在我们国家,野生动物的数量在不断减少。其中一些甚至濒临灭绝。原因如下:人们滥伐树木以修建房屋,导致一些动物没有了栖息地;而且,农民滥用农药,威胁一些动物的生命。除此之外,为了赚钱,人们滥杀珍惜野生动物。依我看,该是时候我们采取措施改变现状了。我们不能滥砍滥伐,而应多种植树木以保护动物的生活环境。同时,应该建立更多的自然保护区。我相信只要我们立即采取行动,我们就可以跟动物和谐并存。生活会更加美好。Paraone:ThepresentsituationInourcountry,thenumberofwildanimalsisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.Someofthemareevendyingout.一二段之间的过渡句:☻☻Thereasonsareasfollows.Manyfactorscontributeto/leadto/resultintheproblem.para.onethenumberofwildanimalsbedyingoutInourcountry,thenumberofwildanimalsisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.Someofthemareevendyingout.Thereasonsareasfollows:或者Manyfactorscontributeto/leadto/resultintheproblem.过渡句:reasons或factorsParaTwo:reasonsforthephenomenon①砍树以修房屋:导致没有栖息地Sentences:◎◎cutdowntrees★tobuildhouses★forbuilding●lead/causesb/sthtodo●leadto/resultindoingPeoplehavebeencuttingdowntreestobuildhouses/forbuilding.Thiscausesmanyanimalstolosetheirhabitats.▲havenoplacetolivein▲loseone’shabitatsPeoplehavebeencuttingdowntreesforbuilding,causingmanyanimalstolosetheirhabitatscausingmanyanimalstohavenoplacetolivein.②滥用农药害死一些动物♡♡Sentences:◎usetoomuchpesticidev.◎theabuseofpesticiden.Farmersusetoomuchpesticideandthiscausessomeanimalstodie./andthisendangersthelivesofsomeanimals.☆killsomeanimals☆causesomeanimalstodie☆endangerthelivesofsomeanimalsFarmersusetoomuchpesticide,◆whichendangersthelivesofsomeanimals.causingsomeanimalstodie.Thefarmers’abuseofpesticidecausessomeanimalstodie.endangersthelivesofsomeanimals.☎☎③滥杀珍稀野生动物为了赚钱Sentences:killrarewildanimalstomakemoneymakeafortunemakehugeprofitsSomepeoplehavebeenkillingrarewildanimalstomakehugeprofits.罗列观点常用词:@@@@@Tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finallyTostartwith,next,inaddition/additionally,finallyMostimportantofall,moreover,lastbutnotleastForonething,foranotherOntheonehand,ontheotherhandpara.2reasons①cutdowntrees★tobuildhouses★forbuilding●lead/causesb/sthtodo●leadto/resultindoing▲havenoplacetolivein▲loseone’shabitats②◎usetoomuchpesticide◎theabuseofpesticide☆killsomeanimals☆causesomeanimalstodie☆endangerthelivesofsomeanimals③killrarewildanimalstomakehugeprofitsmakemoneyTostartwith,peoplehavebeencuttingdowntreesforbuilding,leadingtosomeanimalslosingtheirhabitats.Besides,farmersusetoomuchpesticide,whichendangersthelivesofsomeanimals.Inaddition,tomakemoney,somepeoplehavebeenkillingrarewildanimals.保护环境,爱护动物,不去伤害它们:③建立更多的自然保护区Sentences:✪✪✪protectanimalsandtheenvironmenttheyliveinsetupmorenature/naturalreservesPara.3measuresandconclusionoranappeal不要乱砍滥伐:stopcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermissionWeshouldstopcuttingdowntrees.Weshouldprotectanimalsandtheenvironmenttheylivein.Weshouldsetupmorenaturereserves组句成文:Weshouldn’tcutdowntreeswithoutpermission.Instead,wearesupposedtoplantmoretreestoprotecttheanimals’livingconditions.Atthesametime,morenaturereservesareexpectedtobesetup.anappeal☻☻Ibelieveaslongaswetakeactionimmediately,wewillliveinharmonywithanimalsandourlifewillbecomebetter.Inthiswaywecanmakeourplanetabetterplaceforbothhumanbeingsandanimals.二三段过渡句:☞☞Therefore,it’stimewetookmeasurestochangethesituation.Thus,immediatemeasuresmustbetakentochangethesituation.②protectanimalsandtheenvironmenttheylivein③setupmorenature/naturalreserve①stopcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermissionPara.3measuresandconclusionoranappeal过渡句inmyopiniontakemeasures/steps/actiontodosth.呼吁aslongasinharmonywithlifeInmyopinion,it’stimewetookimmediatemeasurestochangethesituation.Weshouldn’tcutdowntreeswithoutpermission.Instead,wearesupposedtoplantmoretreestoprotecttheanimals’livingconditions.Atthesametime,morenaturereservesareexpectedtobesetup.Ibelieveaslongaswetakeactionimmediately,wewillliveinharmonywithanimalsandlifewillbecomebetter.Deareditor,Inourcountry,thenumberofwildanimalsisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.Someofthemareevendyingout.Thereasonsareasfollows:Tostartwith,peoplehavebeencuttingdowntreesforbuilding,causingsomeanimalstolosetheirhabitats.Besides,farmersusetoomuchpesticide,whichendangersthelivesofsomeanimals.Inaddition,tomakemoney,somepeoplehavebeenkillingrarewildanimals.Inmyopinion,it’stimewetookimmediatemeasurestochangethesituation.Weshouldn’tcutdowntreeswithoutpermission.Instead,wearesupposedtoplantmoretreestoprotecttheanimals’livingconditions.Atthesametime,morenaturereservesareexpectedtobesetup.Ibelieveaslongaswetakeactionimmediately,wewillliveinharmonywithanimalsandlifewillbecomebetter.