2015年12月大学英语四级真题

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1/16作文:WhereThereIsaWillThereIsaWay1.坚强的意志是成功的重要保证.2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命,3.学生也是这样,不刻苦学习,终究不会成为有用之才用.【参考范文】NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWill“Wherethereisawill,thereisway”isanoldproverbwhichalmosteveryoneknows,butnotallunderstanditsowell.Actually,itmeansthatifyouarereallyresolvedtodosomething,nomatterhowdifficultitmightbe,nevergiveup.Infact,strongwillisakindofgoodqualitywhichsuccessfulpeopleshouldown.Agreatmanisalwaysonewhohasafirmresolutionandaninflexiblespirit.Onewillneversucceedallhislifewithoutafirmwilltogetthefinalvictory.Asarule,greattasksareaccomplishedbymenofstrongwill.Forexample,Dr.SunYatsen,thefounderoftheRepublicofChina,settheChinesepeoplefreefromtheManchurianrulethroughalongperiodofhardstruggle.Manyofhisattemptsfailedandmanyofhisfollowerswerekilled,buthehadaninflexiblespiritandstucktohiscause.Finally,hemadetherevolutionof1911asuccess.Thesameistrueofmeninallwalksoflife.Itisquiteobviousthatthereisnothingdifficultintheworld,ifyoumakeupyourmindtodoit,youwillcertainlyaccomplishyourend.Thatstandstoreason.Soasforstudentslikeus,weshouldhaveagoodattitudetowardsfailure.Facingwithdifficultiesandfailures,keepheadsupandnevergiveup.Besides,weshouldmakefullpreparation,thoughstrongwillhelpusovercomethedifficulties,itisnotforpersonwhohasnopreparation.PartIWriting【标准版】NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillNothingrunssmoothlyinourlife.Toachievethingssuccessfully,astrongwillisessential.LifeislikeaMarathon.Manypeoplecan’tgettotheterminal.Thisisnotbecausetheyarelackofvitalitybutbecausetheirwillofsuccessisnotstrongenough.Totakequittingsmokingasanexample,someregarditasapieceofcake.Theymakeuptheirmindstoquititinthemorning,butintheeveningtheyfeelthatthesmellofcigarettesistempting.Theirthroatsaresore,theirmouthsarethirsty,andtheirhandsareshaking.Afterthepainfulmentalstruggle,theytellthemselvesthat“Onecigaretteisenough.Justtakeone,andthenextdayIwillquitit.”Bydoingthis,theysurrendertotheirweakwill.Intheend,theyhavequittedsmoking“ahundredtimes”,butinnotimetheysucceed.Justlikequittingsmoking,nothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill.Tobesuccessfulinone’slife,astrongwillmeansthatyouknowwhereyougoandyouwillpersistontheroadyouchoose.Undoubtedlysuccessbelongstothosewhoovercometheirweakwillandwhohanginthereuntilthelastminute.【文章点评】本文属于话题类作文,只看题目“NothingSucceedswithoutastrongwill”考生会觉2/16得比较抽象,难以下手.细看题目说明中给出了提示,要求考生结合戒烟屡次不成功的幽默引语对该话题进行分析阐述.总体来说,这是一篇“中等偏上”的考生作文.本文先点题指出“坚强意志”的重要性;第二段从反面举例阐述——具体描写了意志不坚定者的心理活动,阐述为什么会戒烟失败;最后从戒烟延伸到生活中的其他事情,并复述坚强意志的内涵,点题收尾.总体上来看,文章思路清晰,采用了生动的比喻和形象的心理描写,语言流畅,用语地道.但一些重复表达(如第二段和第三段中的weakwill)显得单调,可用shakyones,weak-willedpersons,thestrong-willed等灵活表达.在备考中,多积累不同表达,相信会写出更生动的文章.在论述上,叙述略显罗嗦.第二段心理描写过多,虽然流畅生动,但却使这篇考场作文超过了规定字数,反而成为失分点,这一点要引以为戒.【高分版】NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillAswehavereadfromabove,quitting-smokingseemseasy,butinrealityitisrarelyachieved.Thereissomethingprovokingandinterestinginthisparadox,justbecausesworddoesnotwearthestoneasdrippingwaterdoes.Theabilitytodosomethingoverandoveragaininashorttimemayimplyitseasiness,butinalongrun,alifetimemaybe,thingsturnouttobequitetheopposite.Also,asisoftenthecase,onemayhaveobtainedallthetoolsandopportunitiestoachievesomething,butintheendtheystillfailduetothewillshortage.Sohowcouldweavoidthedilemma?Hereistheprimeconditionofsuccess:willandperseverance.Concentrateyouenergy,thoughtandmindexclusivelyonthebusinessinwhichyouareengaged,hangoninthereandbepatient,for,asEmersonputit,noonecancheatyououtofyourultimatesuccessbutyourself.【文章点评】本次四级作文探讨的话题是成功与毅力之间的关系,话题不算新,一般考生对此都比较熟悉,所以对考生来说难度不大.写好这篇作文,需要抓住两点,一是紧跟题目要求,即对上述幽默性的话语做出评论,二是在评论的基础上要亮出自己的观点.范文开头第一句即一针见血地对上述幽默性话语做出总结性概括,即戒烟看似简单实则很难,随后指出该话语本质上是一个悖论,并且以一个“水滴石穿”的俗语来指出困难所在,这句也是本文的一个亮点,体现作者在西方俗语方面丰富的知识储备.第二段作者则进一步深入分析该话语,指出做某事在短期看来很容易,长期来看,恰恰相反,人们做事的结果也因此总是失败,原因则在最后一句点出:缺乏毅力.第三段作者进一步给出了自己的观点,告诉大家如何避免陷入这种两难境地:首要条件即需要坚强的意志和长期的坚持.最后再以艾默生的一句名言“没人能够骗你远离你最终的成功,除非你自己承认失败”来总结全文,切中主题,铿锵有力.PartIIReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)1.Apersonofintegritynotonlysetshighmoralandethicalstandardsbutalso_______.A)stickstothemintheirdailylifeB)makesthemknowntoothersC)understandstheirtruevaluesD)seesthatothersalsofollowthem【答案】A)stickstothemintheirdailylife【解析】第一题的答案就在全文第一句.关键词是notonly….Butalso….,关键句是The3/16keytointegrityisconsistency--notonlysettinghighpersonalstandardsforoneself(honesty,responsibility,respectforothers,fairness)butalsolivinguptothosestandardseachday.这里的liveupto和选项里的stickto属于同义替换.2.Whatroledoesintegrityplayinpersonalandprofessionalrelationships?A)IthelpstocreateteamspiritB)ItfacilitatescommunicationC)ItisthebasisofmutualtrustD)Itinspiresmutualrespect【答案】C)Itisthebasisofmutualtrust【解析】关键词是personalandprofessional,关键句是Trustisessentialinanyimportantrelationship,whetherpersonalorprofessional.Whocantrustsomeonewhoisdishonestorunfair?Thus,integritymustbeoneofourmostimportantgoals.结合紧接着的问句,我们很容易锁定trust这个选项.3.whymustwelearntoidentifytheriskswearegoingtotake?A.Toensurewemakeresponsiblechoices.B.Toavoidbeingoverwhelmedbystress.C.sothatwedon’tbreakanyrules.D.sothatwedon’trunintotrouble.【答案】A.Toensurewemakeresponsiblechoices.【解析】关键词是identifytherisks,关键句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