①问题介绍；②建议一；③建议二；④建议三；⑤我的愿望。5.注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间衔接紧密，语言连贯、通顺。【思路引导】第2页共3页本题要求写一封回信，谋篇布局时应注意以下几个步骤：首先，回应来信中提出的问题并分析原因。其次，针对该问题，提出2～3条合理的建议并说明理由。IdeasWhy1.toaskpeopletheirlikesanddislikes1.tofindclassmateswiththesameinterests2.tojoinindiscussionsandshowinterestinotherpeople’sideas2.togettoknowdifferentpeopleandletthemseeyouarefriendly3....3....最后，写一两句结束语，如：希望我的建议对你有所帮助等等。【语言积累】1.Introduction:I’msorry(that)youarehavingtrouble/difficulty/problemsinmakingfriends.Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou./Hereareafewsuggestions.Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowtheadvicebelow.2.Ideas&Reasons:First(ly),whynot...?Ifyoudothis...Second(ly),youshould/can...Then/Thatway...Third(ly),itwouldbeagoodideaif...Bydoingthis...Lastbutnotleast(最后但并不是最不重要的)...3.Conclusion:Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Astimegoeson,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheabove.Ihopewhat’smentionedabovemightbehelpful...第3页共3页Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice,you’llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.Ibelieve,withyourdetermination,youcanmanagetoovercomethesedifficulties.【参考范文】DearXiaoDong,I’msorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Firstly,whynottakeanactivepartindiscussions?Ifyoudothis,youcanexpressyourownopinions,andatthesametime,learntolistentootherpeople’sviews.Secondly,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmates’likesanddislikes.Thenyoucanfindcommoninterestswiththem.Inthisway,youcangettoknowmoredifferentpeopleandshowthemthatyouarefriendly.Lastbutnotleast,I’malwaysherereadytohelp.WecantakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherandIcanintroduceyoutoothers.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yourssincerely,MissWang通过学习这篇写作指导，你掌握了如何写劝说性建议信的方法了吗？试着写一下吧，然后与范文加以对照，找出其中的不足并加以改进。