77TEM_4_Note-Writing专四便条写作

NOTE-WRITING便条写作DEFINITIONANOTEissimilartoashortletter,buttheformofthenoteissimplerandthelanguageusedisoftennotsoformal.便条的特点在于内容简短，大多是临时性的询问、留言、通知、要求等。与正规书信相比，便条的语言更为口语化。有急事需告诉别人而又不能面谈时，就可以写便条，如请假条、留言条等。FORMATTime时间Salutation称呼Message正文信息Signature署名专四作文要求：格式正确，语言得体，时间为10分钟，单词为50-60个单词评分往往从格式、内容、语言、字数这四方面来考虑。TEM4便条评分标准1.格式(3分)包括日期、称呼和结尾三部分，各占1分。1)日期(1分)正确写法：便条的日期通常写在右上角（第一排），一般采用月-日-年的顺序，如果具体到了星期几，则星期放在月份之前，如Sat.September25,201212个月份的简写Jan.Feb.Mar.Apr.MayJuneJulyAug.Sept.Oct.Nov.Dec.星期的简写Mon.Tues.Wed.Thus.Fri.Sat.Sun.2012年12月31日的写法December31,2012December31th,2012Dec.31,2012Dec.31th,2012月份和日期之间有一个空格简写的月份后面要打一点日期可以用基数词或者序数词日期和月份之间有一个逗号2)称呼(1分)称呼是指写便条人对收便条人的称谓，一般都以Dear开头，写在日期下一行、顶格写。TEM4试卷中一般对写便条人与收便条人之间的关系作了提示。称呼时，一般只需在其名字前加Dear即可，如DearSusan，DearTom。若此人有头衔(socialtitle)，称呼时，便要保留其头衔，例如Dr.Pierce，要称DearDr.Pierce，不称DearPierce。如果另一方是以Mrs.Wang或Mr.Wang出现，称呼时也只需在其前加Dear便可，即称DearMrs.Wang或DearMr.Wang，若只称DearWang则视为不妥。当对方为亲属时，在Dear后面加上表示亲属关系大写的字眼即可，如DearGrandpa，DearAunt，称呼后面要用逗号。3)结尾(1分)结尾包括结尾套语和签名。(1)结尾套语的位置一般是在正文最后一行的下面靠右的位置。开头字母要大写，末尾要用逗号(Yours,)结尾套语措辞的变化按照不同的关系而定。现分述如下：①致不熟悉的人，宜用较庄重的套语，如Yourssincerely,Sincerelyyours,或Sincerely,等。②对上级、长者，除了可用上述较庄重的套语，也可用Yoursrespectfully或Respectfullyyours,③对一般朋友或熟人可用①中提到的较庄重的套语，也可用Yours等较为随便的套语。(2)签名即写便条人署名，位于结尾套语下，偏右。有时TEM4指定了写便条人的名字，签名时应采用那个名字。若无指定名字，考生也不宜用自己的真名。TEM4便条评分标准2.内容与语言(6分)1)情景描述2)具体的言语行为表达3)首句需用自己正确的语言表达，完全抄提示扣1分4)语言表达较差(语法和拼写错误)，扣1－3分3.字数要求:50－60字(80,40)2008WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Jane,yourclassmate,isthinkingofsubscribingtoanEnglish-languagenewspaper.Andyouwouldliketorecommendonetoher.Writeanote,tellingherwhichnewspaperitisanddescribingtwofeaturesofthepaper.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.3分Jane：IhearthatyouarethinkingsubscribingtoanEnglish-languagenewspaper.IthinkChinaDailyisverygood.Youcanhavealookatit.It’sonlymysuggestion,youcanconsideritcarefullyanddecideyourself.Mary,4.228分Apr.22,2012DearJane,IheardthatyouaresubscribingtoanEnglishlanguagepaper.Istronglyrecommendthat21Centurybeagoodchoice.Foronething,itslanguageisveryidiomaticandwecanimproveourEnglishbyreadingit.Foranother,itcoversawiderangeofcontents,politicalnews,sportsnews,andevensomejokes.Itshouldbeusefultobroadenourmind.Manystudentshavesaiditworth.Yours,Mary2006请求加入索要信息请求2007婉拒加入游戏俱乐部婉拒2008给同学订阅一份英语报纸提建议建议2009给同学推荐一份兼职建议2010给同学举办party提出意见建议2011邀请同学去你的家乡度假邀请I.请求Request明天有朋友来重庆，你想领她到解放碑玩，可是明天该你到学生会值班，写个便条给你的同学，请她代你值班。