假定你是李华,你美国的网友Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.祝贺获奖;2.肯定成就与努力;3.约时间在网上切磋棋艺。祝贺信DearPeter,IamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationstoyouonyourwinningfirstprizeintheChineseChessNetworkChallenges.Asyourfriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowgladIamaboutyoursuccess.“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits(功夫不负有心人)”Fortheseyears,you'veshowngreatinterestinChineseChessandKeptonpracticingiteveryday.NotonlyhaveyoureadmanybooksaboutChinesechessstrategy,butalsoyouhavecompetedinallkindsofChineseChesscontest.Finally,yousucceededinwinningtheonlinecompetition!Atlast,IhopetoplayChinesechesswithyouonline.Pleasetellmewhattimesuitsyoubest.Yours,LiHua•祝贺信CongratulationLetter•祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函。通常包括以下几个方面的内容:说明祝贺事由,表达热烈、诚挚的祝贺;围绕祝贺事件表述贺喜内容;表达美好祝福。•写作三步走:•说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺-•展开评论事件、赞扬收信人-•再次表达良好祝愿•Tips:•在写作主要内容的时候,可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。Dear______,①Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______(祝贺事由).②Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson______.③Youmustbe______.④AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.⑤______(所取得的成绩)isquiteexcitingnews!⑥Iknowthisissurelyowingto______(被祝贺人过去的努力).⑦Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyour______(被祝贺人的优点).⑧Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou______(咨询对方何时有空).⑨Ihope______(表达自己的愿望).⑩Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.Yourssincerely,LiMingDear,Goodnewstravelsfast!Itwasdelightfulformetohearthat.Pleaseacceptmysincerecongratulationstoyour.Ihavebeenwatchingyourprogresswithadmirationalltheyears,andIknowmorethananyoneelsehowmucheffortyouhaveputin.Nowyouprovetomeamaturedandwell-roundedineveryrespect.Judgingfromyourcurrentsuccess/achievement,Iamconfidentthatinthefuture.Mayalltheyearsaheadfulfillyourdreams!Yourssincerely,LiMingDear,Congratulationsonyour.IknowhowhardyouhavebeenworkingandIamveryproudofyouforyourachievement.Iunderstandforsurethatitisyourhardwork/yourexcellentabilitythatleadsyoutothecurrentsuccess.Thisnewposition,ontheotherhand,addsanewdimensiontoyourlifeandisboundto.What’smore,Ialsobelievethat.Mayallgoesbeautifullyinyournewpost!Yourssincerely,LiMing1.Congratulations,allofusfeelproudofyourremarkableachievements!祝贺你,我们都为您所取得的巨大成就感到骄傲。2.Iamsopleasedandhappytohearthat...听到……我真的非常高兴。3.Iwritetocongratulateyouupon...我写信来祝贺你……。4.Iofferyoumywarmestcongratulationsonyour...对于你的……我表示热烈的祝贺。5.Wearejustasproudascanbeofyouandsendourcongratulations.我们为你感到由衷的自豪!祝贺你!开头常用句式6.Pleaseacceptmysincere/warmcongratulationson…7.Itwasagreatpleasuretosendyoumycongratulationson…8.Youdon’tknowhowexcitedandhappywefeltatthenewsof…9.Iamreallyhappytolearnthatyouhavebeenelected…10.ItiswithgreatpleasurethatIhearofyoursuccess.11.Iwasverydelightedtohearthenewsthatyou…12.Allowmetoconveymycongratulationsonyourpromotionto…结尾常用句式6.Iwishyoustillfurthersuccess!预祝你取得更大的成功。7.Welookforwardtobraggingaboutyouintheyearsahead.我们希望在未来的岁月中能骄傲地谈起你。8.Iextendmybestwishesforyoursuccess.衷心祝愿你成功。9.Wishyougoodluck!10.Wewishtoshareyourhonorandjoy.11.Iwishyousuccessandfulfillmentintheyearsahead.开头练习:表示祝贺1.假如你是李华,得知你的美国朋友Peter被Harvard(哈佛大学)录取,请你给他写一封邮件,要点包括:1.表示祝贺并且备受鼓舞;DearPeter,Ihavereceivedyoure-mail.IamveryexcitedandinspiredbythegoodnewsthatyouhavebeenadmittedintoHarvard.I'dliketooffermycongratulationstoyouonyourgreatsucessandIalsohopetoenterafamousuniversityjustlikeyou.1.你的成功给我极大的鼓励,我决心更加努力地学习,争取获得同样的机会。Yoursuccesshasgreatlyencouragedmetostudyharder.IhopethatI’llhavethesamechanceasyounowhave.Ihavereceivedyoure-mail.IwasverydelightedtohearthenewsthatyouhavebeenadmittedintoHarvard.Pleaseacceptmysincere/warmcongratulationsonyourgreatsuccess.Itisyoursuccessthathasgreatlyencouraged/inspiredmetostudyharder.IhopethatI'llhavethesamechanceasyounowhave.正文练习:展开评论事件、赞扬收信人1.假如你是李华,得知你的美国朋友Peter被Harvard(哈佛大学)录取,请你给他写一封邮件,要点包括:1.表示祝贺并且备受鼓舞;2.介绍自己目前的学习情况;3.请教学习方法1)我现在忙于准备大学入学考试。I'mbusyingpreparingfortheCollegeEntranceExamination.2)我每天刻苦学习而且必须熬夜去做许多试卷。Istudyhardeverydayandhavetostayuplatetodopilesofpapers.3)我一直感到压力很大因为我的付出似乎没有得到回报,这让我感到很沮丧和疲惫。Iamalwaysfeelingstressedoutbecausemyeffortsdon'tseemtopayoff,whichmakesmefrustratedandexhauted.4)你能给我一些建议吗?Willyoubekindenoughtogivemesomeadvice?串联成句:适当加一些过度词NowIwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyself.Asyouknow,I'mbusyingpreparingfortheCollegeEntranceExamination.DayafterdayIstudyhardandhavetostayuplatetodopilesofpapers.However,Iamalwaysfeelingstressedoutbecausemyeffortsdon'tseemtopayoff,whichmakesmefrustratedandexhauted.Willyoubekindenoughtogivemesomeadvice?DearPeter,Ihavereceivedyoure-mail.IamveryexcitedandinspiredbythegoodnewsthatyouhavebeenadmittedintoHarvard.I'dliketooffermycongratulationstoyouonyourgreatsucessandIalsohopetoenterafamousuniversityjustlikeyou.NowIwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyself.Asyouknow,I'mbusyingpreparingfortheCollegeEntranceExamination.DayafterdayIstudyhardandhavetostayuplatetodopilesofpapers.However,Iamalwaysfeelingstressedoutbecausemyeffortsdon'tseemtopayoff,whichmakesmefrustratedandexhauted.Willyoubekindenoughtogivemesomeadvice?Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldwritebacktomesoon.Wishyouallthebest.Yours,LIHua