8医学英语论文常见错误分析

医学英语论文常见错误分析—主要摘自唐清里、陆亚一主编《医学期刊摘要英译错误例析》第一节误用动词语态第二节句子结构混乱第三节名词的可数与不可数第四节词与词组搭配不当第五节构词错误与书写不当第六节概念不清和逻辑混乱第七节重复和省略不当第八节标点符号使用不当第一节误用动词语态将不及物动词误认为及物将及物动词误认为不及物不注意语态的基本含义不了解某些特定结构对语态的要求不及物动词的误用…theaxiscylinderinthecentralpartofthecancerwerecompletelydisappeared.…theaxiscylinderinthecentralpartofthecancercompletelydisappeared.axiscylinder神经轴索不及物动词的误用Thecompoundthrombosisisresultedinpredominantendothelialdamages.Thecompoundthrombosisresultedinpredominantendothelialdamage.compoundthrombosis复合的血栓形成及物动词的误用…9diedand2dischargedagainstadvice.…9diedand2weredischargedagainstadvice.…9diedand2lefthospitalagainstadvice.dischargevt.卸下,放出,清偿(债务),履行(义务),解雇,开(炮),放(枪),射(箭)Itisfoundthat12ofthe20caseswerecomplicatedwithotherbonediseases…Acutehepaticnecrosismoreoftencomplicateshepatitisintheelderly.(肝炎患者并发肝坏死)Itisfoundthat12ofthe20caseswerecomplicatedbyotherbonediseases…不注意两种语态的意义差别The3rdgroupwerefedwithgeneraldietandgaveinjectionsofalbuminasingroup2.The3rdgroupwasfedonageneraldietandgiventhesameinjectionsofalbuminasusedingroup2.Albumin白蛋白Amongthe89specimenyieldedpositivecultures78hadaerobicgrowth,54anaerobicgrowthand43mixedgrowth.Amongthe89specimensyieldingpositivecultures,78hadaerobic,54hadanaerobic,and43hadmixedgrowths.Attheendofoperation,100casesundergonecontinuousepiduralorcaudalanesthesiawereinjectedwith2mgofmorphinein10mlnormalsalinebeforeremovalofthecatheter.Attheendofoperation,100patientsundergoingcontinuousepiduralorcaudalanesthesiawereinjectedwith2mgofmorphinein10mlofnormalsalinebeforeremovalofthecatheter.epiduralorcaudal硬膜或骶管Catheter导管HV(Hyperventilation)lastedfor15～60minwasused9times.HV(Hyperventilation)lastingfor15～60minwasused9times.Hyperventilation过度通气Therewere70malesand10femaleswithageranged21～71years.Therewere70malesand10femaleswithagesranging21～71years.Indealingwithtotallaryngectomyonpatientssufferedfromlaryngealcarcinoma,thelaryngologistshavelongbeenconfrontedwithaproblemofthepossibilityinreconstructingalarynx.Indealingwithtotallaryngectomyonpatientssufferingfromlaryngealcarcinoma,thelaryngologistshavelongbeenconfrontedwithaproblemofthepossibilityinreconstructingalarynx.Moreover,4casesofurethralstrictureandfistulaformationresultedbyvarioussurgicalproceduresweretreatedsuccessfullybythisnewoperation.Moreover,4casesofurethralstrictureandfistulaformationresultingfromvarioussurgicalproceduresweretreatedsuccessfullybythisnewoperation.urethralstrictureandfistulaformation尿道狭窄和瘘管形成13.3%severenecrosisinCpreventinggroupof30rabbitscontrastssharplywith46.9%inthecontrolledgroupof32rabbits,…Theseverenecrosisrateof13.3%invitaminC-preventedgroupof30rabbitscontrastssharplywiththatof46.9%inthecontrolgroupof32rabbits,…Basingonthefact…amethodofspectrophotofluorometricdeterminationwastherebyderivedtoavoidinterferenceinthepresenceofnorethisterone.Basedonthefact…amethodofspectrophotofluorometricdeterminationwastherebyderivedtoavoidinterferencewiththepresenceofnorethisterone.spectrophotofluorometricdetermination荧光分光光度测定interferencewith干扰norethisterone炔诺酮某些特定结构对语态的要求Aretrospectiveanalysisrevealedthatmistakeswereinexcusablein18cases,evitablein38,andverydifficulttobeavoidedin34.Aretrospectiveanalysisrevealedthatmistakeswereinexcusablein18cases,evitablein38,andverydifficulttoavoidin34.Inexcusable不可饶恕Difficult,easyThevesselswiththemagneticstirreriseasytobesterilized.Thevesselswiththemagneticstirreriseasytosterilize.Thevesselswiththemagneticstirrer磁性搅拌瓶Worth，worthy…thisnewselectiveportosomaticshuntisworthyofperforminginthetreatmentofportalhypertensionwithbleeding.…thisnewselectiveportosomaticshuntisworthyofbeingperformedinthetreatmentofportalhypertensionwithbleeding.…worthytobeperformed……worthperforming…selectiveportosomaticshunt选择性门体静脉分流术portalhypertension门静脉高压第二节句子结构混乱句子成分缺失结构松散成分使用不当词性选用不当并列成分不相等结构失调句子成分缺失Ofthese9“early”cases,1patientdiedpostoperatively;3diedtwoyearslater;theother5livingandwellmorethan5yearsaftertheoperation.Ofthese9“early”cases,1patientdiedpostoperatively;3diedtwoyearslater;theother5werelivingandwellmorethan5yearsaftertheoperation.AllthevaluesofBAO,MAO,andPAOdecreasedaftertheoperationandsignificantlybelowthevaluesof45controlpatients.AllthevaluesofBAO,MAO,andPAOdecreasedaftertheoperationandweresignificantlylowerthanthosein45controlpatients.Vitalcapacity:42.2%,maximumbreathingcapacity:36%,ventilatoryreserve:75.3%.Vitalcapacitywas42.2%,maximumbreathingcapacity36.0%,andventilatoryreserve75.3%.★Vitalcapacity,maximumbreathingcapacity,andventilatoryreservewere42.2%,36.0%and75.3%respectively.肺活量最大通气量通气储备量ResultssuggestedthattherewasacloserelationshipbetweenhumanandavianinfluenzavirusesandmighthelptoexplainwhyseveralnewsubtypesofhumaninfluenzaviruswerefirstdetectedinChinaorhervicinity.Theresultssuggestedthattherewasacloserelationshipbetweenhumanandavianinfluenzaviruses,whichmighthelptoexplainwhyseveralnewsubtypesofhumaninfluenzaviruswerefirstdetectedinChinaorhervicinity.Therewereacuterejectionsat3rdday,andbecamesevereat7thdayingroupI.Acuterejectionsoccurr