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请求信ALetterofRequest请求信:对收信人提出请求，并希望对方满足该要求。重点:写清楚为什么+原因写作“三步走”：介绍自己、提出请求-说明原因及其它事项-表达谢意、期盼答复(首先要说明写作意图，一定要注意语气要礼貌，用词要规范;然后具体展开说明请求的原因;最后表示希望对方予以答复)闪光词汇及词组：•inthehopeof:希望•assistance:n.帮助，协助•firstandforemost:首先•oweto:因为，由于•asto:关于，至于•sparesometime:花一些时间•failtodosth:没能做成某事万能句型&写作模板万能句型：•Iamwritinginthehopeofyourassistanceto...•Iamwonderingifyoucouldsparesometimeto...•Couldyoupleasedomethefavorof...•Lookingforwardtoapromptreplyfromyou.•Thankyouforyourtime/kindness.【请求信写作模板】Dear______,①Iamwritingtoformallyrequestto______（请求的内容）.②Thereasonfor______isthat______（给出原因）.③I______,soI______（给出细节）.④Iwouldalsoliketorequest______（提出进一步的要求）.⑤IamsorryforanyinconvenienceIhavecaused.⑥Thankyouforyourattentiontotheserequests.⑦Ifyouhaveanyquestions,donothesitatetocontactmeat______（电话号码）.⑧Ilookforwardtoafavorablereply.Yourssincerely,LiMingAWritingSample-Directions:YouwanttocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.Writealettertothedepartmentconcerned,askingthemtohelpfindacandidate.Youshouldspecifywhatkindofchildyouwanttohelpandhowyouwillcarryoutyourplan.范文：ToWhomItMayConcern,MynameisLiMing,acollegestudentofPekingUniversity,andIamwritinginthehopeofyourassistancetofindaneedychildforwhomImayprovidefinancialsupport.FirstandforemostIwouldliketodeclarethatIpossessthefinancialabilitytoimplementthisplanowingtomydecentincomefrompart-timejobs.Astothecandidate,Iamhopingthathe/shecomesfromanelementaryschoolofthelessdevelopedareasofWesternChina,whoisforcedoutofschool.Iwouldliketopayforhis/hertuitionfeeandotherschoolexpensesuntilhe/shegraduatesfromuniversity.Thankyouforyourtime.Yourscordially,LiMingWritingtask1•假设你是李华，于2015年10月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班（flightnumberBA793）回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase）。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。信件要点包括：陈述写信原因简要描述该行李说明其重要性期待回复并表示感谢注意：1.词数100左右。2.信件格式已为你给出。3.请在答题卡上作答。•【思路点拨】试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是对箱子的描述。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯Proofreading1.I’mwritinginhopeofyourassistancetofindoutasuitcasewhichwasmissedonOct.3rd.2.Atthebottomofthesuitcaseisprintedmyname.3.Oneofmysuitcasehadlost.4.IfoundmysuitcasemissingafterIarrivedtheairport.5.ItookaflightwhichnumberisBA907.6.ItooktheflightnumberBA793andlostmysuitcasewhilethisjourney.7.AnxietyasIwas,Ididn’tknowwhattodo.8.IthasalovelyHelloKittyonitscover.9.There’salittleTeddyBearattachingontheleftsideofmysuitcase.10.Mysuitcaseistotallyinblack,whosecoverismadebyleather.Descriptionoflostsuitcase•区别：abriefcase,atravelingbagandasuitcase•拉杆箱:•trolleycase;luggagecase•皮/帆布箱:•leather/canvastrunk/suitcase•箱锁?衣箱提手?•suitcaselock；suitcasehandle•手里提着一只黑色的小皮箱•He'scarryingasmallblacksuitcase.•afashionablewaterproofbusinessstylesuitcase•一个浅红色的旅行箱，贴了很多标签。•Itisalightredsuitcasewithalotoftags/labels/stickers.•一个上面系有我名牌的大型皮制黑色行李箱•Itisalargeblueleathersuitcasewithmynametag(tiedonit).其他描述：尺寸？轮子？•Thesuitcaseis1.2metreslongand0.5metreswide.•Itisatwenty-eight-inchsuitcase.•Thesizeofmysuitcaseis40X30X20inches.•Mysuitcaseisonwheels,soitiseasytopull.WritingHighlights•I’mwritinginthehopeofyourassistancetofindasuitcaseIlostwhenItookyourcompany’sflightBA793onOctober3,2015.•Firstandforemost,IwouldliketodeclarethatthesuitcaseisofgreatsignificanceformeanditissopricelessthatIcan’tafforditsloss.•NotuntilIdisembarkedfromtheplanedidIrealizethatmysuitcasehadbeenlost.•ThusIdependonyourhelpinsearchofmysuitcase.Therearealternatestripesofpinkandwhiteonthesurfaceandonthebottomofthesuitcasemynameisneatlyinscribed.•Itwasallmycarelessnessthatcausedthisincident,soIapologizeforthetroubleIcaused.【参考范文1】•DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,anexchangestudentstudyingintheUSA.ItooktheflightBA793fromNewYorkbacktoGuangzhouonOct3,2015.ButwhenIcametomyhome,IfoundIlostasuitcase.Iamwritingtoyouinthehopeofyourassistancetofinditback.Mysuitcaseisasmallblueonewithazip.Thereisalabelonthehandlewithmynameandaddressonit.ItisreallyimportantformebecauseIhadputallmyimportantdocumentsinit,includingmyIDcard,passportandsoon.Besides,itiswhatmyfathersenttomeonmybirthday.Thanksforyourattentiontomyrequest.Ifyouhaveanyclue,donothesitatetocontactmeat0755-25282020.Ilookforwardtoreceivingyourearliestreply.Yourstruly,•LiHua.【范文点评】文章要点齐全，写作层次清晰，紧扣要点框架并适当添加细节，行文连贯，句式多变，能够正确运用各种复合句，对箱子的描述恰当得体。【参考范文2】•DearSirorMadam,MynameisLiHua,andIwasapassengeronFlightHZH9211ofyourairline,returningfromBritainonMarch2nd,2015.Unfortunately,IfoundmysuitcaselostwhenIarrivedattheairport.Iamthereforewritingtoaskforyourhelpinfindingmysuitcase.Firstandforemost,thesuitcaseisafashionableyellowleatherone,whosesizeis80X40X25cm.Withmynametagtiedonthehandle,itcontainsmanyimportantpersonalfilesandsomescientificmaterials.TherearealsosomepresentsIboughtformyfamilymembersandfriends.Thus,itwillbeagreatdisappointmenttomeifIcan’tfindit.Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpfindmylostsuitcase.IamsorryforanyinconvenienceIhavecausedandI’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Writingtask2•李明在光明路一家中外合资公司买了一台电冰箱，使用半年后出现了问题。即向公司写信要求来人修理。内容如下：1．去年我在你们商店买了一台电冰箱，外形和颜色我都很满意。2．但是，最近发现电冰箱时常发出噪音，从低到高，有时甚至停止工作。3．我们对此深感失望。希望能尽快派人来修理。来时请打电话联系