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峡山二中朱建君RevisionForClass2,SeniorThreeSuggestionsformakingourwritingoutstanding:1.advancedwordsandphrases;(高级词汇原则)2.differentabundantsentencepatterns;(不同的句式结构)3.correctconjunctions.(正确的连词，即要注意上下文的联系)what’smore,besides,inaddition,onthecontrary,otherwise,inconclusion,furthermore,moreover,forinstance,onthewhole,asfollows1.ItisimportanttolearnEnglishwell.2.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇ItisofgreatimportancetolearnEnglishwell.Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.二、特殊句式倒装句&强调句1.Thereliesavillageatthefootofthemountain.Atthefootofthemountainliesavillage.2.Ihopeyoucancomeifpossible.(强调谓语)3.Thisyoungboyhelpedtheoldgranny.(强调主语)Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.ProofreadingOurparentsconcernabouteverythingthatwehavedone,whichmakeusannoyed.Theyalwaysworryabouteverythingandeverybody,suchasourstudy,entertainmentandfriends.Asisoftenthecase,theysometimeslookourdiarywithoutourpermit.“It’sgoodforyou.”explaintheyeverytimeweaskthemwhy.Childrenasweare,therearesomebasicpersonalrights,whichshouldbeprotected.Howtogetonwellwithourparents?It’saproblem.However,thereisnoreasonforustobeagainsttoourparentsjustbecauseofit.Onlywhenwetryourbesttocommunicatewiththemcanwemakeeachofusunderstand.It’syoursincerityandpatiencecancalltheirrespectonyou.Whynothaveatry?_______makes_____read___________permission＼∧that20Somecopiesfromourhomework:Copy:Timeflies!Theentranceexaminationisaroundthecorner.ButhoweverdifficultiesIfacewith.Ineverhaveanysenseofdanger.It’ssoterrible.Thewonderfulworldoutsideattractsmeallthetime.OnlyIcandoisthatkeepmyselffromdoinguselessthings,whichisawasteoftimeandenergy,suchasplayinginsparetime,surfingtheInternetandfallinginlovewithothers.It’shightimetotakeaction.Timerunsfast.Imustholdtimeinmyhandtokeepupwithtime.Asforme,timeisvalueless.Imustlearntothroweverythingexceptstudyawayandcontrolmyself.Besides,IalsoneedtosaveextratimetostudyasmuchasIcan.Ibelievemyself.OnlyinthiswaycanIrealizemydreamintime.22(范艳琨)Somewonderfulsentencesfromourhomework:1.Tobehonest,amother’sloveislikeacircle,ithasnobeginningandending.(徐晓伟)2.Anotherbigchangeisthatourhousingconditionshavebeengreatlyimproved.(朱少杰)3.Inaddition,thequestionsofwastinggofrombadtoworse.(郭培祥)4.Ifyoutrytowalkasoftenaspossible,you’llhaveahealthierheart.(于珊)5.Thereisnousingregrettingwhentimehaspassedby.(张瑞雪)6.WhatIonlyneedistoworkhard.Thereisnochoicebuttoworkhard.(吴美玲)7.Imustlearntothroweverythingexceptstudy.OnlyinthiswaycanIrealizemydreamintime.(范艳琨)8.However,aslongasweusetheInternetcorrectly,wearesuretogetbenefitfromit.(张安勇)Tobehonest______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onlyinthiswayaslongas_______________________联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100-120之间。Polishit.作文改编：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,ithaschangedalotsince1978③andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.书面表达：Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦and⑧whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducation.⑩Mayyouenjoyyourstayherethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.Homework:Makeanadvertisementofaplaceofinterestforatravelagencyinanewspaper,whichforeignersandChinesecanreadsothatitcanbringmorebusinessforthetravelagency.Wehavelearnedthathowtomakeacomsitionmorewonderful.NowI‘llgiveyouachancetopractise.位于湖南的张家界是我们的国家森林公园。国庆节期间我和父母到那里去旅行。起初我们打算乘飞机，但后来由于费用过高我们改变了主意，坐火车去。我们必须爬山，我想放弃但父亲决心已定并说服我，我下决心并最终爬上山顶。第二天，我们听说有美丽的山谷。所以我们决定去享受山谷的美景，在那里到处有急流和瀑布。然后，我们来到一片大森林，看见一些特别的植物并从中了解到很多。Writing:Zhangjiajie,afamousnationalforestparkinourcountry,islocatedinHunanprovince.DuringtheNationalDayholiday,I,togetherwithmyparents,madeourtripthere.Atfirst,weplann