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Howtodescribeapersonofachievement?JaneGoodallJanehashelpedpeopleunderstandmoreaboutthechimpsandtriedhardtoprotectthem.Becauseofherresearch,wenowknowthatchimpshuntandeatmeat.Janestronglybelievesthatanimalsshouldbeleftinthewildandnotusedforentertainmentandadvertisement.Shehashelpedtosetupspecialplacesforthechimpstolivesafely.Para.1Para.2Para.3HercontributionsComments(评价）JaneGoodallisagreatwomanwhohasstudiedthefamiliesofchimpsformanyyears.ShewasborninBritain.In1960,shewenttoAfricatostudythechimpsintheirenvironment.GeneralinformationPeopleallovertheworldthinkhighlyofJaneGoodall.Herspiritinspiresallofustobedeterminedanddevoted.①②topicsentencesupportingdetailsJaneGoodallJaneGoodallisagreatwomanwhohasstudiedthefamiliesofchimpsformanyyears.ShewasborninBritain.In1960,shewenttoAfricatostudythechimpsintheirenvironment.PeopleallovertheworldthinkhighlyofJaneGoodall.Herspiritinspiresallofustobedeterminedanddevoted.LinQiaozhiLinQiaozhi,agreatwomandoctor,wasaspecialistinwomen’sillnesses.Shelivedfrom1901to1983.In1929,Shegraduatedfromuniversityandgotadoctor’sdegreeingynecology(妇科学）.LinQiaozhiworkedhardtoimprovethemedicalworkforChinesewomenandchildren.Shedevotedherselftocuttingdownthedeathratefromhavingandcaringforbabies.Shewroteabooktoteachwomentokeepbabiescleanandhealthy.Duringherlifeshehelpeddeliver50,000babies.Shewasregardedasoneofthegreatestwomenintheworld.Herkindness,devotionandselflessnessencourageallofustolearnfromher.GeneralinformationHercontributionsComments(评价）Generalinforma-tion1.2.Contrib-utions1.2.3.4.Comme-nts1.2.3.4.sbwasagreatwoman/man/adoctor…who……helpsb.do..tryhardtodo……work(hard)todo…devote…toReadthetwopassagesagainandfindsomeusefulsentencepatternsorphrasestodescribeapersonofachievementthinkhighlyofinspiresbtodoencouragesbtodoberegardedasbebornin…5.getadoctor’s/master’sdegreein…4.graduatefrom…3.livedfrom…to…5.gettheNobelPrizeforgainreceivewin6.sbwasgiventheNobelPrizefor…•Structure----总分总para.1:generalinformationabouttheperson---birthdate,birthplace,education…para.2:theachievements,discoveriesorcontributionspara.3:people’sopinion•Paragraph:topicsentencesupportingdetailsSummarystructurePara.3Para.2Para.1GeneralinformationContributionsCommentsHowtodescribeaPersonofAchievementEvaluation(评价）1.clearstructure—3paragraphs2.topicsentenceandsupportingdetails3.correctandpropersentencepatternsandphrasesHowdowedecidewhetheryourwritingisgoodornot?Yourschoolisgoingtoholdawritingcompetitionabout“apersonofachievement”.YouaregoingtowritesomethingaboutMadamCurieaccordingtothefollowinggiveninformation.WritingtimeMadamCuriegeneralinformationMadamCurie，伟大的女科学家，一生致力于物理和化学研究。出生于波兰（Poland）.生于1867年卒于1934年。1891年赴巴黎求学。经过四年的努力后，玛丽取得了物理及数学两个硕士学位。contributions居里夫人把她的一生都奉献给了发现新的元素(element)。因为她的研究，我们现在认识了钋(Po)和镭(Ra)。1903年居里夫人荣获诺贝尔物理学奖并在1911年又获得了诺贝尔化学奖。comments居里夫人被认为是世界最伟大的女性之一。她的精神鼓舞着我们很多人努力学习。•MadamCurietriedhardtodiscovernewelements.WeknowPoandRanowbecauseofherhardwork.ShegottheNobelPrizeforphysicsin1903.Eightyearslater,shegottheNobelPrizeagain,butforchemistry.Theyweregreathonoursforherhardwork.---万腾•Sheworkedharddayandnightinordertohelppeopletolearnmorenewthings.Shegained….Alsoshewasgiven…---宁子雯•In1891,shewenttoPariswhereshestudiedforfouryears.Withfouryearseffort,shegottwomaster’sdegreesin…Becauseofherstudy,weknowPoandRawhichweusedinmanyareas.---王姝•Shestudiedsohardthat4yearslater,shegottwomasters’degreesinphysicsandchemistry.---付豪•ThankstoMadamCurie,welearnaboutPoandRanow.---付力维•Tobehonest,it’sverydifficultforawomantogaintwoNobelPrizes….Sheinspiresustostudyhardanddevoteourselvestodowhichwelike.---董雨霏•Sheinspiresustostudyhard,andheractionmakeuslookuptoher.---回凤•Herexperienceinspirespeopleallovertheworldthatweshouldnevergiveupandkeepdoingthethingswhichwethinkisright.---王钰玮•Wewillneverforgetwhatshedidfortheworld.---启元•Shehasleftanextraordinaryimpressiononallofusforherdeterminationandgreatdevotion.---沙丽君•Shewasthoughtoneofthegreatestwomenintheworldandherspiritinspiredustostudyharderandharder.---马伯轩李玥•MadamCuriewasagreatwomanscientistwhodevotedherselftotheresearchofphysicsandchemistry.ShewasborninPolandandlivedfrom1867to1934.ShewenttoParistostudyandafterfouryearsshefinallygotthemaster’sdegreesofphysicsandmaths.•MadamCuriespentherwholelifediscoveringnewelements.Becauseofherresearch,wenowknowPoandRawhichwerethegreatestdiscoveryatthattime.In1903,shegaintheNobelPrizeforphysicsandthentheNobelPrizeforchemistryin1911.•MadamCurieisthoughtoneofthegreatestwomenoftheworldandshedeservedit.Herspiritalwaysencouragedustostudyharder.Herexperiencesandachievementsmovedmeandmakemestruggleformylife.霍钰•MadamCuriewasagreatscientistwhodevotedherselftothephysicsandchemistryresearchallherlife.ShewasborninPolandandlivedfrom1867to1934.In1891,shewenttoParistohavefurtherstudy.Afterfouryears’effort,shegotamaster’sdegreeinbothphysicsandmaths.•MadamCuriedevotedherselftofindingnewelementallherlife.Becauseofherpersistence,shetriedherbesttodoherwork,shemademanycontributionsfortheworld.Accordingtoherresearch,wehavealreadylearnedPoandRa.What’smore,shereceivedtheNobelPrizeforP