2013年8月17日托福写作真题解析

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日托福写作真题解析综合写作:动物为何要play玩耍的原因阅读:三个解释:1,消耗多余能量;2,是一种体育锻炼,提高技能;3,社交行为。听力:1,没有多余能量的动物也玩儿;2,是否玩儿对技能熟练度没影响;3,动物观察表明不需要。独立写作:Wouldyouratheryourschoolspendmoneyonsocialeventsandfacilitiesoronimprovingthecafeteriamenus?Usespecificexamplestosupportyouranswer.SampleResponse1:Ifmyschoolwereconsideringwhethertousemoneyforrecreationalfacilitiesorforimprovingtheschoolcafeteria,Iwouldsuggestthebestuseofthemoneywouldbetoimprovethecafeteriamenus.Notonlywouldimprovingthemenusgeneratemoreincomeforthecafeteria,butitwouldalsohaveamorepositiveimpactontheoverallhealthandwell-beingofthestudentpopulation.Currently,thefoodservedbytheschoolcafeteriaisessentiallyinedible.NeithermyfriendsnorIevereatthecafeterialunchifwecanhelpit.IfIforgettobringmylunch,Ichosetogowithoutlunchforthedaythantoeatwhattheyserveatthecafeteria.Sincehardlyanybodybuysthecafeterialunch,thekitchenfacilitiesandthekitchenstaffarebasicallyawasteofmoneyandresources.Iftheschoolimprovedthecafeteriameals,studentsmightactuallybuylunch.Althoughan(367words)Sampleresponse2Therehasbeenawidespreadconcernontheissueofuniversityeducationinrecentyears.Somepeoplearguethatuniversitiesandcollegesshouldinvestinsocial’meals.Ingeneral,Idisagreewiththisidea.Admittedly,financingsocialactivitiesisamostimportanttaskforuniversitiesandcolleges.Actingasthepublicservice,collegesanduniversitiesshouldalwayscontributetosocialactivitiesbyallmeans.Inaddition,sinceuniversitiesandcollegeshaveadorablehumanresources,suchaswell-educatedstudents,andknowledgeablescholarsandprofessors,theyaremorelikelytohelpsolvesocialproblemsthroughgettinginvolvedinsocialactivities.Forinstance,theHKUniversityhasnewlylaunchedaprogramwhichfinancesHKstudentstoworkasvolunteersinruralareasofmainlandChinaandhelplocaleducationinstitutionstoimprovetheireducationlevel.Thisprogramhasbeenprovedasuccessduetoitssuccessfullyhelpingmorethan10,000studentsfromunprivilegedfamiliesgetanaccesstouniversitiesandcolleges.However,thisfactdoesnotnecessarilymeanthatbetteringthestudents’mealsislessimportantthansupportingsocialactivities.Tobeginwith,betteringstudents’mealscouldhelpbuildupstudents’bodiesandthusmakethemmoreconcentrateontheirstudies.Havingnutritiousfoodisakeyfactorforyoungstersincludingthosestudyingincollegesanduniversities.ArecentresearchcarriedoutbytheChineseAcademyofSocialScienceshasproventhatalargemajorityofcollegestudentshavetheexperienceofbeingdistractedfromacademicactivitiesduetothelackofnutrition.Andnearlyhalfoftherespondentsarenotsatisfiedabouttheirdailydietandhopecollegesand’meals.TakemycousinTonyasanexample.Heisatallandbulkycollegestudentwhousedtocomplainthatthelackofnutritionofhismealshadadverselyaffectedhisacademicperformance.Lastsemester,hiscollegefinallydecidedtoinvestintheimprovementofthestudents’mealsandallthestudents,includingTony,havebenefitedfromthispolicysofar.Withoutthispolicy,thestudentsmaynotbeabletoconcentrateontheirstudy.Collegesanduniversities’supportingsocialactivitiesmaynotcontributetothestudents’benefitsasmuchastheirfinancingthestudents’meals.Furthermore,withtheimprovementofstudents’meals,studentsfromunprivilegedfamiliescaneasefromfinancialpressure.Thisisbecausenotallstudentscouldaffordpropermeals.MediacoveragehasrevealedthatnearlyonethirdofcollegestudentinChinacannotgetenoughfinancialsupportfromtheirparents.Inaddition,scholarshipsandpublicfundsaresolimitedthatonlyasmallportionofstudentscouldbenefitfromthem.Asaresult,manystudentschoosetosavemoneybyeatinglower-pricedfastfoodinsteadofnutritiousmeals.Manyofthemalsotakepart-timejobstosupportthemselves.Withsubsidiesofmealsfromcollegesanduniversities,studentscouldbelargelyassuredfromthefinancialpressureandthusconcentrateontheiracademicresearch.Ontheotherhand,universities’financingsocialactivitiesmaypossess

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