ACADEMICWRITING学术类写作文体的特殊要求学术类1.文体Someteachersdon‘tknowhowtousecomputerstohelpthestudentseffectively.2.非正式词汇Historicbuildingsattractlotsofvisitorsandcanimprovethelocaleconomy.3.拼写错误Theimpactoftourismontheseneighbourhoodsshouldbeanalyzed.4.实词Childreninwealthyfamiliesaremoreandmoredependentontheirparents.5.实词Seriouscrimesharmpeople’slives.1.don’t不要缩写Donotcannot(没有空格)2.Lotsof=numerous=ahostof(可数名词)agreatdealof(不可数)3.Neighbourhoods(英式)Neighborhood(美式)analyze(美式)analyse(英式)注意雅思考试,可以用英式美式,但是英式美式不能混用。Moreandmore(口语化)=increasinglySerious=severeCrime=criminalactsharm=Damage/destroy/undermineImpairpeople’shealth(专门指破坏健康)People=individual注:humanbeings的范围比较大,作文里面慎用6.实词Theadvantagesofstoppinganimalexperimentsaremorethancontinuingthem.7.句式Today,advertisementsareeverywhere.Therearemanywaystodoadvertisements.8.句式Theenvironmentisbecomingworse.Wemustworktogethertodealwithit.9.色彩So,wemusttakestepstodealwiththeenvironmentalproblems!10.文化背景WemustbefriendlytoothersbecausetheBiblesaid,”Treatyourneighborsasyouwouldliketobetreated.”6aremorethan=outweigh7句子太短(加个and)加连词)8句子太短,加Therefore9Must——should10不要用宗教语言主要还是逻辑熟练掌握思考素材的三种方法文明类TourismEducationGovernmentWomenandFamiliesLanguageandCultureTechnologyandtheMediaDevelopmentandGlobalisation野蛮类CrimeAnimalsEnvironmentalProblemsa分类法(话题比较宽泛的,可以用分类法)Somepeoplethinkoldbuildingsshouldbedestroyedandreplacedwithmodernbuildings.Towhatextentdoyouagree?开头:城市老房子越来越多…正文:有些房子是要拆掉的。1.老房子比较危险。2.老房子破坏市容,3.老房子住人比较少。有些是不需要拆的。1.特殊的文化价值,政治价值的。2.旅游资源(名人房子)注意(作文最好是四段式,可以参考剑6的考官范文,都给的是四段式的,正文部分,两段不要一样长,突出自己的侧重)练习Somehigh-schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotouniversity.Towhatextentdoyouthinktheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?分类:优势劣势或者按照学生的专业分类,比如说有些人会去学文科,理科,各自的优势是什么,劣势是什么。2.替代法Somepeoplethinkmotorizedflightwasthegreatestinventioninthetwentiethcentury.Doyouagreeordisagree?出现了最高级,或者only,完全禁止,就用替代法。用反例子。正文:1.(我承认…1.可以促进国际间人们的交流。2.给我们带来便利好处。但是,(举反例子1.电脑,2互联网,3汽车,4手机等等都是超过飞机的影响的)练习Somepeoplethinkstricterpunishmentfordrivingoffendersistheonlyeffectivewaytoimprovesafetyontheroads.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?3.裸奔法Technology&Efficiency(都有逻辑关系)Mind&SoulSociety&CrimeTime&SpaceRights&ResponsibilitiesEnvironment&HealthMind&SoulEmployment&CompetitionCulture&PopulationMoney&Fun练习:电子商务的影响正文:对于社会:科技提高了效率,精神方面缺乏交流,商店比较省空间,产生就业机会。对于个人:效率提高,会有网络犯罪,提搞个人乐趣。语法难点A正确理解7种句子成分1Smokingisjustapersonalchoiceratherthanamoralissue.(主语,可以是动名词,从句,名词做主语)2Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleagreethatgamblingisanunhealthyhobby.(谓语,只能是动词)3Junkfoodimpairspeople’shealth.(宾语,动名词,名词,从句)4Inrecentyears,theInternethasbeengaininginpopularityatanamazingrate.(定语,修饰名词)5Outdooractivitiescangreatlyimproveourhealth.(状语,可以是动词,形容词,整个句子)6Shopping,annecessaryactivityineverydaylife,isfarmoreconvenientinthecitythaninthecountry.(同位语,一般名词后面有逗号,解释说明的作用)7Ifoundtheemploymentsituationdisappointing.(补语,动词+名词+形容词或者分词就是补语)正确使用四种特殊句式a状语提前(作用形成句子节奏感,加强程度)Obviously,ifelderlypeopleliveathome,theirchildrencantakecareofthemandtheyfeellesslonely.Overall,thefunctionofabuildingismoreimportanttoabuildingthanitsappearance.IamfondoftheWesternculture.Specifically,IthinktheFrenchcultureisreallysecondtonone(最好的=best).Mostimportantly,thegovernmentshouldmakesurethatcitizenscanimprovetheirlives.Intermsofattitude,TeddyBearisaverygoodteacher.Toreducetrafficjams,thegovernmentshouldencouragepeopletotakethesubway.(inorderto换成to)Livinginpoverty,thesepeopledonotevenhavemoneytobuyenoughfood.WithoutanIELTSscore,onecannotgetavisafromtheembassy.b倒装句(动词放到主语前面)Notonlyshouldtheparentsspendmoretimewiththeirchildren,theyshouldalsotrytocommunicatewiththeirchildrenmoreoften.(notonly,butalso半倒装)Onlyinthiswaycanthisissuebeeffectivelysolved.c强调句Itistheslitsthatmakeachi-paoreallyspecial.ItisthetraditionsinBeijingthatattractmanyforeigntourists.d虚拟语气(语气弱化,用的不多,考高分可以用)Ifthiswerenottrue,thenwewouldfinditimpossibletopredicthowthestockmarketwoulddevelop.Theschoolswouldseemveryimpersonalifallthehumanteacherswerereplacedbythecomputers.有效避免7种语法错误1.Employeecanbenefitmorefromtelecommutingthanemployer.(可数名词不可单独使用,一定要有修饰,即The,a,或者加S)2.1Workathomeusingmoderntechnologycangreatlyenhanceourefficiency.2.2Childrenwhoareraise(抚养)inimpoverished(poor)familiescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectivelyintheiradultyears.2.3Theproblemsthatarecreatedbyenvironmentalcontamination(污染,pollution)isveryhardtoresolve.2.4Manystudentsareverylikestudyinghomeeconomics.2.5Inpresent-daysociety,cultureswerebecomingverysimilar.3Intelligentstudentsshouldnotbetreateddifferentbytheirteachers.4.1Countriesshouldpayattentiononthedisadvantages(that)globalizationmaycreate.4.2TheInternethasinsteadof(repalced)teachersinmanyclassrooms.5Someparentsdonotobeytrafficruleshimself.6SomepeoplethinktheInternetonlyhaspositiveimpact,(while)otherpeoplethinkitalsohasnegativeinfluenceonourlives.7Thereareagreatmanychildrenthink(thinking)themainpurposeofeducationshouldbetoaffordthempleasureandenjoyment.注意:Importantforsb.todoImportanttomeThereasonf