第五讲 怎样赚取“级差分”――句式要“高”,句子要“鲜”

写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页专题五书面表达英语结束专题五书面表达写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。考生在作文时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束一、利用复合句式，提升文章档次复合句包括定语从句、状语从句和名词性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句)。考生仅会用基本的句型不能体现出较强的语言运用能力，即使表达方面无错误，也不能得高分；相反，如果考生使用了较复杂结构，即使有些小错误，作文也会处于较高的档次。写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束①SoIsupposeIcangetagoodmarkwhichwillenablemetoentermyidealcollege(定语从句)．(2014·四川书面表达)③That’swhyIvalueitmorethananyothergiftIreceivedthatday(表语从句)．(2014·重庆写作)②Comparedwiththeescapeddriver,IamproudofwhatIdid(宾语从句)．(2014·湖北短文写作)写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束④Whathesays(主语从句)suggeststhathecareslittleaboutothers’painortrouble(宾语从句),evenifthey’rehisfriends(状语从句)．(2014·重庆写作)⑥Asisknowntoall(定语从句),shoesplayanimportantroleinourlife,fortheycanprotectourfeetfrombeinghurt.(2014·湖南书面表达)⑤OurschoolislocatedinanortherncityofChina,whereyoucantastemanykindsofdeliciousfood(定语从句),becauseitiswellfamousforitssnacks(状语从句)．(2014·天津书面表达)写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束二、利用句式变化，增加得分亮点1．主动不如被动巧②Tokeepthefeetdryandcomfortable,Iequipthisnewkindofshoeswithamicro­fan.→Tokeepthefeetdryandcomfortable,thisnewkindofshoesisequippedwithamicro­fan.(2014·湖南书面表达)①WeexpecteveryoneofyoutobepartoftheeventwhichencouragescreativemindsandgivesfullplaytoyourDIYskills.→EveryoneofyouisexpectedtobepartoftheeventwhichencouragescreativemindsandgivesfullplaytoyourDIYskills.(2014·辽宁书面表达)写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束2．特殊句式用法妙②IwassoexcitedthatIcouldn’twaittotrymyhandatridingit.However,itwasharderthanexpected.→SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn’twaittotrymyhandatridingit.However,itwasharderthanexpected.(2014·福建书面表达)①Youcanexpecttoreceiveonlywhenyoulearntogive.→Onlywhenyoulearntogivecanyouexpecttoreceive.(2014·重庆写作)(1)倒装句写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束③Inshort,theinclusionnotonlyhaspoisonedChinese,itmayalsobringaboutdistancebetweentheChinesepeople.→Inshort,notonlyhastheinclusionpoisonedChinese,itmayalsobringaboutdistancebetweentheChinesepeople.(2014·江苏书面表达)写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束(2)强调句Wecreatedaharmoniousatmospherewithsincerityandfaithfulness.→Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.(2014·江西书面表达)(3)省略句Asitisscheduled,wehaveEnglishTalentShowtoday.→Asscheduled,wehaveEnglishTalentShowtoday.(2014·陕西书面表达)写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束3．分词结构不可少①Whenwearefacedwithdifficulties,weneedfriendstogiveuscomfortandhelp.→Facedwithdifficulties,weneedfriendstogiveuscomfortandhelp.(2014·山东写作)②AsEnglishwordsgetpopularinbothmediaanddailylife,aChinesedictionaryhasincluded239ofthem,andleavethepublicdividedintotwoopposinggroups:“For”and“Against”．→WithEnglishwordsgettingpopularinbothmediaanddailylife,aChinesedictionaryhasincluded239ofthem,leavingthepublicdividedintotwoopposinggroups:“For”and“Against”．(2014·江苏书面表达)写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束③Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon.Itcausesseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.→Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmtolifeandtheenviroment.(2013·安徽书面表达)写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束4．虚拟语气要用好①Lookingback,IfeelbecauseIdidn’tloseheartatthattime,Iamabletorideabikenow.→Lookingback,IfeelIwouldn’tbeabletorideabikehadIlostheart.(2014·福建书面表达)②Itishightimeforbothchildrenandparentstotakeactiontomakesmallchanges.→Itishightimethatbothchildrenandparentstookactiontomakesmallchanges.(2013·福建书面表达)写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束(2014·浙江高考)学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popularsciencebooks)和文学类图书(literarybooks)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100～120个词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。注意：信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。DearMr.Wang，_____________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiYue写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束请使用高级句式提升下面考生作文[考生作文]DearMr.Wang，①WhenIknowthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.②Weneedpopularsciencebooksmost.③Usuallypopularsciencebooksexplainbasicprinciplesofnatureinasimpleandinterestingway.Theyhelpusunderstandsciencesubjectsbetterandarouseourcuriosityaboutscientificdiscoveries.写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束Inadditiontoreadingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.④SoIrecommendanothercategoryofbooks:literarybooks.⑤Classicworksarewrittenbymastersandtheypresentgreatthoughtsthroughfascinatingstoriesandlanguage.⑥Theynotonlyofferusjoyandexcitement,butalsoencourageustothinkcritically.I’llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.Yourssincerely，LiYue写作技法指导高考案例感悟应用落实体验首页上一页下一页末页第五讲怎样赚取“级差分”——句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”英语结束[升格作文]DearMr.Wang，①______________________(用现在分词作状语升级句子)②(用what引导的主语从句升级句子)③___________________________________________