2019高考英语-短文改错

李仕才ProofReadingTeachingObjectives1）Toobtaintheabilityofidentifyingerrorsinanessayandrevisingthediscouse.(语篇)识别错误并正确校正语篇的能力2）Toacquirethecomprehensive(综合的)applicationoftheEnglishknowledge.综合运用英语知识的能力2012---2016年NMET短文改错题测试点的分布情况：年份名词动词adj.&代词介词冠词连词adv.2012年11121122013年13211112014年13302102015年13211112016年1403011合计51487555考情分析考题要求假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.允许修改只10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。1.Icangotohomenow.2.Ilikeplayingpiano.3.IamfondatEnglish.theWrongword（错词）∧Missingword（缺词）ofUnnecessaryWord（多词）短文改错格式Howtodoit？Anyskills？Anyrules？“四不改”原则①标点符号不改.②大小写不改.③词序错误不改.④单词拼写不改.“五改动”原则①忠实于原文原则(不可改变原文的意思)②一对一原则(一错一词)③错误以改动最少为原则⑤虚词以添加或者删除为原则④实词以改变形式为原则ⅠverbⅡnounⅢadj&advⅣpronounⅤprepositionⅥart.&conj.专项训练1.Sofar,hemadealivingbypickingupwastes.2.Youarenotpermittotakethemout.haspermitted动词3.Anyonecanborrowbooksifheorshewish.wishes4.Seeingfromthetopofthemountain,thecitylooksbeautiful.Seen动词小结：1.注意时态2.注意语态3.注意主谓一致4.注意非谓语动词1.YourknowledgesofGreececanhelpthewholeclass.2.Whenyoufail,youshouldneverlosehearts.______heartknowledge名词名词小结1.名词单、复数形式的用法；2.注意固定搭配中名词的用法。1.Thebadnewsmadeusfeelsadly.2.Thechildrenlearntoreadandwrite;theyplaygamesasgood.3.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.形容词和副词sadwellwell形容词和副词小结１．修饰名词做定语，系动词后做表语,以及部分动词后做宾语补足语要用形容词；２．修饰动词，形容词，副词，或整个句子用副词；３．注意形近词组的辨析1.Knowingisonething;doingisother.2.Ialsoenjoyedthedayswhenwespenttogether.代词another(that/which/或去掉)3.OnthefirstdayofCamp,youcameuptomyselfwhileIwassittingalone.me1.人称代词主格和宾格的使用．2.反身代词oneself的使用．3.指示代词it，this,these等的使用.4.疑问代词，连接代词，关系代词（who,whom,which,that,whose,what)的使用．代词小结1.Don’tgetintothehabitatsmoking.2.Thefilmstarisverypopularwiththemainland.介词ofin主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。如：at+时间点;in+时间段;on+具体的某日或某日的早、午、晚等at3o’clockintheafternoononMay1stonthemorningofMay13th介词小结1.Ataverybeginning,Ichooseaplayandactors.2.Ononehandthedressisexpensive;onanotherhand,itisofpoorquality._the__the冠词1.Thoughitwascold,buthewentoutwithoutahat.2.Helikessports,butIlikemusic.3.Hurryup,andyou’llbelateforschool.__while__or＼连词１.冠词a,an和the的用法．２.并列连词but，and，or,so和从属连词although的用法．冠词连词小结动词形，名词数还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟介词短语常常出冠词连词常关顾六口诀三步法四不改五改动六句诀DrillsAtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesittingroom.JimwascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmastreelightswasshinningbrightly.Jimandhisparentssinginganddancinghappily.Correction1AtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting____On_________chose_______tall_______it动词形（时态）介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟room.JimwascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmastreelightswasshinningbrightly.Jimandhisparentssinginganddancinghappily.＼_______lights_____________beautiful_____andwere∧were动词形（语态)还要注意形和副动词形（缺be动词）名词数冠词连词常光顾动词形（主谓一致）_____Self-assessmentWhathaveyoulearntfromthislesson?小结做短文改错应采取三步法四不改五改动六句诀短文改错口诀动词形,名词数,还要注意形和副;非谓语,细辩别,代词格,细领悟;介词短语常常考,习惯用法要记住;句子成分多分析,逻辑错误须关注,冠词连词常光顾.HomeworkWhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcouldalsohaveit.OnedayIsawasecond-handbicycle,thatwasonlyonehundredyuan.Iaskedmyfatherthemoney.Buthesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.Heshouldfindtheotherhalfmyself.SoIwenttosellnewspapersaftertheschool.MyfatherwaspleasedifIshowedhimthemoneyamonthafter.Hegivesmetheotherfifty.YoucanimaginehowmuchhappyIwaswhenIrodetoschoolonmyownbicycle.