托福写作强化

[e-mail]综合写作独立写作形式时间字数题材reading+listening+writing20min180-225academicwriting30min400non-academic题型讲解综合写作独立写作综合写作近年来，韩剧⻛风靡大江南北，尤其在女性观众中大受欢迎。然而，看韩剧对女性智商，情商，以及家庭生活来说害处很多。第一.女性过多看韩剧会导致智商下降。因为韩剧大多叙事简单，观看起来并不需要动脑子。很多结局在始就可以猜测到。⻛长期看韩剧导致女性脑子惰性增⻛长，懒于思考，智商降低。第二.女性看韩剧同时会影响情商。由于韩剧女主角大多以犯而受到男主角喜爱，从而得到完美的爱情。女性观看之后会犯二始模仿，因而在现实生活中格格不入，人际交往受挫。第三.观看韩剧还是有害夫妻感情。有很多家庭中因为⼥女⽅方看韩剧⽽而导致⽭矛盾，这些⼥女性⽤用韩剧中不现实的爱情观要求男性，还有的要求丈夫整容成男主⾓角的样⼦子，导致感情破裂。头段-ThesisStatement分论点1-subpoint1分论点2-subpoint2分论点3-subpoint3READINGLISTENING总论点韩剧有害韩剧没害分论点1女性过多看韩剧会导看韩剧不会导致智商致智商下降下降分论点2女性看韩剧会同时影响情商不会影响情商分论点3观看韩剧还是有害夫观看韩剧不会损害夫妻感情妻感情独立写作Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Parentsarethebestteachers.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.Itisimportantforfamilieshavemealstogetherregularly.Technologymakespeople’slivessimplerratherthanmakespeople’slivesmorecomplicated.Theenvironmentalissueistoocomplextobesolvedbytheindividuals.头段分论点1分论点2结尾段Youngpeopletodayaremorelikelytohelpothersthanyoungpeopleinthepast.Theworldisrapidlydeveloping;andcorrespondingly,peopleareprogressinggenerationaftergeneration.Currently,theyoungpeoplehavebroaderhorizon,moreenrichedknowledgeandgreaterambitionthantheirpredecessorshad;butunfortunately,theyarealsogrowingmoreindifferenttowardothersthanthepeopleinthepast.Tobeginwith,thecurrentgenerationofyoungpeopleisevenbusierthanonecouldimagine,whichleavesthemlittletimetohelpothersout.WhenIwasinhighschool,mygreatestfriendSophiahadahardtimedealingwithhermathematics,whichIhappenedtobeproficientin.AsmuchasIwantedtohelpherwiththedifficultmathproblemsafterclass,Imyselfwasoccupiedbysomanyotherthings—everydayafterschoolIneededtogototheEnglishtrainingclub,andduringtheweekendmymotherhadarrangedthecookingclass,computerskill-trainingclassandsoon,becauseshethoughtitwouldbebetterformeifIcouldbemoreversatile.Buthowaboutthesituationinthepast?Accordingtomymom,whentheywereatschool,thecompetitionwasnotreallysofierce,sostudentswerenotrequiredtobeengagedinsomanyextracurricularactivitiestosharpentheircompetitiveedge.Withmorefreetime,ofcoursetheycouldcaremoreaboutsomeoneelseotherthanthemselves.Second,theprevalenceoftheInternetisalsoareasonwhyyoungpeopletodayarelesslikelytohelpothers.Whyisthisso?TodayadolescentsspendsomuchtimesearchingandreceivinginformationontheInternet,andsomeoftheinformationisnotonlywidelyspreadbutalsoprofoundlyinfluentialtoyoungsters.Forexample,3yearsagothispieceofnewswasalltherageonline:anoldgrannyfelldownwhenshewascrossingtheroad.Aniceyoungmansawherfalling,rantowardsherandtriedtopullherup.However,thegrannyrefusedhimandcriedoutallofasudden,claimingthatitwasthisyoungmanwhopushedherdown.Sheevenaskedforacompensationof1,000yuanfromtheman.AfterthisnewswasreleasedontheInternet,therewasaheateddiscussiononline,andthemajorityoftheyoungstersagreedthat“nowthatbeinggoodisnotappreciatedandrewarded,Iwouldratherbeaby-passer.”Asyoucansee,withmoreofthenegativeeventstakingplaceeveryday,andwiththerapidspreadofthenegativenews,youngpeoplearelessboldtooffertheirhelptothosewhoareinneed.Myideaisthusquiteclearthattheyoungsterstodayarelessfriendlythantheyoungpeopleinthepast.BUTTHEREAREOTHERWAYSTherearecertainconsiderationsorfactorsthateveryonetakesintoaccountinarelationship.Peoplemaylookforhonesty,altruism,understanding,loyalty,beingthoughtfuletc!Everyonewouldmoreorlesswishthatthepersonsheisdealingwithhassomeofthesevirtuesabove.Puttingtheminanorderaccordingtotheirimportance,however,canbeverysubjectiveandrelative.Whensomeoneaskshim/herselfthequestion“WhatdoIconsidertobethemostimportantthinginmyrelationship?”theanswerdependsonalotoffactorssuchashowhis/herearlierrelationshipswere.Afterstatingthateveryone'sopinioncanbedifferentaboutthis,formehonesty,inotherwords,alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinarelationship.Oppositeofthisisinarguablylyingandifsomeoneneedstolie,eithers/heishidingsomethingorisafraidoftellingmesomething.Inanyrelationshipofmine,Iwouldwishthatfirstofall,thepersonI'mdealingwithishonest.Eventhoughs/hethinksthats/hedidsomethingwrongthatIwouldn'tlike,s/he'dbettertellmethetruthandnotlieaboutit.LateronifIfindoutaboutalieorhearthetruthfromsomeoneelse,that'dbemuchmoreunpleasant.InthatcasehowcanIeverbelieveortrustthatpersonagain?HowcanIeverbelievethatthispersonhasenoughconfidenceinmetoforgivehim/herandcarryonwiththerelationshipfromthere?SoifIcannottrustapersonanymore,ifthepersondoesn'tthinkIcanhandlethetruth,there'snopointcontinuingthatrelationship.AlthoughIwouldliketoseealtruistic,understanding,thoughtfulandloyalbehaviorfrompeople,aninstanceoftheoppositeofthesebehaviorswouldnotupsetmeasmuchasdishonestywould.Amongallthepossiblebehaviors,dishonestyistheonlyoneformethatterminateshowIfeelaboutaperson'sreliability.ThereforehonestywouldbemyfirstconcernandthemostimportantconsiderationinarelationshipInthisresponsethewriterfirstapproachesthetopicbyunderscoringthatanumberofcharactertraitsareimportanttoarelationship.Thewritertheneffectivelydevelopsanargumentthatunlikeothernegativebehaviors,dishonestyorunwillingnesstofullydisclosesomebadac