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BasicWriting——introducingaplace(3)Howtointroduceaplace一、语言特点：1.开门见山，直截了当。2.准确明了，介绍清楚。3.详略得当，重点突出。二、写作结构•1.根据写作提示的顺序来写；•2.如果是描述地点的位置，顺序通常是由上至下，从里到外，从左到右，从远到近。•3.开头可用：Iwouldliketointroduce...•4.结尾可用：That’sall.Thankyou,andyou’rewelcometomyhometown.三、Usefulexpressions•1.Location(所处位置)•belocatedin\on...•besituatedin\on...•liein\on...•...liesnear\behind\infrontof\bythesideof...\between\among...•...standsatthefootof\onthetopof...•Standingonthetopofthemountain,...hasexperiencedmanychangesinthisarea.•Therestand...neartheriver.•2.Surroundings(周边环境)•inthesouth\north\east\westof...•onthesouth\north\east\westof...•tothesouth\north\east\westof...•...islocated\situatedonthesouth\north\east\westofthelake\tothesouth\north\east\westofthemountain\inthesouth\north\east\westoftheprovince.•Westof...standsa....•E.g.Surroundedbymountainsonthreesides,ourschoolfacesaclearriveronthewest.•3.Population(人口)•hasapopulationof...•withapopulationof...•Japanhasasmallpopulationof...•Chinaisadevelopingcountry,withapopulationof130million.•Thepopulationhereisincreasingyearbyyear.•Eightypercentofthepopulationherearefarmers.•4.Area(面积)•has\coversanareaof…•withanareaof…•E.g.TiananmenSquare,thelargestsquareItheworld,coversanareaof...•Thissquareis2,000meterslongand1,500meterswide.•Ourschool,whichtakesup63thousandsquarekilometers,isverylargeinsizw.•5.History(历史)•hasahistoryof…•withahistoryof…e.g.Chinahasahistoryofover5,000years.EgyptisanArabiancountrywithalonghistory.•6.Placesofinterest(名胜)•E.g.•TheWestLakeisfamousforitsbeautifulscenery.•InSydney,therearemanyplacesofinterest,suchastheOperaHouse.•SydneyisthebiggestcityinAustralia,whichhasmanyplacesofinterest,amongwhichistheOperaHouse.OurSchool•面积：15万平方米•历史：50年•位置：韶关浈江河畔，浈江南路1号•现有教师：约170多人•在校学生：3000多人•是湞江区的重点中学Basicwriting题材(1)某一外商考察组一行来到你们工厂考察投资环境。你负责接待，请你按以下提示写一篇工厂的介绍。历史15年历史位置位于长江北岸，靠近京广线，水路交通便利规模工人2000多人，占地4.5平方千米产品妇女服装市场全国各地、东南亚评价发展迅速，前景广阔，投资的明智选择Ourfactory,withahistoryof15yearsandanareaof4.5squarekilometers,islocatedonthenorthbankofChangjiangRiverandneartherailwaylinefromBeijingtoGuangzhou.Asaresult,thetransportationisveryconvenientbothbywaterandbyrailway.Inourfactory,thereareover2,000workers,whomainlyproducewomen’sclothing.TheproductsareofverygoodqualityandaresoldeverywhereinChinaandinsomeSoutheastAsianareas.Ourfactoryhasbeendevelopingrapidlyandhasaverybrightfuture,soit’sawisechoicetoinvesthere.好作文具备的优点•书写整洁•语言简练地道•语法和句子结构准确•包括所有信息内容，条理清楚•适当使用过渡词语，行文连贯•句式富于变化，长短句搭配合理基础写作有一群外国人来到中国旅游，去广州之前他们想了解一下广州的情况。请你根据以下内容写一篇介绍广州的短文。名称广州有“花城”的美誉历史2200多年，是中国古代“海上丝绸”的发祥地人口1000多万面积7434.4平方千米位置濒临中国南海，毗邻香港和澳门广州旅游资源丰富，有著名的“羊城八景”，现以其迷人的风采吸引了来自四面八方的海内外游客。•LocatedinthemiddleofGuangdongProvince,Guangzhou,thecapitalofGuangdong,isanancientcitywithahistoryofover2200years.Itcoversanareaof7434squarekilometerswithapopulationof10millionorso.Becauseitiswarmandfloweryalltheyearround,itisalsocalled“FlowerCity”.Since1982,Guangzhouwasnamedasoneofthefirsthistoricalandculturalcities.ThespecialcharacterofGuangzhouisattractingmoreandmoretouristsfromallovertheworld.你的一位网友向你了解你的家乡广州,请根据以下提示介绍广州.•1.广州地处广东省中部,面积7434.4平方公里,人口约1000万,是广东的省会,是一座有两千二百多年文明的历史的古城。•2.1982年，广州被选定为全国首批历史名城之一。•3.广州一年四季如春，繁花似锦，故有“花城”之美育。•4.广州正以迷人的风采迎接来自四面八方的海外游客。审题——初稿•文章体裁•中心人称•主体时态•语言表达•句子分配•文章连贯•修饰润色•说明文•第三人称•一般现在时濒临中国南海，毗邻香港和澳门•GuangzhouisontheSouthChinaSea.•HongKongistothesoutheastofGuangzhou.•MacauistothesouthofGuangzhou.•I’mstandinghere.Aisonmyleft.Bisonmyright.•I’mstandinghere,withAonmyleftandBonmyright.?HomeworkFinishthedraft.Seeksuggestions.Rewriteit.Copyitcarefully.Guangzhou,withthehistoryof2800years,isknownas“theflowercity”,whichisthebirthplaceof“thesilkroadonsea”inancientChina.Ithasapopulationof10millionandtheareaof7434.4squarekilometers.GuangzhouliesonthesouthChinasea,withHongKongtotheSoutheastandMacaototheSouth.Itisrichintravelingresources,suchasthefamous“eightsceneryofYangCheng”.TouristsfromhomeandabroadareattractedtoGuangzhoubyitsbeautifulscenery.