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好作文？•1、覆盖了所有的要点。•2、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。（词汇、句型高级和语法多样化）•3、有效的使用了语句间的过渡性词汇，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。如何做到覆盖全部要点？书面表达五步法书面表达审连查抄列1.审：审文体、审要求、审人称、审时态文体：记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文要求：（见试题）人称：第一、二、三人称时态：过去时或者一般现在时...2.列：列要点（关键词——动词或动词词组）3.连：(1)扩词成句。在书写时，若无把握的情况下尽量用简单的句子、单词或短语表达。(2)组句成文（开头结尾、增添细节、行文连贯、高级结构），并呈现常用承接、过渡词语。思路清晰，逻辑严密。4.查：复查全文（1）体裁格式是否正确；（2）内容要点是否全面；（3）全文的行文是否通顺、连贯。（4）句子的时态、语态是否正确；（5）主谓是否一致；（6）标点符号与大小写有无错误；（7）字数是否相符等。注重书写美观,保持卷面整洁,提高印象分。(1)切忌书写不清、涂涂抹抹；(2)保持单词之间的距离基本一致,一般为一个大写字母A的间隙；(3)错词只用一条横线或斜线划掉；(4)每段前空格约4个字母的位置。5.抄如何使词汇、句型高级化？一、适当的运用一些词组、习语来代替单个单词或平淡的句子，以增加文采，丰富语句的表现力。你将很容易找到我的家•Youwillfindmyhouseeasily.----------------------------SVO时态：一般将来时。S+Will+V原形1、Youwillfindmyhouseeasily.havenodifficultyindoingsthYou’llhavenotrouble/difficulty(in)findingmyhouse.她很喜欢运动。Shelikessportsverymuch.--------------------SVO1.Befondof2.beinto3.beinterestedin4.enjoy•Sheisfondofsports.•Sheisintosports.•Sheisinterestedinsports.•Sheenjoyssports.我们将尽力学好英语。TrytodosthWe’lltrytolearnEnglishwell.doeverythingsbcantodosthmakeeveryefforttodosth.sparenoefforttodosth.Trytodosth1.Ihopetoreceiveyourlettersoon.2.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Becauseof/Thanksto/Owingtothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词、短语，选择使用其他恰当的同义词、词组来代替。HelearnsEnglishwell,andhelearnsmathswell,too.dowellinbegoodat三、学会套用句型•1.Hewasverytired.Hecouldn’twalkanyfarther.too…toHewastootiredtowalkanyfarther.2.BecausesomanypeoplecommunicateinEnglisheveryday,itwillbecomemoreandmoreimportanttohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglish.•WithsomanypeoplecommunicatinginEnglisheveryday,itwillbecomemoreandmoreimportanttohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglish.With+宾语+宾语补足语（doing/done/adj/todo/adv…）1.Becausehehasalotofhomeworktodo,hedoesn’twatchTV.2.Mr.licameintotheclassroom,hehasabookinhishand.3.Thefarmersleeps,andhiswindowisopen.With+宾语+宾语补足语（doing/done/adj/todo/adv…）Withalotofhomeworktodo,withabookinhishandwithhiswindowopen.3.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakegreatprogress.Studyhardandyou’llmakegreatprogress.祈使句+and/or+陈述句（陈述句要用将来时态）4.IwaslateforschoolbecauseIgotuplate.Thereasonwhy…isthatThereasonwhyIwaslateforschoolwasthatIgotuplate.5.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.•Itis/was…that…（强调句）Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.6.Youwouldcherishitmoreonlyafteryoulostit.Only+状语+部分倒装Onlyafteryoulostitwouldyoucherishitmore.四、通过合句，将意义相关的句子用一定的连接方式连接起来，或通过收缩，去掉一些多余的成分、或无意义的重复，避免冗长累赘，松散无力，以增强句子的连贯性，达到更好的表达效果。Theschoolissurroundedbymanygreentrees.Itlooksverybeautiful.Theschoolsurroundedbymanygreentreeslooksverybeautiful.Theschoollooksverybeautifulwithmanygreentreessurroundingit.有效地使用过渡性词汇。表起始firstofall,accordingto，inmyopinion，asfarasIamconcerned，asfarasIknow，asforme表递进besides，what’smore，what’sworse，furthermore，inadditionto表并列also，aswell(as)，or，either...or，neither...nor，notonly...butalso，both...and表因果therefore，thanksto，asaresult(of)，becauseof，dueto，owingto表强调aboveall，indeed，surely,certainly，ofcourse，atleast，obviously表解释thatistosay，inotherwords，believeitornot，totellyouthetruth表比较justas，justlike,inthesameway，similarly，instead表空间ontheleft/right，totheleft/rightof，ononesideof...ontheothersideof...，atthefoot/top/endof，表时间atfirst,inthebeginning,next,then,later，soon,afterwards,meanwhile,intheend,atlast，finally，forthefirsttime,uptonow,beforelong，fromthenon，soonerorlater表转折或对比however，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，inspiteof,afterall，infact，asamatteroffact表列举foronething...andforanother(thing);first(ly)，second(ly)，third(ly)，finally/lastbutnotleast表举例forexample/instance,take...forexample,suchas,asfollows,andsoon表总结inshort，inaword，inconclusion,inbrief，generallyspeaking，tosumup，allinall完成句子1._______________(据我所知),everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.2._______________________(就拿北京来说吧).Itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.3._________________(总之),let’sgreeteverydaywithasmile.Inshort/InawordTakeBeijingforexampleAsfarasIknow4.Therearemanyadvantagesofsmiling.Itcan_______makeushappy,______pleaseothers.5.LiMingusedtobeahealthyboy,___overayearago,hegotintothehabitofeatingalotofjunkfoodandsnacks._______,hespentalotoftimelyingonthesofa,watchingTV,anddidlittleexercise.___________,heputonsomuchweightthathefounditdifficulttoclimbthestairs.AsaresultnotonlybutalsobutBesides6.Ithinkitisakindorwin-winactivity.____________,Icanhelptakecareofthechildren._______________,IcanimprovemyEnglish,makemorefriends,andenrichmylifeduringthesummervacation.ForanotherthingForonething7.,Cellphoneispopularamongteenagers.,Cellphonemakesitpossibleforteenagerstotalkwiththeirfamily.,Cellphonemakesteenagersfeelcool.Asweallknow,Ontheotherhand,IthinktheInternetishelpfulnotharmfulassomeoneelsethinks.WeallknowthattheInternetisveryimportantinourdailylife.OntheInternet,wecanreadnewsandgetmuchinformation.WecansendE-mailsormakephonecallstoourfamily.Andwecanattendthenetschool,readmanybooksandeventeachourselvesEnglish.…InmyopinionratherthanAsweallknowisplayingamoreandmoreimportantroleUsebetterphrasestoreplacethecommonones.PracticeImprovethepassagenotonlybutalsoBesides•但