江苏写作句型转换_一句多译

Howtopolishupyourwriting•2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。•教育部倡导学生：每天锻炼一小时•健康工作五十年;幸福生活一辈子•请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。•注意：发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。•词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。•参考词汇：阳光体育活动—anationalstudentsportsprogram;教育部—theMinistryofEducation•Goodafternoon,everyone,•___________________________________________•Thankyou!Goodafternoon,everyone,OnthemorningofApril29,2007,from10:00to11:00,hundredsofmillionsofstudentsfromprimary,middleschoolsanduniversitiesalloverChinajoinedinanationalstudentsportsprogram.ElevenmillionstudentsinJiangsutookanactivepartinthisprogram.0７年江苏卷范文1TheMinistryofEducationcallsonstudentstoexerciseforanhoureveryday,inthehopethattheywillhavegoodhealthtoworkfiftyyearsandenjoytheirwholelife.Personally,Ithinkit'sagoodideaforussenior3studentstohavedailyexercise.Althoughwetakeanhouradayforecercise,itiswellworthit.Takingexercisehelpsbuildupourbodyandkeepaclearmind.Therefore,wecanworkmoreefficiently.Thankyou!0７年江苏卷范文22008江苏卷实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“BeingaGoodListener”的英文演讲稿。注意：对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“BeingaGoodListener”.________________________________________Thankyouforyourlistening!为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，…老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，…同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，…怎样倾听（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。）Goodlisteningcanalwaysshowrespect,promoteunderstanding,andimproveinterpersonalrelationship.Manypeoplesuggestthatparentsshouldlistenmoretotheirchildren,sotheywillunderstandthembetter,andfinditeasytonarrowthegenerationgap;teachersshouldlistenmoretotheirstudents,thentheycanmeettheirneedsbetter,andplacethemselvesinagoodrelationshipwiththeirstudents;studentsshouldlistenmoretotheirclassmates,thustheywillhelpandlearnfromeachother,andafriendshipislikelytobeformed.0８年江苏卷范文1WhatIwanttostressisthateachofusshouldlistenmoretoothers.Showyourrespectandneverstopotherstilltheyfinishtheirtalk;showyouareinterestedbyasupportivesilenceoraknowingsmile;beopen-mindedtodifferentopinionseventhoughyoudon’tlikethem.Inaword,goodlisteningcanreallyenableustogetclosertoeachother.0８年江苏卷范文2书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求第五档（21-25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务:准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（16-20分）完成了试题规定的任务:比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语言结构或词汇所致应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（11-15分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。能说出短文的基本内容，但逻辑关系较混乱,要点有遗漏,没有写自己的认识。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求有一些语法结构和词汇错误，但不影响理解应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯,整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。Thepolishedpoints:A.较高级词汇B.丰富的语法结构C.恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章结构紧凑;D.段落的优化高考经典句型结构:1.It’syearssinceIworkedinBeijing.2.Itwon’tbelongbeforeyougetwell.3.ItwasnotuntilyoutoldmethatIrealizedmymistake.4.NotuntilyoutoldmedidIrealizemymistake.5.Itissaidthatafirebrokeoutlastnight.6.Thereexistbiggapsbetweendreamsandrealities.7.Shewassoexcitedthatsheburstintotears.8.Workhard,andyouaresuretowin.9.Notonlydiehedoit,butalsohetoldittoothers.10.Turningright,youwillseeatower.11.Onlywhenhewasyoung,didhegototheUSA.12.Therewasatimewhenhewasinlowspirits.13.Hehurriedthere,onlytobetoldshewasgone.14.Hadyoucomeearlier,you‘dhaveseenthestar.15.Isthisthemuseumthatwevisitedlasttime?16.Isthismuseumtheonewevisitedlasttime?1.Iusedtolikereadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool.2.SuddenlyIthoughtofagoodidea.3.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.Iusedtotakedelightin/befondofreadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool.Allofasudden,agoodideaoccurredtome.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.Youhavenotrouble/difficultyinfindingmyhouse.Youcanfindmyhousewithoutanydifficulty.较高级的词汇、短语•4.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.•5.Inourschool,therearetwenty–sixclassrooms.•6.Theoldphotomademethinkofmyhappychildhood.Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty–sixclassrooms.Ourschoolconsistsoftwenty–sixclassrooms.Theoldphotoremindedmeofmyhappychildhood.较高级的词汇、短语1.Iusedtotakedelightin/befondofreadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool.2.Allofasudden,agoodideaoccurredtome.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.3.Youhavenotrouble/difficultyinfindingmyhouse.Youcanfindmyhousewithoutanydifficulty.4.Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.5.Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty-sixclassrooms.Ourschoolconsistsoftwenty-sixclassrooms.6.Theoldphotoremindedmeofmyhappychildhood.较高级的词汇、短语•1.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.•2.IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeast.Atthattime,anelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet.丰富的语法结构Onhearingthebadnewsofhisdeath,shewentpalewithsorrow.IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet.丰富的语法结构•3.TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet.ItisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.•4.Heissurprisedthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.丰富的语法结构•5.Wecanachieveourgoalonlyinthisway.•6.Hedidnotknowwhatha