雅思大作文2 观点与提纲

•第二章列观点•列提纲2.列观点Howtoplantatree?审题：准确--挖坑列观点：合理--浇水论证观点：适度--施肥语言：多变衔接--修枝1.审题2.表述观点–同意什么3.论证观点–why/how1.列观点步骤列观点大忌分论点含义宽泛大忌•观点要切题•观点要具有普遍性•观点要切合实际•观点不宜涉及政治、宗教等敏感话题•观点要避免重复stststststs妙计4法出观点列表分类替代推导法1.列表法对比找差异列表1.1方法Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Itisbettertobeamemberofagroupthantobetheleaderofagroup.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.例题leaderstaffresponsibility大小qualificationcomprehensivespecificpressure大小power大小contributionwidespecificabilityleadershipteamworkrolekeyimportantchallenge大小opportunity多多Socialconnection大小Informationchannel多少rewarding多少leaderstaffresponsibility大小qualificationcomprehensivespecificpressure大小power大小contributionwidespecificabilityleadershipteamworkrolekeyimportantchallenge大小opportunity多多Socialconnection大小Informationchannel多少rewarding多少人物模板个人他人生活外在感觉工作气质/外貌/穿着/吸引力素质诚实/正直/善良/修养/关心人权利/责任/能力/贡献/抗压/挑战/影响/综合素质/角色重要性人脉圈朋友圈认识不认识加深友情扩展感情dispositioncultivation1.2列表法注意事项clearreasonable→观点无重叠Chooseoneofthefollowingtransportationvehiclesandexplainwhyyouthinkithaschangedpeople'slives.automobiles/bicycles/airplanesPractice小试牛刀2.分类法宽泛、抽象细化、分类2.1方法增加2.2目的入题点讨论内容Somehigh-Schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotostudyinuniversities.Whichonedoyouthinkisbetter,andwhy?例题1：Somehigh-Schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotostudyinuniversities.Whichonedoyouthinkisbetter,andwhy?例题1-思路1high-schoolgraduates文科生：liberalartsstudents理科生：sciencestudents艺术类：artstudentsgotowork1.liberalartsstudentslibraries/newspaper/reporter/clerk→bettergraspofhigh-levellanguage2.sciencestudentscorporation/laboratory→businesstransaction→applyatheorytoactualpractice3.artstudentsartgalleries/museums→getaclosecontactwithrealartisticvalueSomehigh-Schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotostudyinuniversities.Whichonedoyouthinkisbetter,andwhy?例题1-思路2universitiesComprehensiveuniversityLanguageSchoolEngineeringschoolCollegeofartsShouldacitytrytopreserveitsoldbuildingsordestroythemandreplacethemwithmodernbuildings?Practice:小试牛刀Shouldacitytrytopreserveitsoldbuildingsordestroythemandreplacethemwithmodernbuildings?Practice:小试牛刀Oldbuildings不该拆1.buildingsofhistoricvalues2.gorgeoushistoricbuildings3.specialethnicarchitecture要拆1.unsafe2.spoilthecityscape1.buildingsofhistoricvaluescourtyardhouse/hutong/TheForbiddenCity•partofChinesetraditionalculture•revealstheconceptofthesyncretismofnatureandhuman”2.gorgeoushistoricbuildingsRussianstreetinDalianenjoythesplendidhouses/goshopping/travel3.buildingswithdistinctiveethnicflavorPotalaPalace•agrandpalacetoaccommodatePrincessWencheng•representsnationalunityPeoplerememberspecialgiftsorpresentsthattheyhavereceived.Why?Practice1gifts/presents1.birthday2.highscore3.Valentine’sDay4.bribe3.替代法程度词-est/only/ban/stop3.1方法推翻绝对化逻辑3.2目的1.出绝对词2.翻绝对词3.出词3.3步骤找推找替代Somepeoplethinkflightwasthegreatestinventioninthe20thcenturyandithasthebiggestimpactonourlives.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?例题1Somepeoplethinkflightwasthegreatestinventioninthe20thcenturyandithasthebiggestimpactonourlives.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?例题1找替代computersinternetautomobilescellphonesSomepeoplethinkstricterpunishmentfordrivingoffendersistheonlyeffectivewaytoimprovesafetyontheroads.Doyouagreeordisagree?例题2Somepeoplethinkstricterpunishmentfordrivingoffendersistheonlyeffectivewaytoimprovesafetyontheroads.Doyouagreeordisagree?例题2Othereffectiveways1.pedestrians/cyclist2.policeman3.roadbeprofessionalanddedicatedwide,clearandsmoothkeepthetrafficinorder/donotjumpthestoplightPeopleshouldreadonlythosebooksthatareaboutrealevents,realpeople,andestablishedfacts.例题3Peopleshouldreadonlythosebooksthatareaboutrealevents,realpeople,andestablishedfacts.例题3notforreal1.sciencefiction•enrichknowledgeabouttheuniverseandscience•intelligent,knowledgeable2.romanticfiction/sentimentalnovel•feellikeawarmflowsinside•apositivevisionofthefuture3.cartoons/fairytales•stayyoung•“ifyoucarryyourchildhoodwithyou,you’llneverbecomeolder.”4.horrorstories•sensestimulation•exercisemygutsPlayingagameisfunonlywhenyouwinPractice1小试牛刀PlayingagameisfunonlywhenyouwinPractice1小试牛刀1.losefailurecontributestosuccess1st,learnwhatdoesnotwork2nd,anopportunitytotryanewapproach.2.beonatieplayer:noonegetshurtanddepressedspectator:chancetoenjoymore3.gameitselfisfunmakefriendsandeaseourselvesfromstressAperson'schildhoodyears(thetimefrombirthto12yearsofage)arethemostimportantyearsofaperson'slife.Practice2Aperson'schildhoodyears(thetimefrombirthto12yearsofage)arethemostimportantyearsofaperson'slife.Practice2noonegrowsolderbylivinganumberofyears1.youthawarenessstagegrowmaturefromnaivety2.maturityactualizethepersonalworthandultimatelifevalue3.senectitudeacarefreeperiodfullofmemories4.推理法1.TMSTREEC$2.推中间过程Technology&Efficiency科技（提高）效率Mind&Soul头脑对应精神Society&Crime社会犯罪严重Time&Space时间对应空间Rights&Responsibilities权利对应义务Environment&Health环境影响健康Employment&Competition就业竞争激烈Culture&Population文化人口创造Money&Fun金钱买到乐趣Somepeoplethinkstudentsshouldfocusonafewsubjectswhileothersthinktheyshouldstudyawiderangeofsubjects.例题1•Focusingoncertains