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怎样让书面表达文采飞扬05高考英语书面表达评分原则4：评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。第5档（20——25分）：②应用了较多的语法结构和词汇③语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力05年高考英语（湖南）书面表达:假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项征求你的意见。请根据下表所提供的信息用英语以书信形式给予答复。请在答题卡上作答。活动时间7月15日到22日或8月15日到22日活动内容参加英语角学唱英语歌曲听英语讲座表演英语短剧看英语电影教外宾学中文对活动内容的建议或要求请注意：1.选择适合你的时间，并说明理由；2.选择两项你喜欢的活动，并说明理由；3.对活动内容提出至少一个建议或要求；4.词数：100左右；5.信的开关和结尾已给出。05年高考英语书面表达范文(湖南)DearSirorMadame,I'mverygladtobeinvitedtotheEnglishsummercamp.IprefertogoinJulybecauseI'llhavetopreparemyselfforthenewschoolterminAugust.Itseemsthatalltheactivitiesyouofferareattractiveandmeaningful.ButI'dliketoattendtheEnglishlectures,fromwhichIcangetmoreinformationonBritishandAmericanculture.Withthecomingofthe2008BeijingOlympicGames,moreandmoreforeignersareeagertoknowaboutChina.SoIhopetoteachforeignersChineseandspreadChineseculture.It'sbeenadreamformetovisitBeijing.Couldyouorganizeatouraroundthecityduringthecamp?Thankyouverymuch.Yourstruly,LiPing05年高考英语（湖南）书面表达范文I'mverygladtobeinvitedtotheEnglishsummercamp.IprefertogoinJulybecauseI'llhavetopreparemyselfforthenewschoolterminAugust.Itseemsthatalltheactivitiesyouofferareattractiveandmeaningful.⑴I’mgladtodo…⑵prefertodo…⑶prepareoneselffor…⑷Itseemsthat…⑸alltheactivities（that)youoffer⑹attractive,meaningfulButI'dliketoattendtheEnglishlectures,fromwhichIcangetmoreinformationonBritishandAmericanculture.Withthecomingofthe2008BeijingOlympicGames,moreandmoreforeignersareeagertoknowaboutChina⑻I’dliketodo…⑼fromwhichIcangetmore…⑽Withthecomingofthe2008…⑾…beeagertodo…05年高考英语（湖南）书面表达范文⑺But…SoIhopetoteachforeignersChineseandspreadChineseculture.It'sbeenadreamformetovisitBeijing.Couldyouorganizeatouraroundthecityduringthecamp?05年高考英语（湖南）书面表达范文⒀…spreadChineseculture⒁Itbe…forsb.todo…⒂…organizeatour…⑿So…怎样让书面表达文采飞扬⑴I’mgladtodo…⑵prefertodo…⑶prepareoneselffor…⑷Itseemsthat…⑸alltheactivities(that)youoffer⑹attractive,meaningful⑺But…⑻I’dliketodo…⑼fromwhichIcangetmore…⑽Withthecomingofthe2008…⑾…beeagertodo…⑿So…⒀…spreadChineseculture⒁Itbe…forsb.todo…⒂…organizeatour…1.较高级词汇2.丰富的语法结构3.恰当的连接词⑵，⑶，⑹，⑾，⒀，⒂⑴，⑷，⑸，⑻，⑼，⑽，⒁⑺，⑿1.多实少虚:nice2.短语优先：Icannotbearit.Iwantit.generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospitalIcannotputupwithit.Iamlookingforwardtoit.３弃旧取新:Ｗeallhavethesamechance.Therearemoreopponents.1.较高级词汇possessopportunityexist学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。1.It’sverydangerousforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic.2.Studentsareriskingtheirliveswhenthreadingtheirwayamongcars.社会应加强对学生的交通安全教育。1.Thestudentsshouldbetaughtmoreaboutthetrafficsafety.2.Andalsoitisofgreatusetostrengthenthesafetyeducationoverthestudents.较高级词汇(Exercises1)较高级词汇(Exercises2)1.Weallthinkheisagreatman.2.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.3.Shewentthereinordertostudymusic.4.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.Weallofhim.Theplantobeafailure.Shewenttherestudyingmusic.Ourschooltwenty–sixclassrooms.thinkhighlyturnedoutforthepurposeofismadeupof较高级词汇(Exercises3)5.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.6.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.7.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.You’llfindingmyhouse.Agoodideatome.thegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.havenotroubleAgoodideasuddenlyme.Thankstooccurredstruck非谓语各种从句with复合宾语倒装独立主格虚拟等等强调句型运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。2.丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构(Exercises1)1.Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.Hecameinandtherewasababyinhisarms.(用with结构),pleasegivemeane-mail.isthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.OnhisarrivingWhatsurpriseshimHecamein,withababyinhisarms.4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟Mary联系)(用非谓语）5.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)6.TomandMarylikesingingsongs.(使用倒装）Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthat，hecan’tgetintouchwithTomNotknowinghistelephonenumberheknewwhathadhappened.丰富的语法结构(Exercises2)Tomlikessingingsongs,Mary.sodoes7.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.（使用句型结构）9.Becausetheweatherisfine,manypeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternhill.（使用独立主格结构）bymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.,alargenumberofpeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.hespoke,excitedhefelt.丰富的语法结构(Exercises3)FollowedThemorethemoreTheweatherbeingfine一篇好的书面表达，还应该行文连贯流畅，具有“逻辑美”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更具“英语味”。记得使用恰当的连接词，如:soon,immediately,suddenly,infrontof,nextto,ononehand,ontheotherhand,however,though,otherwise,thanksto,asaresult(of),solongas,onconditionthat,evenif/though,what’smore,besides,tomakethematterworse,I’mafraid,youknow,Asweallknow…3.恰当的连接词1.Thisvillageisverysmall.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978.2.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.3.Yesterday，therewasapolicemaninthestreet.Hestoppedacar.Thecarwasatthecorner.ItlookedlikeaHonda.Therewasaboyonthesidewalk.Hewasridinghisbicycle.Thebicyclewasatwo-wheeler.Thecarnearlyknockeddowntheboy.Yesterda