Apr.18,2012DearLily,Iamwonderingwhetherit’sconvenientforyoutotakethedutyformeintheStudentUniontomorrow请求事件becauseoneofmyfriendshascometoChongqingandIwanttoshowheraroundJiefangbei.Shecanonlystaywithmeintomorrowafternoon,butIhappentobeonduty.请求的原因Soitwouldbeverykindofyoutoagreetotakemyturn.Manythanks.致谢Yours,Mary请求便条注意1.请求的事件2.请求的原因3.深深的感谢/进一步的行为REQUEST请求允许请求帮助请求做事（要求与暗示）Pleasegivemeafewmoredays.Domeafavor,willyou?Let’sgotothebookstorethisafternoon.Iwanttohavealookatyourbook.MayIhavealookatyourdictionary?Wouldyoudomeafavor?Iwishyoucould…Can/Couldyoulendmeyourdictionary?WouldyoumindifIopenthewindow?Wouldyoubesokindasto…?Iwouldliketoaskyoutocleantheroom.CouldItroubleyoutosendthisbookforme?IwonderifIcouldopenthewindow.Iwonderifyouwouldtellme…?Theroomisinamess.Wehaven’tcleaneditforseveraldays.Youaremakingabignoise.Woulditbepossibletohaveatalkwithyou?Ifitisnottootroublesome,could/wouldyou…?Ifeelabithungrynow.Whattimeisit?Ihopethisrequestwillnottroubleyoutoomuch.II.Invitation邀请类邀请函一般应该包括以下内容：诚挚邀请对方参加某一活动；概括介绍的内容和安排；再次表示诚意。May5,2008DearMrs.Lin,WeshouldbeverymuchpleasedifyouandMr.LinwoulddinewithusonWednesdayat7o’clock(诚挚邀请对方参加晚宴).Itwillbequiteasmallparty,aswehaveonlyaskedMr.andMrs.AndersonandMissChangLing,allclosefriendsofours(简单介绍晚宴内容与参加者).Wetrustyouwillbeabletogiveusthepleasureofyourcompany（再次表示诚意）.Trulyyours,Tom表示接受的便条至少会包括以下内容：感谢；确切表示会赴宴。Wearedelightedtoaccept…Itiswithgreatpleasure…Wearesincerelyhappytojoinyou…常用表达方式：ACCEPTTHEINVITATIONApril18,2009DearAmelia,It’ssokindofyoutoinvitemetothedinnerparty.感谢Iwouldliketocome.IwillgototheplaceafterIfinishmyworkatabout5p.m.thisevening.确切表示会去ThankyouagainforyourwonderfulhospitalityandIamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.再次感谢邀请Yours,Fiona拒绝邀请1.首先表示感谢2.说明拒绝的原因3.再次表示歉意和祝福DECLINETHEINVITATIONApril18,2009DearAmelia,It’ssokindofyoutoinvitemetothedinnerparty.IwouldliketobutIhaveameetingtoattendthisevening.PleasegivemybestregardstothemallandIhopemyabsencewillnotcauseyouanyseriousinconvenience.Havefun.Yours,Fiona拒绝邀请的常用句型：1）Ishallhavetosaynotoyourkindinvitation…2)Veryregretfully,…3)Unfortunately,itwillbeimpossible…4)Becauseof…,wefindwecannot…III.COMPLAINT抱怨一年一度的高考在即，考生处在紧张的复习阶段，但周围工地轰隆隆的施工噪音总持续到半夜。假设你是居委会工作人员，想和施工队领导反映情况，但领导不在，所以要留张便条。April18,2012DearSirorMadam,I’mwritingtobringyourattentiontothenoisefromyourconstructionsite.抱怨的语言Itistimeforhighschoolstudentstopreparefortheircollegeentranceexamination.Butyournoisyworkingalwayslaststillmidnight,whichhasdisturbedtheirstudyandtheirnormalrest.抱怨的缘由Therefore,itwoul