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一.描写一个人(朋友,父母,老师等)1.MissLiisourclassteacher/myfriend.李老师是我们的班主任/我的朋友。2.Sheisabout30yearsold.她大概30岁了。3.ShewasborninShanghaiin1989.她1989年出身在上海。4.SheisgoodatEnglish/basketball/swimming。我擅长于英语/篮球/游泳5.Myparentsworkveryhard.我的父母非常努力工作。6.Theyarefriendlytome.他们对我很友好。7.Weoftenplaytogether.我们经常一起玩耍。8.Ithinksheisnotonlymygoodteacher,butalsomyfriend.我认为她不仅是我的好老师,也是我的朋友。9.Althoughheisnotclever,hestudiesveryhard.尽管他不聪明,他学习很努力。10.Heisoneofthetalleststudentsinourclass.他是我们班最高的学生之一。11.Weoftenhelpeachotherandlearnfromeachother.我们常常互相帮助互相学习。12.Withthehelpofteachersandmyfriends,Ihavemadegreatprogress.在老师和我朋友的帮助下,我已经取得了很大的进步。13.Inaword,Ilikeher/himverymuch.总而言之,我非常喜欢她/他二.描写个人的兴趣,爱好等。Ilikereadingdifferentkindsofbooks.我喜欢看不同种类的书。Ithinkbooksaremygoodfriends.我认为书是我的好朋友。Ioftenspendmymoneyonbooks.我常常化钱买书Ilikeswimmingverymuch.我非常喜欢游泳。Wecanlearnalotfromit/them。我们从中能够学到很多。Itmakesmehealthy/happy.它使我健康/欢乐Icangetnotonlymuchknowledgebutalsoalotoffunfromit/them.我不仅能从中得到很多知识而且很多乐趣。三.描写我的愿望或者有关学英语的重要性。1.Mydreamistobeateacher.我的梦想是成为一个老师2.IamgoodatEnglish/basketball/swimming。我擅长于英语/篮球/游泳3.Englishwillbecomemoreandmoreimportant。英语将变得越来越重要4.ItisimportanttolearnEnglishwell.学好英语是重要的。5.Englishissousefulthatwemustlearnitwell.英语是如此的重要以至我们必须学好它6.Weshouldworkhardinordertofindagoodjobinthefuture.我们应该努力学习为了在将来找到一份好工作。7.IoftenspendmuchtimereadingEnglisheveryday.我常常花费很多时间每天读英语。8.IamsureIwillhaveabrightfutureifItrymybesttostudyhard.假如我尽我最大努力认真学习,我相信我将有灿烂的未来。9.knowledgeispower.Ifapersonhasn’tmuchknowledge,itisimpossibleforhimtofindagoodjob.知识就是力量。假如一个人没有很多知识,对他来说找一份好工作是不可能的。10.Ibelievethathardworkwillbringmesuccess.我相信艰苦的学习(劳动)将给我带来成功。四.描写我的家乡上海或介绍上海。1.TherearealotofbigshopsandbusystreetsinShanghai.在上海有许多大商店和繁忙的街道。2.Therearemanypeoplethere.在那里有很多人。3.Asweallknow,ShanghaiisfamousfortheBund.上海以外滩而闻名4.WeareproudofShanghai/him.我们以上海/他而感到自豪5.IthinkShanghaiwillbecomemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture.我认为上海将变的越来越美丽。五.描写物或者景1.Therearetwoclassroombuildingsinourschool.在我们学校有两幢教学楼。2.It’sverylargeandbeautiful.它非常大和美丽。3.Wecanseegreentreesandniceflowerseverywhere.我们能够到处看到绿树和鲜花。4.Myschoollifeisfulloffun.我的学校生活充满着乐趣。5.Myfavoriteanimalsaredogs.我最喜欢的动物是狗6.Theycanhelpusinmanyways.它们在许多方面能帮助我们。六.“过去发生的事情”一类作文的写法:或者一次去….的旅行。1.ItwasfinelastSunday.上星期天天气很好。2.IwenttoLuXunparkwithmyparentslastSunday.上星期天我去了鲁迅公园。3.Wewenttherebybus.我们坐车去哪儿4.TherearemanyinterestingplacesinBeijing.在北京有很多有趣的地方5.WevisitedtheGreatWall.我们参观了长城。6.TheGreatWallisverynice.长城非常好。7.Wetookalotofnicepictures.我们拍了很多好看的照片。