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ByMr.GongHowtopolishyourcompositionHelpingothersisatraditionalvirtue.Whenwemeetwithdifficulties,wehopeforothers’help.Itbringsusmuchcomfortandhappinessandenablesustoovercomethetroubles.Takemyselfasanexample.TherewasatimewhenIfeltastrongsenseoffailure.Ifellseriouslyillandmissedmanyclasses.AfterIrecovered,Ireturnedtoschool,butfoundIfellbehindothers.ItmademedepressedandIcouldn’tfindconfidence.Ialmostlostheart.Atthattime,myheadteacherfoundmysituationandcametocomfortandencourageme.Healsohelpedmewithmylessonsafterclass.Becauseofhishelp,ImadegreatprogressandIowedittomyteacher.Therefore,weshouldalwaysbereadytogiveothersintroubleahelpinghand.Ifso,wecantrulyliveahappyandharmoniouslife.Helpingothersisatraditionalvirtuedeeplyrootedinourheart.Facedwithdifficulties,weundoubtedlyhopeforothers’help.Itnotonlybringsusmuchcomfortandhappiness,butalsoenablesustoovercomethetroublesweencounter.Takemyselfasanexample.TherewasatimewhenIwasseizedbyastrongsenseoffailure.Ifellseriouslyill,asaresultofwhich,Iwasabsentfrommanyclasses.Havingrecovered,Ireturnedtoschool,onlytofindIfellbehindothers,whichmademeverydepressed.What’sworse,myconfidencewasnowheretobefound.Ihadalmostlostheartwhenmyheadteachersensedmysituationandcametocomfortandencourageme.Besides,hehelpedmewithmylessonsafterclass.Thankstohishelp,ImadegreatprogresswhichIowedtomyteacher.Asthesayinggoes“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.”Weshouldbereadytogiveothersintroubleahelpinghand.Onlyinthiswaycanwetrulyliveahappyandharmoniouslife.PolishwordsThesceneryisbeautiful.fantastic/superb/awesome/impressive/breathtaking/spectacular/splendid/…advancedwords(2012苏州高三调研测试作文题）有人对林书豪（JeremyLin)的未来发展进行了一项社会调查。请你根据调查结果写一篇150词的英语短文为什么能成功？有人认为是因为勤奋；有人认为是因为天赋；有人认为是因为教育；有人认为是因为运气。是否会超越姚明？70%的人认为一定能20%的人认为不可能10%的人觉得不好说你的观点及理由。HowtoexpressthesentencesinEnglish：有人认为是因为勤奋；有人认为是因为天赋；有人认为是因为教育；有人认为是因为运气。Somepeoplethinkheissuccessfulbecauseofhishardwork.Somepeoplethinkheissuccessfulbecauseofhistalent.Somepeoplethinkheissuccessfulbecauseofhisgoodeducation.Somepeoplethinkheissuccessfulbecauseofhisgoodluck.HowtoexpressthesentencesinEnglish：Somepeoplethinkheissuccessfulowingtohishardwork.However,Somepeopleconsiderhistalentasamainfactorofhissuccess.Andit’salsobelievedthatthegoodeducationhehasreceivedleadstohissuccess.Butsomepeoplearguethathehasachievedsuccessjustbecauseheislucky.有人认为:Somepeoplethink/consider/argue/…It’sbelievedthat…因为:Becauseof/owingto/dueto/onaccountof/…Because…肯定不如双否好陈述不如倒装巧单句不如复句妙从句不如短句傲主动不如被动高PrinciplesofpolishingsentencesPolishsentencesMoregoodsentencestructuresItwasnotuntiltheclockstrucktwelvethathecameback.Whilecatchingtheflyingball,theybumpedintoeachother.Ifhehadstudiedhardbefore,hewouldn’tfindittoughtocatchupwiththeothersnow.强调句省略句虚拟语气With结构Withabookinhishand,theteacherenteredtheclassroom.起：firstofall,tobegin/startwith,inthefirstplace,firstandforemost,…承：second(ly),furthermore,moreover,what’smore,inaddition,besides,…转：but,however,onthecontrary,nonetheless,incontrast/comparison,nevertheless,…合：hence,therefore,inconclusion,toconclude,inaword,lastbutnotleast,…插入语：thatistosay,toacertainextent,tosomedegree,asamatteroffact,…Polishthepassage①Cohesion(衔接）Nowadays,manystudentsarepuzzledbyaproblem,________,howcouldweimprovethecomposition?Herearemysuggestions.___________,weshouldaccumulateasmanyadvancedwordsaspossible.________,applyingthemtoourcompositionproperlyisimportant._________,thatdoesn’tmeanweshouldalwaysadoptthesameword._________,usingdiversewordstoexpressthesamemeaningcanbrightenourcomposition.___________,someadvancedsentencesarenecessary.Butsomestudentsthinkthemoreadvancedsentences,thebetter.______________.Onlybycombiningvarioussentencepatternsappropriatelycanwecreateexcellentcompositions._________________,makinguseof“cohesion”isessential.___________,practicemakesperfect!thatisInawordLastbutnotleastFirstofallSecondlySometimesBesidesHoweverJusttheopposite(2012湖北卷满分作文节选片段）……Whenyou’reinabadsituation,don’tbediscouraged.Instead,staypositiveandturnitintoasteppingstonetosuccess.Justasthesayinggoes,lifeislikeplayingcards.Youcan’tcontrolthecardyou’redealt,justhowyouplaythehand.②Idioms（习语）②Idioms（习语）1.On“Confidence”Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.Confidenceinyourselfisthefirststepontheroadtosuccess.2.On“Time”Timeandtidewaitfornoman.Everyminutecounts.3.On“Friendship”Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.4.On“Study”It’snevertoooldtolearn.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.②Idioms（习语）5.On“Life”Wherethereisalife,thereisahope.Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.6.On“Practice”Practicemakesperfect.Lookbeforeyouleap.Romeisnotbuiltinaday.7.On“Family”Eastandwest,homeisbest.②Idioms（习语）8.On“Success&Failure”Helaughsbestwholaughslast.Hopeforthebest,butpreparefortheworst.9.On“Morals”Honestyisthebestpolicy.Donotdotootherswhatyoudon’twanttobedonetoyou.10.On“Health”Wealthisnothingwithouthealth.Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.②Idioms（习语）(2012浙江卷满分作文节选片段）……Ourfutureisdeterminedbymanythings,suchasopportunitiesandhelpfromothers,butourownattitude,determinationandhardworkplaythemostimportantrole.We’rethe