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高三[书信作文写作模版1]申请信DearSir/Madam/Mr.Smith,[称谓]ProfessorShirleyofyouruniversitysaidthatStanfordmightbeabletoprovidescholarshipsforalimitednumberofstudentsfromChinatopursuepostgraduatestudiesnextterm.SinceIexpecttoreceivemybachelor'sdegreeinJune,Iwouldappreciatebeingconsideredacandidate.[第一段:引入/说明写信原委Asyouwillnoticefromtheencloseddatasheet,Iamespeciallyinterestedincomputerscience.Youmightliketoknowthatduringthepastyear,Itookallmyelectivecoursesinthisfieldandwrotemythesisoncomputerscience.MyknowledgeandpracticalcommandofEnglishisadequate.I'vepassedTOEFLandGREwithflyingcolors.[第二段:此段为信的主体,提出有关建议,劝说,说明,申请,投诉,介绍;商榷/讨论;描绘/叙述;致谢,致歉等等]Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeafavorableconsiderationofmyapplicationforascholarship.[第三段:此段表达愿望/希冀,进一步要求,祝愿…]Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.[结束语]yours,[礼貌落款]LunRinding[书信作文写作模版2]投诉信(抱怨信)(LetterofComplaint)(1)写作方法①首段:注意客观礼貌A.自我介绍B.引出投诉内容C.表明目的和要求。②主体:展开说明投诉原因、具体理由或后果,注意内容充实,符合交际习惯。A.详细说明情况,中肯提出问题;B.提出改进建议,表明希望如何解决;C.拓展题目内容,尤其要强调如何问题不解决所带来的后果。③尾段:提出解决方案,不用展开,注意公平公正、礼貌原则。A.表达强烈愿望,希望上述问题得到迅速恰当的解决;B.有时可就问题的解决限定时间;C.对有关人员的努力表示感谢;D希望尽快得到满意答复。(2)写作流程图提出抱怨并表示遗憾阐述问题发生的经过指出问题引起的后果提出批评及处理的意见或敦促对方采取措施第一部分:提出抱怨并表示遗憾(1)很抱歉打扰您,但我必须郑重提出投诉。IamsorrytotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeaseriouscomplaint.(2)我很遗憾地告诉你投诉有关…….的事由。Iamsorrytotellyouthatthereshouldbecausetocomplainabout…(3)我真的很讨厌抱怨,但最近有一件事情确实令人烦心。Ireallyhatetocomplain,butonethingisreallydisturbingnow.第二部分:阐述问题发生的经过(略)第三部分:指出问题引起的后果(1)噪音影响我的睡眠,使得我在上班时间无法集中精力。结果这些天我已经搞错了好几次ThenoisedisturbsmysleepsothatIcan’tconcentrateonmyworkduringtheworktime,andasaresult,Ihavemadeseveralmistakesthesedays.(2)在这样(嘈杂)环境下我无法进行研究,我需要一间安静的房间。FormethisenvironmentisverydifficulttomakestudiesandIneedaquietroom.第四部分:提出批评及处理的意见或敦促对方采取措施(1)我认为是你认识到……的时候了。Ithinkit’shightimethatyourealized….(2)我们深知你们并不经常出错,但我们希望能确保这类差错不再发生。Weknowthatyouarenotgenerallycareless,butweshouldlikeyourassurancethatthiswillnothappenagain.(3)我必须正告贵方,除非对目前状况采取措施,否则我将被迫诉诸法律。Imustwarnyouthatunlessyoudosomethingaboutthesituation,Iwillbeforcedtotakelegalaction.(4)坦率地所,我不再准备忍受这种状况。Frankly,Iamnotpreparedtoputupwiththesituationanymore.(5)如果您能尽快调查此事,我将不胜感激。期待您尽快回复。Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldlookintothematterassoonaspossible.AndIamlookingforwardtoanearlyreply.假设你是李强,请你就本校图书馆的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及图书馆的藏书数量和更新状况、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。【审题】本文可以从批评着手,成为一封批评信。题目要求中规定了要涉及藏书、环境等内容,为作文提供了一些思路。同时注意,虽然是封批评信,但也要做到客观,不能把图书馆说得一无是处。【写作思路】第一段:介绍写信的目的。