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作文专题复习——慰问信•（一）．文体概述•慰问信是指在同学、亲友考试失利、生病、受伤或遇到火灾、水灾、地震等不幸事件时，对对方表示慰问的信件。慰问信要写得真诚并注意措辞,要围绕一个中心,鼓励对方并令其得到安慰和鼓舞。•内容常包括：对不幸事件表示同情→进行安慰和帮助和鼓励→再次表示同情并希望其早日复原。(二)．必备词汇•1.sorrow____________2.Flood____________•3.gothrough____________4.recovery____________•5.wish____________•6.convey____________•7.sympathy____________8.deeply____________•9.shocked____________10.quickly____________•11.sad____________悲伤（名词）sadness洪灾（其他常见自然灾害的词？）渡过，熬过恢复，康复祝愿传达关心，同情，慰问深深地震惊快速地rapidlyfast伤心，难过(三)．必备短语•1.我很抱歉知……•_______________________•2.听到……我深感难过_______________________•3.请接受我最深切的慰问______________________•4.我无法相信……___________________•5.请转达我对……的同情_______________________•6.最好的祝愿……______________________Iamdeeplysorrytohearthat…Iwassosorrytolearnofthenewsthat…Pleaseacceptmydeepestsympathy…Icouldn’tbelievethat…Pleaseconveymysympathyto…Bestwishesfor…•7.我们都希望……________________________•8.我相信你会成功……________________________•9.完全康复_______________________•10.出院________________________•11.我祝你快速康复________________________•12.渡过难关________________________Weareallhoping…Iamsureyouwillsucceedin…makeafullrecoveryleavethehospitalIwishyouquickrecoverygothroughthedifficulty(四)．必备句式•1.听说水灾毁了你的家，我难过极了。•__________________________________________________________________•2.我们感到很悲痛。•__________________________________________•3.请转达我向你家人的慰问。•__________________________________________•4.祝你很快度过（难关）。•__________________________________________Iwassosorrytohearthattheflooddestroyedyourhouse..Wearefilledwithdeepsorrow.Pleaseconveymysympathytoyourfamily.Iwishyougothroughthedifficultysoon.•5.大家都希望你早日归来。•_____________________________________•6.如果需要我的帮助，请告知。•_____________________________________________________________________•7.我们真心希望你能很快完全康复。•_____________________________________•Weallreallyhopethatyouwillmakeafullrecoverysoon.IfthereisanythingIcandotohelpyou,pleaseletmeknow.5.Weareallhopingyouwillbebacksoon.(五).慰问信的结构•第一段：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；•第二段：安慰对方或鼓励对方或者提出给予帮助•第三段：表达愿望和祝福。六解题步骤：•1）审题：•确定写作的信件类型:__慰问信_______•确定人称：第一，第二人称（有可能有第三人称）。•确定时态：现在时，过去时，将来时•2)列提纲：用自己的话将题目要求的要点陈述出来。•①开头：不认识的要做自我介绍，但是认识的不用问候。引出收信人遭受的不好事件，并表达惋惜同情。•②内容：对收信人表达安慰，鼓励，或者帮助。(三方面）•③结尾：表达对收信人的美好祝愿和祝福例题1：•据报道，7岁的美国女孩AmyBruce得知自己身患肺癌(lungcancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：•1.自我介绍2.得知的Amy的情况•3.表示鼓励4.打算为她做什么•5.祝她早日康复•DearAmy,•I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchoolofChina.I’msorrytohearthatyougotthelungcancerwhichbroughtyougreatpain.Iquiteunderstandhowyoufeelnow.•Butyoushouldrealizethatyouareyoungandhaveabrightfuture.Sostandupandfightagainstthedisease!I’msureyouwillwin.ItisreportedthattheAmericaanti-cancerassociationwilldonatethreecentsuponeverycomfortletteryoureceive.•SoIwilltellyoursituationtoallmyfriendsandaskthemtowritetoyou.Inthatway,youwillgetenoughmoneyforyoutobecured.•Hopeyoucangothroughthedifficultyandmakefullrecoverysoon.Yours,•Lihua•例题2：•你班同学Tom生重病住院两个星期了，同学们都很难过。今天班主任要去医院看他，并请你代表全班同学些一封慰问信，要点如下：•1.表示同情和关心•2.送他一个包裹（幸运星和千纸鹤；现金一万元）•3.祝他早日康复，返校上课•参考词汇：幸运星：luckystars千纸鹤：papercranes•DearTom,I’amverysorrytoheatthatyouareseriouslyillandthatyouhavebeeninhospitalforabouttwoweeks.Weareveryconcernedaboutyouandyourstudies.•Ourheadteacherwillcometoseeyoutodaysoweaskhimtobringyouapackagewithsomeluckystarsandcolorfulpapercranesinit.Ihopeyouwilllikeitanditwillbringgoodlucktoyou.Alsoyou’llreceive10,000yuan,whichwillhelpyoupaythemedicalfees.•Don’tworryaboutyourstudies.We’lltrytohelpyoumakeupthelessonsyouhavemissedbecausewearegoodfriends.IhopeIcancomeandseeyousoononSunday.•Everyoneinourclassmissesyouverymuch,hopingyou’llbewellandgetbacksoon.•Yourssincerely,•LiHua课堂演练：•假定你是李华，你的同班好友小明的家乡（湖北）5月1日以来数日降雨遭受洪灾，洪水毁坏了家园，你作为朋友给正在抗洪的她写一封慰问信，要点如下：•1.对该同班好友（小明）表示关心。•2.向其提供一些帮助，如捐助和回校后为她补习。•3.希望她对生活充满希望。•注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。••Dearxiaoming,We’resosorrytohearthatahorriblefloodhappenedinyourhometownandyourhouseisinruins.We’refilledwithdeepsorrow.Pleaseconveymysympathytoyourfamily.Thinkingaboutyourpresentsituation,wecannotwaittomakeourefforttohelpyou.Asyourfriend,onbehalfofourclass,Iexpressourmostsincerepityandcareforyou.Besides,wemadeadonationofsomemoney,expectingthatitcanhelpyougothroughthedifficulty.Webelievethatwiththehelpofsomanykindpeople,abetterhousecanberebuilt.Finally,we’reallhopingyou’llbebacksoonandwewillmakeupthelessonsforyou.Weallhopeyoucanrealizethatitisfullofhopeforlife.Yourssincerely,LiHua课外作业假定你是李华，你的好友李明参加了今年的中国好声音(TheVoiceofChina)比赛，没有进入决赛，感到很伤心。请你给他写一封慰问信，要点如下：1.表示难过和理解。2.失败原因不在于他，而是另有别的缘故。3.勉励他不要灰心，来年再战必能成功。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。DearLiMing,IamdeeplysadtohearthatyoucouldnotenterthefinalsofTheVoiceofChinaofthisyear.Iquiteunderstandhowyoufeelnow.Youhavebeendoingwellandyourfailureisnotyourownfault,Iamsure.However,asweknow,failureisthemotherofsuccess.Idohopeyouwon’tloseheartandwillgetreadytotryagain.Stillyouhavemanymorechancestotryforyouaresoyoung.Fate(命运)onlycanbechangedbyworkinghard,soifyougoonpractisingsinging,Iamsureyouwillsucceednextyear.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua