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雅思英语●写作篇PPT编写：胡宇斌CMATrainingCentre雅思写作简介：●全程时间:2小时55分●写作时间:60分Task120分图表作文(150字以上)Task240分议论文(250字以上)●雅思评分:9分制(留学需要6分以上,最好达到7分)●分项式评分:根据具体评分细则给分TaskOrganizationIdeaLanguage图表题写作WSkillsRITING摸底测试WritingTask-1WSkillsritingYoushouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Thepiechartbelowshowsthemainreasonswhyagriculturallandbecomeslessproductive.Thetableshowsthesecausesaffectedthreeregionsoftheworldduringthe1990s.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Writeatleast150words.图表题写作WSkillsRITING概论图表5种类型表格Table线图(直线/曲线)Linegraph柱状图(条形图)Barchart饼图Piechart流程图ProcessdiagramLearnthenewwhilereviewingtheold雅思图表题3个要求第一客观性不能有想象成分，总结归纳要符合逻辑。第二准确性数据要求精确（不抄错），可以合理目测（大概数值）。第三详尽性4类特征数据一定介绍：最大值（maximum），最小值（minimum），交叉点（intersection），变化趋势（trend）。P215图表题3种段落第一开头段第二主体段第三结尾段开头段写作WSkillsRITING第一节开头段：1-2句，转述原题转述原题3法：①添加单词②删除单词③替换单词（注意：改动不需过多，3-4处，即可）原题一句变两句，两句变一句。全部改写，要保证语法、句型的正确性。开头段的时态：永远一般现在时开头段：1-2句，转述原题练习1Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Thefollowinggraphsindicatetheproportionoftheeffectoftreatmentintwotypesofcancerinwomen.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.Keyto练习1【原文】Thefollowinggraphsindicatetheproportionoftheeffectoftreatmentintwotypesofcancerinwomen.【改写】Thetwolinegraphs(given)illustrate/show/demonstrate/outline/describethepercentageoftheinfluenceoftreatmentintwokinds/categoriesofcancerinfemales.开头段：1-2句，转述原题练习2Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Thechartsbelowshowtheresultsofasurveyofadulteducation.Thefirstchartshowsthereasonswhyadultsdecidetostudy.Thepiechartshowshowpeoplethinkthecostsofadulteducationshouldbeshared.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.Keyto练习2【原文】Thechartsbelowshowtheresultsofasurveyofadulteducation.Thefirstchartshowsthereasonswhyadultsdecidetostudy.Thepiechartshowshowpeoplethinkthecostsofadulteducationshouldbeshared.【改写】Thetwochartsillustratetheresults(outcomes/solutions)ofasurvey(questionnaire)ofadulteducation.Thebarchartdescribesthereasonswhyadultsdecidetostudywhilethepiechartoutlinespeople’sopinionaboutthecostsharesofadulteducation.开头段：1-2句，转述原题练习3Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Thetableshowstheresultsofasurveyin2004whichaskedundergraduateandpostgraduatestudentsofaUKuniversitywhethertheyweresatisfiedwiththefacilitiesattheuniversity.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.Keyto练习3【原文】Thetableshowstheresultsofasurveyin2004whichaskedundergraduateandpostgraduatestudentsofaUKuniversitywhethertheyweresatisfiedwiththefacilitiesattheuniversity.【改写】Thediagramgivesabreakdown（明细表）aboutdifferentattitudesamongundergraduateandpostgraduatestudentstowardsequipmentsofaUKcollegeintheyear2004.开头段写作常见可替换同义词P220下面实战练习P217-222WSkillsRITING写作技巧主体段写作WSkillsRITING第二节图表题3种段落第一开头段第二主体段第三结尾段主体段：1+X句，第一句总体概括，X句具体介绍数字。第一句作用：①总括变化趋势(有时间变化的图，如linegraph和barchart的升降、波动等）；或②包含哪几种数据（没时间变化的图，如piechart和table的组成部分）。X句数据介绍3要点：①按照顺序介绍数据②4类关键信息：最大-最小-变化-交叉（主要是线图）还有：起点-拐点-终点信息也值得注意③可作取舍，不必面面俱到，视时间而定注意：主体段时态由题目的时间决定。主体段模版:Accordingtothefirstbar,(由图可见)….Tobemorespecifically(具体说来),….Atfirst,….Then,….Afterthat,….Fromthispointonwards,….Finally,….1.Asshowninthe…,Ascanbeseenfromthe…,Itismanifestfromthe…that…2.Tobemorespecific,=Morespecifically,Tobemoreexact,=Moreexactly,Tobemoreprecise,=Moreprecisely,表示时间推移的短语（熟记）：Atfirst,(=initially)Then,Afterthat,Fromthispointonwards,Finally(=eventually)…表示趋势的短语-动词（熟记）：数字趋势动词1.上升趋势:rise,goup,2.下降趋势:fall,sink,drop,dip,reduce,godown3.保持不变:remainsteady,showno/littlechange4.波动:fluctuate趋势动词替换1.上升趋势:increase,grow,climb,ascend(jump,surge,soar,shootup)2.下降趋势:decline,decrease,descend(plunge,slump)3.保持不变:leveloff/outat,hoverat,stabilizeat,reachaplateauat表示趋势的短语-形容词（熟记）：1.速度快:sharp,rapid,dramatic,drastic2.速度慢:gradual,slow,steady,gentle3.幅度大:significant,substantial,marked4.幅度小:slight,modest,moderate注意:①以上加ly均为副词。②表示分别的副词是respectively。表示趋势的短语-其它（熟记）：1.最高点:peakat,reachthehighestpointat,2.最低点:bottomoutat,reachthebottomat,thelowestpointat3.达到多少（量）:reach,arriveat,amountto,hit,standat4.占多少（比例）:accountfor,makeup,occupy,represent,constitute5.预测（会有）多少:predict,expect,forecast句型为：Aispredicted/expected/forecastedtoreach…这些你用起来得心应手吗？WSkillsriting1-表示经历了某种变化see/witness/experience2-表示由…组成bemadeupof/becomposed/comprisedofconsistof/comprise（主动态）3-对比和类比Similarly,/Likewise,…Unlike…,…Incomparison,…In/Bycontrast,…4-大约多少about/around/roughly/approximatelyjustover/justunder结尾段写作WSkillsRITING第三节三大注意：P236①题目里如果有总数（total）不要在主体段介绍，可放在结尾段，比较清楚。如没有total，就直接总结上文。（例题11P224）②最后一句结论没有必要过于深刻。可据常理找出图表呈现的规律。（例题11/12P224-225）③如出现两图,一般以图之间的比较得出结论。（例题14P235）Fromthetwocharts,itisclearthatelectricityisinhigherdemandinwinterinEngland.或如P177两个柱状图的结尾，分别总结：图一：30年间美国结婚率比离婚率高；图二：1970和2000年结婚人数百分比最大。(Key-P238)注意：结尾段的时态由题目的时间决定。结论摸版：Therefore,itcanbeclearlyseenfromthe(table)that…1-开头段：改写writingtask-1。2-结尾段：分析两幅图，写一个合理结论。WSkillsRITING图表写作技巧验收参考答案：【开头段】Thepiechartshowsthattherearefourmaincausesoffarmlandbecomingdegradedintheworldtoday.Thesecausesaffecteddifferentregionsdifferentlyinthe1990s.【结尾段】Overall,itisclearthatEuropesufferedmorefromfarmlanddegradationthantheotherregions,(结论1：欧洲农田退化最严重）andthemaincausesweredeforestationandover-cu