第二段到第四段:从三方面说明图书馆存在的问题第五段:指出图书馆给我们的帮助很大,但急需改进第六段:结束语ALettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheLibraryServiceonCampus.January6th,2006DearMr.President,IamwritingtoexpressmyconcernovertheLibraryserviceonthecampus.(1)开门见山,点明写信缘由AsamajorinEnglish,IfindthatmostoftheBooksinEnglishinthelibraryareoutdated.Sofar,Ihavenotcomeacrossasinglebookpublishedafter1995.(2)提出第一个问题,藏书没有及时更新Asaresult,wefailtogetthelatestinformationofacademicdevelopmentbothathomeandabroad.(3)指出后果,不能及时得到最新信息Inaddition,thelightinthereadingroomisfarfrombright,whichdoesharmtooureyes.(4)指出光线不好Worsestill,thereisnoair-conditioningandwearesweatingheavilywhilereading.(5)指出没有空调问题,(6)提出最后一个问题Lastbutnotleast,thenewlydevelopedelectronicinformationsystemdoesnotworkwellandneedsfurtherimprovement.Agreatnumberofbooksshouldhavebeenlistedinthesystem.Thereisnodenyingthatthelibraryhashelpedusalot.(7)客观说明图书馆的作用Butitisinurgentneedofimprovement.Whenimproved,thelibraryiscertaintoprovidemuchmorehelpwithourstudy.(8)对图书馆的改进充满期待Thankyouforyourtime.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.(9)结束语,期待对方的回信Yourssincerely,LiQiang假如你是张玲,看到ChinaDaily上的招聘广告后,用英文写一封求职信,要求包括以下所有内容,字数120左右。WANTEDBEIJINGWATCHCOMPANYASECRETARYOFTHEENGLISHLANGUAGE姓名张玲性别女年龄20文化程度大学身体状况健康身高163经历曾在一家公司当过两年秘书技能1.会操作电脑,每分钟能打40个汉字2.英语说写较好,曾在中学获英语竞赛二等奖3.会驾驶汽车通讯地址北京109信箱(P.O.BOX109)P.O.BOX109BeijingJanuary24,2006Dearsir,I’vejustlearnedformthenewspaperthatasecretaryofEnglishLanguageiswantedinyourcompany.Ihopetogetthejob.MynameisZhangLing,agirlabout20.I’mhealthyand1.63meterstall.Igraduatedfromalanguagetrainingschoolandonceworkedasasecretaryinacompanyfortwoyears.Icanoperatecomputersandtype40charactersinaminute.Besides,IamgoodatspeakingandwritingEnglishandoncewonthesecondprizeinanEnglishcontestinthemiddleschool.Also,Iamagoodcardriver.I’msureIamfitforthejobandIwillworkhardforyourcompany.Ifallthissatisfiesyou,pleasewritetome.Bestwishes.Yoursfaithfully,ZhangLing书信作文写作模版3咨询信(LetterofInquiry)假设你是王梅,就申请加入英语俱乐部给俱乐部负责人写一封信,内容应涉及自己的基本情况,并咨询相关事宜,如入会方式、条件、会费、活动等。【审题】:本文是一篇咨询信,但又涉及到申请方面的内容,有一定的难度。写作时,需要介绍一下申请的原因,然后对相关事项进行咨询,最后希望早日收到回音。【写作思路】第一段:说明写信的目的,并介绍自身情况。第二段:对相关事宜进行咨询第三段:希望对方给予解答。ALetterofInquiryofApplyingforanEnglishClubOctober8th,2012Dearsir,IamwritingtoyoutoapplyforthemembershipoftheEnglishClub.(1)开篇点名写信缘由AsasecondyearcollegestudentfromtheEnglishDepartment,IloveEnglishliteratureverymuch.(2)说明自己的身份和对英语的爱好IoftenattendtheEnglishCornerheldonFridayinthePeople’sUniversityofChinaandwouldliketodiscussvarioustopicsinEnglishwithothers.IameagertobeonememberoftheEnglishClubandimprovefurthermyEnglish.(3)表明加入俱乐部的殷切期望和目的IknowtherearesomerequirementsbutIamnotclearaboutthedetails.(4)引出下文,提出问题Isitnecessaryformetopayformembersh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