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Howtopolishupyourcomposition(使完美)Whathappenedtoourearth?Look,sayandrememberCanyoureadthephrases?pilesofrubbishglobalwarmingpopulationexpansionoilspillinMexicoairpollutiondesertificationforestfirewaterpollutionclear-cutloggingillegalhuntingoverdevelopmentwhitepollutionacidrain……needtothinkmoreabout______.uselessfrommaterials____directlyfromenvironmentworkoutmore_________laws.encouragepeopleto____moreandmoretreessetupmore____________refusetouse______bagsWhattodowhenourearthdamaged?takenrecyclingeffectiveplantnaturereservesplasticstopthe_________huntingshare_________and________betweencountriesallowmore____________realizethe__________ofenvironmentalprotectionteachpeopleabout______________waysofliving.illegalinformationsolutionsinspectionsimportanceenvironmentallyfriendlyVarietiesofsentencepatterns1.plant,inorderto,live,inthefuture2.pickup,and,throw,intoadustbin3.save,waterandelectricity,turnoff,thetaps,lights,intime,when,needⅠ.Makeasentence,usingthegivenwords.Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmorehealthyinthefuture.Wemustpickupsomerubbishandthrowitintoadustbin.weshouldsavewaterandelectricitybyturningoffthetapsandlightsintimewhenwedon’tneedthem.6.If,makecontributions,theworld,become5.teach,about,environmentallyfriendly,waysoflivingWeshouldteachpeopleaboutenvironmentallyfriendlywaysoflivingIfeveryonemakescontributionstoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.Makeasentence,usingthegivenwords.4.clothbags,insteadof,plasticbags,goingshoppingWe’dbetteruseclothbagsinsteadofplasticbagswhengoingshopping.1.Ourearthbecamesobad.Itdisappointedus.1)名词性从句(Nounclauses)________________________madeusdisappointed.2)原因状语从句(Adverbialclauses)Weweredisappointed_______________________.3)定语从句(Attributiveclause)Ourearthbecamesobad,_____________________.4)感叹句(Exclamation)How_____________________whenwefoundOurearthbecamesobad!disappointedwewereThatOurearthbecamesobadbecauseOurearthbecamesobadwhichdisappointedusⅡ.Changethesentences.2.Wecansaveourearthonlyinthisway.1)倒装句(Inversion)2)强调句型(Emphaticstructure)3)被动结构(Passivestructure)Onlyinthiswaycanwesaveourearth.Itisonlyinthiswaythatwecansaveourearth.Ourearthcanbesavedonlyinthisway.3.Theeconomybringsusmuchconvenience.Theeconomycan’treplacetheenvironment.1)状语从句/被动(Adverbialclauses/Passivestructure)Howevermuchconvenience________________,theenvironment_____________________.Although/Though/While________,environment…2)定语从句(Attributiveclause)Theeconomybringsusmuchconvenience,doesn’tmeanthatenvironmentcanbereplaced.Theeconomybringsusmuchconvenience.whichtheeconomybringsuscan’tbereplaced3)Itisobviousthat…theenvironmentcan’tbereplaced,thoughtheeconomybringsusmuchconvenience.Itisobviousthat4)Thereisnodoubtthat…theenvironmentcan’tbereplaced,thoughtheeconomybringsusmuchconvenience.Thereisnodoubtthat4.Lotsoftreeshavebeencutdown.Thesoiliswashedaway.1)并列句(Compoundsentence)Lotsoftreeshavebeencutdownitresultsinthesoilbeingwashedaway.2)定语从句(Attributiveclause)Lotsoftreeshavebeencutdown,results…3)复合结构(Compoundstructure)→(with),thesoiliswashedaway.whichandWithlotsoftreescutdown1）顺序sequencefirstly,Firstofall,secondly,finally,lastbutnotleast,foronething,foranother,meanwhile…2）因果causeandeffectbecause,for,nowthat,asaresult(of),therefore,thus…3）对比contrastinstead,however,while,onthecontrary,,nevertheless,ontheotherhand…4）递进additionwhat’smore,moreover,besides,inadditionto,tomakethingsworse…5）个人观点personalopinionsinone’sopinion,frommypointofview,asfarasIamconcerned,tobehonest…6）概括summaryinaword,inshort,inconclusion,tosumup,insummary,toconclude…Firstofall,thegovernmentshouldadoptthepolicyofsustainabledevelopment“(可持续发展)2.What'smore,everycitizenshouldrealizetheseriousnessoftheproblem.3.Tobehonest,westillhavealongwaytogothoughtheenvironmentisslowlyimproving.4.Inconclusion,ahealthyenvironmentandastableeconomyshouldbepossibleatthesametime.5.Inaddition,manyseacreaturesarebeingwipedoutbyfishingboats.Studythelinkingwordstotelltherelationofthesentences.takefirstlyrealizeeducationputpracticefinallydestroyinginawordenvironmentmankindencourage选词填空Toprotectenvironment,thegovernmentmust_____evenmoremeasures.____,itshouldletpeoplefully_____theimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionthrough______and______poepletoplantthetreesandbushes.Secondly,muchmoreeffortsshouldbemadeto_____thepopulationplanningpolicyinto______,becausemorepeoplemeansmorepollution.______,thosewhodestroytheenvironmentshouldbeseverelypunished._______,Weshouldletthemknowthat_______environmentmeansdestroying_________themselves.takeFirstlyeducationrealizepracticeputInawordFinallydestroyingmankindencourageExercise今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........,如何保护我们的环境?请以“Howtoprotect/saveourenvironment/world?”为题写一篇短文。提示：存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重2.砍伐森林严重3.大气污染严重4.白色垃圾等。要求：如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个方面，80字左右的。Howtoprotectourenvironment?Theenvironmentalpollutionismoreandmoreseriouslytoday.Waterandairarepolluted.Manytreesarebeingcutdown,someanimalsaregettinglessandless,thepopulationisincreasingfasterandfaster…etc.Not