8.Afterthat,weboughtalotofinterestingbooksintheshop.那以后,我们买了很多有趣的书在书店。9.Weheldaclassmeeting/(sportsmeet)inourclassroomlastFriday.我们上星期五在我们的教室开了一个班会/运动会。10.Wesanganddancedtogether.我们在一起唱歌和跳舞。11.Ienteredforthehighjump.我报名参加了跳高。12.Weplayedbasketballafterschoolyesterday.我们昨天放学后打篮球。13.IplantedalotoftreeslastSunday.上星期天我种植了很多树.Afterthat,wewateredthetrees.那以后我们给树浇了水.Treescanmakeairclan.树能够使空气干净.14.Ihelpedmygrandmatocleanthehouse.我帮助我的奶奶打扫房子.15.IhadtogoovermyEnglishlessonsathome.我不得不在家里复习我的英语功课。16.Ididn’tgotobeduntilIfinishedmyhomeworklastnight.我一直没有上床睡觉直到我昨天完成我的家庭作业。17.Inaword,wehadagoodtime.总而言之,我们玩的很愉快。七.“将来发生的一件事情”一类作文的写法。1.IwillgotoLuXunparkwithmyparentsnextSunday.下星期天我要去鲁迅公园。2.Wewillgotherebybus.我们将坐车去哪儿.3.WewillvisittheGreatWall.我们将参观长城。(把上面过去时态的句子转换成一般将来时就可以)八.句与句间好的连词:First,(首先)Afterthat,(那以后)However,(然而),What’smore,(而且)ontheotherhand.finally,atlast,Inaword,(总而言之)九.其他1.Iwanttovisitmyuncle.我想要看望我的叔叔。2.Thankyouforyourletter.谢谢你的来信3.Itisbad/good/forus.它对我们有好处(坏处)4.Itisasimportantasair.它和空气一样重要。5.Itiswidelyusedinourlife.在我们的生活中它被广泛使用。6.Icanknowmuchmoreabouttheworld,andIcanmakemorefriendsaswell.我能够了解更多世界,和交到更多的朋友。7.Withthehelpofcomputers,wecankeepintouchwiththeworld.在电脑的帮助下,我们能够和世界保持联系。8.Ihavealotofhomeworktodo,soIhavenotimetoplay.我有许多作业要做,所以我没有时间玩耍。9.Weshouldeatmorevegetablesandlessmeatinordertokeephealthy.我们应该吃更多的蔬菜和更少的肉为了保持健康。•10.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上无难事只要肯攀登。11.Ifeveryonecangivehishand,Therewillbemoreflowersandsunlightintheworld.假如每个人能伸出一只手,世界上将会有更多的鲜花和阳光。SkillsofmakingapassagebetterLearningtowritebeautifulsentences•正确构建简单句•恰当使用复合句(三个左右)•恰当使用分词结构•长短句结合•尝试特殊句型(感叹句,倒装句等)英语范文一.AVisitto……(YuGarden/Nanpubridge/birthdayparty)(写过去发生的事情或活动)LastSunday,myparentsandIvisitedYuGarden.Itwasfine.Wewenttherebybus.Ittookusonehourtogetthere.Wesawmanynicethings.Thereweremanypeoplethere.Wetookalotofnicepictures.YuGardenisfamousforitssnacksoweatealotofnicefood.(NanpubridgeisveryfamousinShanghai).YuGardenwassobeautifulthatweenjoyeditverymuch.二Aplanofwinterholidays(写将来的事情或计划)Winterholidayswillcome.Manystudentsarelookingforwardtoit.Iwillvisitalotofniceplaceswithmyparents.Iwillhavetimetowatchcartoons.Iwillbuymanyinterestingbooksintheshop.Iwilleatalotofnicefood.Ofcourse,Iwillhavetofinishmyhomework.Inaword,Iwillhaveagoodtimeduringthewinterholidays.三Springfestival(写节日的文章)SpringFestivalisthemostimportantfestivalinChina.BeforeSpringFestival,peopleusuallycleantheirhouses.Andtheygotothesupermarkettobuysomething.DuringSpringFestival,parent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