雅思写作7.0课程讲义.

12010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲：刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍GeneralIntroduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task1andTask2A类和G类的区别：task2议论文task1A：图表作文G：书信评分：以Task2为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：VocabularyandSentenceStructure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments,IdeasandEvidence(论证，论点和论据)CommunicativeQuality(交流质量)VocabularyandSentenceStructure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词Theproblembecomesworsebythepooreffectswemade.Theproblemwascompoundedduetotheineffectivemeasureswehadtaken.Theyclaimthatsportsleadtocompetitionratherthancooperationisonlyanincorrectargument.Theclaimthatsportsleadtocompetitionratherthancooperationisonlyalameargument.PeoplefaceviolenceandcrimesonTVandfilmseveryday.PeoplearebombardedbyviolenceandcrimesonTVandfilmseveryday.Thekindofgrowthmayleadtoverybadresults.Thekindofgrowthmayleadtodireconsequences.consequence:far-reaching（深远的）,profound（深刻的）,adverse（不利的）,catastrophic（灾难的）,damaging（破坏性的）,devastating（破坏性的）,dire（可怕的）,disastrous（灾难的）,fatal（致命的）,tragic（悲惨的）,severe（严重的）,22.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothersenjoythesamerightforcareeradvancementasfathersdo.Mothersarejustasentitledtocareeradvancementasfathers.Mothersareempoweredtocareeradvancementasfathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句：Chinaisthelargestdevelopingcountryandisenjoyingrapideconomicgrowth.Asaresult,inthestreetsofmajorcitiesinChina,therearethousandsofvehiclesofallkinds.Asthelargestdevelopingcountry,Chinaisenjoyingrapideconomicgrowth,theevidenceofwhichcanbeseeninallmajorcitieswhosestreetsareteemingwiththousandsofvehiclesofallkinds.倒装句：Youngpeoplearesoimpulsiveandeasilyinfluencedthattheyareconstantlytrickedbyadvertisementinallformsofmedia.Impulsiveandeasilyinfluencedasyoungpeopleare,theyareconstantlytrickedbyadvertisementinallformsofmedia.伴随状语：Itiscommonnowforkidstospendsixandahalfdaysinschooleachweekbecausetheyhavetositthroughoneextraclassafteranother.Itiscommonforkidstospendsixandahalfdaysinschooleachweek,sittingthroughoneextraclassafteranother.设问句：Evenifmachinetranslationwereabletoeradicateallthelanguagebarriersbetweenpeoples,learningforeignlanguagesstillmakesense.Evenifmachinetranslationwereabletoeradicateallthelanguagebarriersbetweenpeople,wouldtherebenopointinlearningforeignlanguages?Bynomeans.Arguments,IdeasandEvidence(论证，论点和论据)Somepeoplethinkthatinordertoimprovethequalityofeducation,highschoolstudentsshouldbeencouragedtoevaluateandcriticizetheirteachers,butotherpeoplemaintainthatsuchevaluationandcriticismmaycauselossofrespectforteachersanddiscipline.Whatdoyouthink?有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。请给出你的看法？学生评价老师的理由：1.通过评估，老师可以知道学生究竟想些什么、需要什么Ifstudentsarenotallowedtoevaluateorcriticizetheteachers,itishardfortheteacherstofindoutwhatthestudentsthinkorwhattheyneed.2.评价和批评本身也是一种有效的交流方式Evaluationandcriticismarethemselveseffectiveformsofcommunication3.听取学生的真实意见和想法，教师自己也能够受益匪浅Teacherswillbenefitalotwhentheirmindsareopentotheideasandhonestopinionsoftheyoungsters.高分作文两个注意事项：1．论据尽可能新颖：论据新颖，文字才更有可能新颖2．新颖应该让位于准确性：确保文字没有错误3CommunicativeQuality(交流质量)1．高分作文，在于文字和论据精彩，不在于结构另类2．雅思作文类型固定，写作模式也固定，高分作文亦然三：解决问题的方案1VocabularyandSentenceStructure(词汇与句子结构)总结大量经典搭配，交替使用2Arguments,IdeasandEvidence(论证，论点和论据)范文讲解附带论据整理3CommunicativeQuality(交流质量)给出固定写作思路，不求变革四：课程总览八节课程第一节：整体介绍第二至第七节：各类议论文的高分写作思路1.该类议论文的写作思路点拨2.范文讲解3.课后作业及范文第八节：A类：图表作文高分写作思路G类：书信类作文高分写作思路第二节观点类雅思作文高分写作思路范例：Nowadayscomputersarewidelyusedineducation.Asaresult,somepeoplethinkteachersnolongerplayanimportantroleinclassrooms.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Somepeoplethinkthatmachinetranslationishighlydevelopedintoday’ssociety.Thereforeitisnotnecessaryforchildrentolearnaforeignlanguage.What’syouropinion?Universityshouldacceptequalnumbersofmaleandfemalestudentsineverysubject.Doyouagreeordisagree?Somepeoplethinkthatitistheresponsibilityofthegovernmenttoensurethatpeopleinthecountryhavehealthylifestyles.Otherpeoplebelievethatindividualsshouldbefreetodecidetheirownlifestyles.Pleasegiveyouropinion.标志性文字：Doyouagreeordisagree?Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?What’syouropinion?Pleasegiveyourownopinion.4重点在于：就题目讨论的问题，给出自己的观点结构构思：1.传统的写作思路:第一段亮出观点，然后分段给出不同的论据，最后一段收尾，总结全文，同时再次重申自己的观点2.高分作文，在于文字（词汇、句型、观点）方面制造亮点，不在于在结构方面铤而走险尝试新的方式范文讲解1：Nowadayspeoplecanusecomputerstotalk,learnandcommunicatewithoutleavinghome.Thereisadangerthatitwillcausemoreisolationandalackofcommunicationamongpeople.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?写作思路：1.观点：电脑不会妨碍人和人之间的交流小提示：科技类的文章，尽量选择正观点，讲述科技为人类做出的贡献为佳2.论据:(1).不能狭隘地理解交流和隔阂，在电脑屏幕前花很多的时间不等于缺乏与世隔绝，Communicationandisolationmustnotbedefinedinanarrowsense.Alienationofpeopleisnotcausedbyhowlittletheytalkormeeteachotherbutbylackofinterestinourfellowcreaturesortheworldatlarge.隔绝、疏远：isolationalienation(2).计算机让大家有了共同的兴趣，促进了人们之间的共鸣common共同的Computershelptopreventisolationbybringingeverypossiblefieldofinterestontothescreen.Youcanbroadenyourinterestsandenrichyourlifebyaccessingwhateverandwhoeveryouareinterestedin.(3).不同的时代有不同的交流方式，电脑就是当今时代的交流工具之一Ourmodeofcommunicationisforeverchangingandcomputersrepresentthelatestwayofcommunication.远古时代：primitiveprimevaltimesshoutsandgestures呐喊和手势后来：文字和语言spokenandwrittenlan