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Judgethetypeoftopic判断题目类型•题目1:Somepeoplearguethatthegovernmentshoulddiscourageprivatecarownershipwhileotherpeoplesuggestthattheycanchooseanymeansoftravelastheylike.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.•题目2:Moreandmorepeopletravelbycartoday,insteadofusingpublictransport.Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegativedevelopment?•题目3:Somepeoplearguethatcarusersshouldrelyonpublictransportratherthantheirowncars.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?•题目4:Moreandmorepeopletravelbycartoday,insteadofusingpublictransport.Howdoesitaffectindividualsandsociety?Whatmeasuresshouldbetakentosolvethisproblem?•题目5:Moreandmorepeopletravelbycartoday,insteadofusingpublictransport.Whyhasthishappened?Howdoesitaffectindividualsandsociety?Task2作文第2步思考观点•雅思作文大致可分为两种题材:非教育类和教育类非教育类:经济(效率;收益和成本)科技(进步;缺陷)社会(价值和传统观念;环境;社会关系)个人(生活方式;基本权利;健康快乐;行为)教育类:身体健康学习能力社会能力和实践经验(与人相处、调节情绪等)工作能力(动手能力、价值观和道德观、遵守法律等)Task2作文第3步写开头段讨论类文章的开头段:Sentence1:background(generalstatement)文章的背景(一般的介绍)Sentence2:rephrasethetopic(thesisstatement)改写题目(点明论题)Sentence3:personalopinionorbriefdescriptionofthemainbody个人立场或者中间主题部分的简单描述(注:考生在考场上可以按照实际情况,自由掌握句子的数量,未必一定要写三句。)如何写背景句三种方法:•方法1:强调某个话题一直是争论的焦点,或者强调某个长期存在的现象。e.g.Therehaslongbeencontroversyaboutthenegativeeffectoftravellingbycar.e.g.Travellingdifferentplaceshaslongbeenaleisureactivityonvacation.•方法2:讨论类题目之所以热门,往往因为最近某个事情的发生,可以就此事情进行描述。e.g.Somesocietieshaveseentheerosion(削弱)ofsometraditionalvaluesrecently.e.g.(Asanincreasingnumberofstudentsstudyoverseas),itisinterestingtoanalysethevalueoffinishingauniversityeducationinaforeigncountry.•方法3:定义某个具体的对象或者人,包括特点、功能等。e.g.Themaindutyofgovernmentistoimprovecitizens’livingstandard.(适合题目:讨论政府使用资源)e.g.Theuniversityisnormallyconsideredasaplaceforincreasingknowledgeandconductingacademicstudies.(适合题目:讨论大学的职能)如何改写题目•注意:考生切记照抄题目,或者只修改少数几个单词•改写题目的两种主要方法:1.使用替换词2.改写句子结构(加入并列结构或者从句)Practice•Example1:Nowadaysitismoreconvenientandeasierforpeopletotraveltoothercountries.Isitdevelopmentapositiveornegativeeffect?(真题2012年10月20日)•Example1:Nowadaysitismoreconvenientandeasierforpeopletotraveltoothercountries.Isitdevelopmentapositiveornegativeeffect?(真题2012年10月20日)方法一:替换词•nowadays→inthemodernworld/inthecontemporaryworld•moreconvenientandeasier→canbeachievedeasily/realistic•tootherworld→overseas•Example1:Nowadaysitismoreconvenientandeasierforpeopletotraveltoothercountries.Isitdevelopmentapositiveornegativeeffect?(真题2012年10月20日)方法二:改变句子结构Inthemodernworld,travellingoverseascanbeachievedeasily.加入并列结构或者从句…easily,especiallyforthosefromrichcountries.Practice(Homework)•Example2:Insomecountries,youngpeoplearenotonlyricherbutalsosaferandhealthierthaneverbefore.However,theyarelesshappy.Whyhasithappenedandhowtodealwithit?(真题2012年9月22日)•替换词insomecountriesinmanypartsoftheworldrichermoreaffluent/economicallybetteroffhealthierorhappierwell-being•改变句子结构Inmanypartsoftheworld,youngpeopleareeconomicallybetteroff,buttheirwellbeingdoesnotimprove.•加入并列结构或从句Inmanypartsoftheworld,youngpeopleareeconomicallybetteroffandabletoaffordluxurygoods,buttheirwell-beingdoesnotimprove.如何写第三句话两种方法•方法1:表明立场e.g.Iamoftheopinionthatcarownershipshouldbediscouraged.e.g.Fromapersonalpointofview,itisnecessarytodiscouragenon-essentialtravel.•方法2:简单介绍主体部分或讨论的内容,并不表明立场e.g.Theproblemandbenefitsofcarownershipwillbediscussedbelow.e.g.Thisessaywillbrieflyreviewtheprosandconsofimprisonmentoncomparisonwithjobtraining.问题类文章的开头段•方法:(背景+主体部分简单介绍)•e.g.Itseemsthatpeopletodayarenotasfriendlyastheyusedtobe.Inadditiontooutliningthecausesofthisproblem,thisessaywillproposesolutions.•e.g.Today,childrenappeartospendmostoftheirfreetimewatchingTVandplayingcomputergames.Thefocusofthisessayisonthecausesofandsolutionstothisproblem.Task2作文第4步写中间段•题目:Theunlimiteduseofcarsmaycausemanyproblems.Whatarethoseproblems?Inordertoreducetheproblems,shouldwediscouragepeoplefromusingcars?(2007年9月8日)题目:Theunlimiteduseofcarsmaycausemanyproblems.Whatarethoseproblems?Inordertoreducetheproblems,shouldwediscouragepeoplefromusingcars?(2007年9月8日)•Step1:阅读题目,确定题目的要求此题讨论的是汽车的影响。混合类题目:第一个问题是报告类,需要说清楚汽车使用的问题;第二个问题是观点类,需要说清楚是否应该鼓励人们不用汽车。•Step2:思考观点——私人汽车会造成污染。•Step3:思考原因和结果(注意逻辑关系)——燃烧汽油(原因)产生废气(结果)•Step4:转化成英文。Privatecarusecancauseairpollution.Itinvolvesfuelconsumptionandcreatesexhaustfumes.•Step5:使用并列句、3大从句(名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句)进行拓展。Privatecaruseisamajorenvironmentalissuearoundtheworld,becauseitcancauseairpollution.Itisahabitthatinvolvesfuelconsumptionandcreatesexhaustfumes.•Step6:使用举例、对比、强调结果的方法拓展段落。Privatecaruseisamajorenvironmentalissuearoundtheworld,becauseitcancauseairpollution.Itisahabitthatinvolvesfuelconsumptionandcreatesexhaustfumes.Asairqualitydeteriorates,manypeoplecansufferfromrespiratorydiseasesandhospitaladmissionwillincreaseconsiderably.Task2作文第5步写总结段•写作流程:总结段一般有两个任务(大概是两至三句话)1.重新阐述你的立场和观点2.重新总结主体部分讨论过的要点(注:问题类题目不需要阐述立场)•e.g.Inconclusion,advertisingplaysanessentialroleinsociety,notonlymakingconsumerswell-informedbuyersbutalsostimulatingsales.However,consumersshouldbeawarethatadvertisingcangiveanexaggeratedaccountofproductsinmanycases.雅思作文需要注意的几个问题:1.不要用自己不熟悉的词2.避免过分使用从句3.少用名言4.杜绝中国谚语5.减少使用第一人称和第二人称6.避免口语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