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2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误1英语写作常见语法错误-1常见语法错误举例：1.NowisgoldentimeforustoattainafaircommandofEnglish.(词性使用不当。now是副词，不能作主语。可改为：Nowitisthegoldentimeforus…)2.Myroommateissotroublesome,Icanhardlyputwithhimanymore.2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误2英语写作常见语法错误-2(标点符号错误。两个句子之间缺少连词。可改为：MyroommateissotroublesomethatIcanhardly…)3.Atypicalfamilynowadaysisconsistedofthreetofourmembers.(语态错误。consistof一定要使用主动语态。可改为：Atypicalfamilynowadaysconsistsofthreetofourmembers.)2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误3英语写作常见语法错误-34.Theabove-mentioneddisadvantageswhicharebroughtaboutbyenvironmentalpollutionisverydetrimentalbutoftenmisspeople’sattention.(句子的主语是advantages，要用复数动词。可改为：Theabove-mentionedadvantageswhichare…pollutionareverydetrimental…)2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误4英语写作常见语法错误-45.Ifyoutryyourbesttogetmoreaerobicexerciseandpracticeitwheneverandwhereverpossible,wecanmaintaingoodphysicalcondition.(指代不清。you与we指代不一致。可改为：Ifyoutry…whereverpossible,youcanmaintain…)2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误5英语写作常见语法错误-56.Inmyopinion,Ithinktheownerisjustifiedtodoso.(inmyopinion与Ithink重复累赘。可改为：Ithinktheowneris…或：Inmyopinion,theowneris…)7.Ifadopted,wehopethelawwillresolvetheproblem.2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误6英语写作常见语法错误-6(ifadopted的逻辑主语是thelaw，与句子的主语we不一致，为悬垂分词。可改为：Ifthelawisadopted,wehope…或：Ifadopted,thelawwillresolvetheproblem.)以上错误如果稍加小心，尚可避免。但下文中的错误则需要考生格外注意。2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误7英语写作常见语法错误-7Inmodernsociety,computersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Theyarewidelyusedfordifferentuses.Manypeopleusethemtotypeletters,somepeoplestillwriteletterswithapen.Iprefertotypeletteronthecomputer.Becauseitisfast,correct,andclean.2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误8英语写作常见语法错误-8First,fast.Youcantype90to100wordsinoneminute.Thepersonwhoisgoodatitcanevenmore.Andnowadays,alotofpeopleareworkinghardtoobtainthecertificateofcomputertyping.Manyofthemgetcertificates,however,somedonot.2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误9英语写作常见语法错误-9Inmodernsociety,computersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Theyarewidelyusedfordifferentuses.(1)Manypeopleusethemtotypeletters,somepeoplestillwriteletterswithapen.Iprefertotypeletteronthecomputer.(2)Becauseitisfast,correct,andclean.在上一段落中，划线部分属于句子结构方面的错误。（1）两句话之间不能用逗号隔开，应加上并列连词and。（2）sentencefragment。这种断句只能使用在英语口语、某些文学作品或非正式的写作中。2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误10英语写作常见语法错误-10•(3)First,fast.Youcantype90to100wordsinoneminute.(4)Thepersonwhoisgoodatitcanevenmore.Andnowadays,alotofpeopleareworkinghardtoobtainthecertificateofcomputertyping.(5)Manyofthemgetcertificates,however,somedonot.•（3）这根本不是一句话，至少应改为：Firstly,itisfast.•（4）can是情态动词，后面缺少实义动词，因此意思表达不清。可改为：Thepersonwhoisgoodatitcantypeevenmorewords.•（5）however是副词，不能连接两个句子。可改为：Manyofthemgetcertificates.However,somedonot.或：Manyofthemgetcertificates;however,somedonot.2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误11句子改错（1）1.Educationisnolongerfreeasitusetobe.Educationisnolongerfreeasitusedtobe.2.Forexample,thecomputerthatisusedeverywheretodaytoincreaseefficiencyandsavethecostoflabor.Forexample,thecomputerthatisusedeverywheretodayincreasesefficiencyandsavesthecostoflabor.3.Inourcountrywevoteforourgovernment,(?)thenextfederalelectioniscomingagain.Inourcountrywevoteforourgovernmentwhenthenextfederalelectioniscomingagain.2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误12句子改错（2）4.Aftertheyexpressthereopinion,hedicidedtoreducestheoperationalexpenses.Aftertheyexpressedtheiropinion,hedecidedtoreducetheoperationalexpenses.5.Manypeoplearedishonestwithgovernment.Althoughtheyaremarried,buttheydon’twanttodeclaretheyaremarried.Manypeoplearedishonestwithgovernment.Althoughtheyaremarried,theydon’twanttodeclaretheyaremarried.2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误13句子改错（3）6.TheclosingdownofhospitalscausesinconvenienceforthegrowingnumberofpatientsinOntario.TheclosingdownofhospitalscausesinconveniencefortheincreasingpatientsinOntario.7.“Howdoyouthinkofmyboyfriend,Dad?”thegirlask.“Howdoyouthinkofmyboyfriend,Dad?”thegirlasked.8.Winterstormsthatbringice,sleet,andsnowtheycancausetrafficproblem.2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误14句子改错（4）Winterstormsthatbringice,sleet,andsnowcancausetrafficproblem.（or:Winterstormsbringice,sleet,andsnowwhichcancausetrafficproblem.)9.Thecakewassupposetobetasty.Thecakewassupposedtobetasty.10.Theriverwillfloodagainnextyearunlesswewillbuildabetterdam.Theriverwillfloodagainnextyearunlesswebuildabetterdam.2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误15句子改错（5）11.Therunnerlookerasifhewaswinded.Therunnerlookedasifhewaswinded.12.IfIwouldhavetrainedfortherace,Imighthavewon.IfIhadbeentrainedfortherace,Iwouldhavewon.13.TheinstructordividedtheworkbetweenSamandI.TheinstructordividedtheworkbetweenSamandme.2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误16句子改错（6）14.HermothertoldhershewasgoingtovisitBeijing.Hermothertoldher,“IamgoingtovisitBeijing.”15.Becauseourcarwasoverheating,itcameasnosurprisethatitbrokedownjustasitbegantorain.Becauseourcarwasoverheating,itcamewithnosurprisethatitbrokedownjustasitbegantorun.2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误17句子改错（7）16.Themoon,alongwithVenus,arevisibleinthenightsky.Themoon,alongwithVenus,isvisibleinthenightsky.17.Threehundreddollarsarewhatwemustpay.Threehundreddollarsiswhatwemustpay.18.Thecandidatefeltunusualenergetic.Thecandidatefeltunusuallyenergetic.2020/1/29英语写作常见语法错误18句子改错（8）19.ThephysicistMarieCuriediscoveredradium,(?)shewontwoNobelPrizes.ThephysicistMari