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看图作文Sample1根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。短文要写得连贯、完整。1.Goovertherequirement•1.topic:•2.Tense(generally):•3.Person:Astory（atrafficaccident)pasttenseTom,he•Tom/rideabike•Alongthestreet/road•Afewdaysago/theotherday/oneday2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)•Acar/runfastto/runintohim•Tom/falloffhisbike•Suddenly2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)•Thedriver/frightened/runaway2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)•Awoman/rememberthenumberofthecar•ThepoliceThedriver/catch2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)Keywordssentencesrideabike/runfasttoWhenTomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.hithim/falloffhisbikeThecarhithim.Andhefelloffhisbike.befrightened/runawayThedriverwassofrightenedthatheranaway.seetheaccident/rememberthenumber/callthepolice/becaughtAwomansawtheaccidentandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolice.Thedriverwascaught.3.WritingapassagePassage1Tomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverwasfrightened.Heranaway.Awomansawtheaccident.Sherememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepoliceman.Thedriverwascaught.passage2Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenhesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwassofrightenedthatheranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.Fortunately,awomanhappenedtoseeitandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolicemanandtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,thedriverwascaughtandpunishedforhiswrongdoing.Passage3Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenhesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwassofrightenedthatheranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.Fortunately,awomanhappenedtoseeitandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolicemanandtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,thedriverwascaughtandpunishedforhiswrongdoing.Usingconnectives1.并列2.转折3.因果4.其他and,both…andbut,however,though,whileso,therefore,becausewhen,suddenly,immediately,assoonas,unfortunately,so…that…,finally,asaresult,WhatwasworseSummary:Howtowriteapicturestory?•Goovertherequirement（person,tense,style）•Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)•Writeapassage（usingconnectivesandaddingdetailsandspecificinformation.)基本篇章结构①点题（时间、地点、人物、事件）②事件的起因③事件的发展/过程④事件的结果⑤扣题中考作文的评分标准四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得6-8分一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得9-10分假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。homework