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英语写作讲解现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。并说明你的主张。６５％的学生认为３５％的学生认为１．应该春游１．不应该春游２．接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康２．高考临近，没有心情玩３．活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习３．春游耽误学习学生作文展示25班刘茂强ThereisanarguementonwhetherSenior3studentsshouldgospringoutingornot.Finally,wegetthefollowingresults.About65%ofthestudentsthinkweshouldgospringouting.Becauseitmayletustouchnature,andwecangetfreshair.Asweknow,itisgoodforourhealth.What’smore,goingspringoutingmakesourbrainsrelaxed,whichhelpsusstudywell.However,about35%ofstudentsareagainstit.Becausecollegeentranceexaminationiscoming,wemightnothaveagoodtime.Andithasabadeffectonourschoolwork.Therefore,theythinktheyshouldn’tgospringouting.评语：文章信息完整，结构好，连贯流畅卷面整洁,书写工整。高考作文类型：——对比观点题型要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法写作基本步骤：１．仔细审题，列举大纲。２．围绕要点，写出句子。３．添加过度，确保连贯。４．先求正确，再求灵活。５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。分四段写：Para.1.Introduction:引入主题句Para.2.Point1有一些人认为……Para.3.Point2另一些人认为……Para.4.Conclusion我的看法……Theoutlineofthewriting:写作基本步骤：第一：仔细审题，列举大纲。写作基本步骤：第二：围绕要点，写出句子。•1.gradethreestudentsofahigh/middleschool•2.Thereare65%studentsagreeit.•3.Have65%studentsagreeit.----65%ofthestudentsagreewithitbeinfavoroftheideabefortheidea•4.Theythoughtgospringoutingcantouchthenature.----TheythinkwecangetclosetonaturebygoingspringoutingGradeThree---Senior3students•5.Theythinkgoingspringoutingcanmakethembreaththefresh/fleshair.•呼吸新鲜空气（breathesomefreshair)•6.Itisbenefittotheirhealthy.Itisbeneficialtotheirhealth.•7.makespiritloose.精神放松（relaxoneselfrefreshoneself/makesbrelaxed•8.letourbrainhaveagoodrest大脑休息（resttheirbrains）Chinglish,即中式英语•9.begoodforstudyingbegoodforstudy•10.(1)Highexamwillcome.(2)Becauseofcollegeentranceexaminationiscoming.(3)Withcollegeentranceexaminationiscoming.------Withthecollegeentranceexaminationcoming.Keywords:高三学生（senior3students）春游(gospringouting）讨论（discussion）接触自然（beclosetonature）呼吸新鲜空气（breathesomefreshair）精神放松（relaxthemselves）大脑休息（resttheirbrains）高考临近（withcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear）没心情玩（don’tfeellikeplayingoutside）耽误学习(wastethetime)在我看来（inmyopinion…）Para.1.主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性Howwillyoustartyoupassage?Introduction:（sample）ShouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.巧用过渡句、过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系Payspecialattentiontothetransitionsentences:Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Differentpeopleholddifferent/oppositeopinions.写作基本步骤：第三：添加过度，确保连贯。Point1:65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）Sentencepattern:Mostofus(about65%)holdtheopinionthat…,…ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…About65%ofthestudentsarefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康Sentencepattern:Theythinkitgoodtodosth……/sthdogoodtosthIntheiropinion,itisofgreatbenefittodosth……Eg:Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair.Reason2:活动使精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习（注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进what’smore；besides;moreover;inaddition；furthermoreEg:what’smore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Conclusion:小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。•Eg:Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudy.•Point2:３５％的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）•注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）•Sentencepattern:•However,otherspreferto…•Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion…..•Ontheotherhand….•Eg:Ontheotherhand,about35%ofthestudentsareagainsttheidea.•Reason1:高考临近，没有心情玩•Sentencepattern:•Theysay/believe/holdtheopinion…that….•Eg:Theysaythatwiththecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.•Reason2:春游耽误学习•（注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudy.ShouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.About65%ofthestudentsarefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair.what’smore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudy.参考范文onepossibleversionOntheotherhand,about35%ofthestudentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwiththecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudy.Inmyopinion,I’dliketosaythatweshouldgospringouting.A、运用高级词汇或短语B、增加形容词或副词C、灵活运用各种句型亮点点拨ShouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.About65%ofthestudentsarefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat’smore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudy.Ontheotherhand,about35%ofthestudentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwiththecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudy.beclosetoenergeticfeellikegoingaffordfixtheirattentiononheatedfresh表示观点对比类写作作文模版Thetopicof①——（主题）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.…ofthemareinfa