3.英语四级作文之图画作文

四级图画作文作文四大要素根据教育部公布的《大纲解析》，大作文四大要素为描述、寓意、分析、评论。根据历年考题，首段应是图画描述，不应发表太多议论，否则属于跑题。图画描述至少应有两句，根据大纲解析，如果图画只字未提，扣三分之一的分数；如果图画只描述一句，属于描述不充分，扣3分。写作框架：1）第一段主要是描述图画中的信息和表达的含义。2）第二段的全文的重点，一般都是要求具体分析图画中暗含的社会现象。3）第三段的要求一般视具体的试题而定，有的要求给出自己的评论、有的要求举例、有的要求考生提出自己的建议以及针对现象应该采取的措施。Tips：第二段和第三段的开头最好写一个主题句，既可以防止离题，又符合英文写作的习惯。议论文框架结构：3段，12句，120－180词，3－5个关联词，3－5个从句第一段：引言/起始/淘金段，图画描述，3句1.总体描述：人物/动物/事物＋动作＋环境1句2.挖掘细节词、串连成句：1句3.文字说明/象征寓意：1句第二段：主体段，意义阐释，5句1.主题句：象征寓意，1句2.论证：3句1）因果论证2)影响论证3)举例论证3.小结：概括论证，总结本段1句第三段：结论段，建议措施，4句1.结论句：1句2.针对双方提建议：2句3.包装结尾、展望未来：1句Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvethisproblem.Itishightimethatwesolvedthisproblem.第一段套话如何描述首段写法其实，阅卷教师最重视的就是大作文第一段，也是最难写的段落，盲目套用模板、空发议论，容易导致低分。阅卷教师最希望看到的写法是:首句总体描述图画，点出人物、动作和环境；次句挖掘细节词、串连成句，将图中细节一网打尽；（根据情况而定）末句点出文字说明或象征寓意。可以发表议论，最好不要太多。描述图画的常用词有关图画的名词描述图画的形容词修饰动词的副词“寓意”、“字幕”如何翻译？替换picture的词语drawing指用线条或色彩绘成的图画。cartoon指幽默或讽刺性漫画。(amusingdrawinginanewspaperormagazine,esponethatcommentssatiricallyoncurrentevents(报刊上的)漫画；（尤指）时事讽刺画。)portrait指肖像，只用于指人。illustration插画描述图画的形容词thought-provoking发人深省的enlightening有启迪作用/使人感悟的compelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起兴趣profound含义深刻=far-reachingimplicationsinstructive有益的（=informative）（搭配ADV:extremely,highly,most,particularly,quite）amusing令人发笑的，ridiculous荒谬可笑的illuminating(particularlyrevealingorhelpful)富有启发性的；很有助益的；impressive印象深刻的，exaggerative夸张的修饰动词的副词：graphically/vividly生动地symbolically象征性地conspicuously/clearly/explicitly清晰地subtly巧妙地，精细地寓意：moral/implications/messagehaveaprofoundimplicationbepregnantwithmeaningentertainathoughtdeeply字幕:Caption:wordsprintedwithanillustrationoraphotographinordertodescribeorexplainit（附於插图、照片上的）说明文字1)Weareinformedbythecaptionthat“___”.2)Thecaptionreads/indicatesthat“___”.第一句描述图画怎么写？描述图画时需要遵循以下步骤：1.寻找出图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。2.描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。3.寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。屌丝版：Thereisamanwhoisrunningontheplayground.Heisrushingtothefinal.Thefinalisdefinedasanothernewstart.1.句型单一，2.不具备可复制Asisshowninthepicture,+完全倒装结构（主系表表系主）+非谓语动词结构+定语从句Thereisamanwhoisrunningontheplayground.Ontheplaygroundrunsayoungman.Asisshowninthepicture,+完全倒装结构（主系表表系主）+非谓语动词结构+定语从句Thereisamanwhoisrunningontheplayground.Heisrushingtothefinnal.Ontheplaygroundrunsayoungman,rushingtothefinnal.Asisshowninthepicture,+完全倒装结构（主系表表系主）+非谓语动词结构+定语从句Thereisamanwhoisrunningontheplayground.Heisrushingtothefinnal.Thefinalisdefinedasanotherstart.Ontheplaygroundrunsayoungman,rushingtothefinnal，whichisdefinedasanotherstart.某个位置有中心事物中心事物什么样周围事物什么样完全倒装非谓语动词非限定性定从常见可用于四级写作的完全倒装的系动词有be,come,run,walk,jump,sit,stand,lie,crouch蜷缩,float等表示动作的动词。屌丝版：Asisshowninthecartoon,acandleisshininginthedark.Itspreadsbrightnessarounditself.女神版：Asisshowninthecartoon,inthepicturestandsacandle,spreadingbrightnessarounditself.屌丝版：Asisshownabove,ayoungmanwasaskinghisbarbertohavehishaircutlikeDavidBeckham.女神版：Asisshownabove,inthechairsitsayoungman,askinghisbarbertohavehishaircutascoolasDavidBeckham.屌丝版：Asisvividlydepictedabove,thereisabottlefallingtotheground,thewinespileout.Onemanthinksit'sallover,whiletheotheronethinksitstillleftalittle.女神版：Asisvividlydepictedabove,inthepictureliesabottle,fallingtothegroundwithwinespiltout.Onemanwholooksverysadthinksit'sallover,whiletheotherone,happilyrushingtothebottle,saysitstillleftalittle.练一个呗Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,inthepicturestandsaboy,worriedaboutdisposingofnuclearwaste,whilehisfatherinstructshimtoemptythedustbininhisroomfirst.(33words)Dad,I’mabitworriedaboutdisposingofnuclearwaste.Ifyoucanemptythedustbinhere,youcandoanything.Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,infrontofblackboardstandsateacher,teachingmathematics,however,oneofherstudentsholdstheopinionthattheknowledgeheislearningmightbeoutdatedbythetimehe'sinthejobmarket.(42words)Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,intheclassroonstandsateacher,askingherstudenttoreadaworkofliteratureasifhewerereadingalongtext-message,whilethestudentfeelsratherunpleasant.(37words)Justthinkofitasifyou’rereadingalongtext-message.”TheamazingachievementofteamworkAsisvividlydepictedabove,inthecartoonstandtwomen,dressedintraditionalArabclothes,watchingtheconstructionofancientpyramid,whichistheamazingachievementofteamwork.Lifeisneveraneasyroadtotravel.Asisvividlydepictedabove,inthecartoonstandtwotravellers,travellingacrossmountainsandgrasslandswithheavybaggagesontheirshoulders.第一段常用首句句式Asisshown/depicted/portrayedinthepicture/cartoon,....Thepictureabovevividlydescribe....Thedrawingabovedoesdemonstratecertainthought-provokingsocialphenomenon.Whatdoestheauthorintendtoconveybydescribing...isthat....第一段第二句由图片描述上升到文字说明或寓意的阐释由浅入深之句型①Simpleandfunnyasthecartoonis,itreflectsthat....②Thepictureimplicitly含蓄地，暗示地raisesthequestionoftheimportanceof....③Thepictureseemstobehumorousatfirstglance/sight，butonsecondthoughts(=afterreconsideration),youcanfindthefactthat_____.④Theprimarypurposeofthepicturesaboveisthatdueattentionshouldbepaidto....Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,inthepicturestandsaboy,worriedaboutdisposingofnuclearwaste,whilehisfatherinstructshimtoemptythedustbininhisroom