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1课前提示是否已与论文指导教师见面是否已确定论文选题初稿写作遇到何种问题、困难务必严格遵守论文写作时间节点是否已下载“毕业论文模板”2毕业论文格式规范论文组成部分封面（统一格式，以后发放）致谢摘要（英文、中文、关键词）目录（第8讲介绍）正文（参见“毕业论文模板”）参考书目（同上）3Acknowledgements（致谢）Whomtothank:-Advisor,teachers-Colleagues,mates,friends-LovedonesFormalandpolite-Firstofall/Tobeginwith,I’dliketo…-Mythanksalsogoesto…-Inaddition,Ialsowantto…-Andfinally,Ihaveto…4Abstract（摘要）篇幅简短（仅一段文字，150字左右）内容简炼，结构完整简要说明论文的主题、主要论点和结论不用引文，避免主观(not:I/we,but:Thepaper/thesisfocuseson/triestoprove/show…)先用中文概括，再译成英文排列：英文在前，中文在后（如够短小，可放在一页内）示例5Keywords（关键词）罗列3~5个与论文内容最密切相关的关键词各关键词的顺序按与论文内容的密切程度排列关键词需另起行排列于“摘要”之后关键词之间均用“,”隔开最后一个关键词后无标点符号关键词可以不是论文题目中出现的词示例6论文常见格式、规范错误题目：大小写、行数、移行;用“:”or---时态一致性：“现在时”还是“过去时”数字表达：“全拼”还是“阿拉伯数字”单复数、词性、指代不明引文信度：时效性恰当引文：改写+标出处7论文时态的一致性TheyoungestdaughterLydiaelopedwithWickhamwascomeasasurprisetousinthestory.AsMrs.Bennet'sfavoritedaughter,Lydiawasempty-headed,idleandenjoyedsearchingoftheofficersinMerydon.Wickhamisoneofthem.Shecannotresisthissweetwordsandgooffwithhim.Sometimesoneofficerhasbeenherfavoriteandsometimesanother.Ontheotherhand,Wickhamdidnotreallyloveherandhadnointentiontomarryher.8数字表达问题JaneAustenwasborninHampshireon16thDecember1775.Shewasthe7thdaughterofan8childrenfamily.Thefirst25yearsofherlifeJanespentinHampshire.Shediedin1816,agedonly41.In2000,BBChasmadesurvey“TheChoiceofThousandYearsWriter”,JanefollowedafterShakespeare,ranked2nd,moreover,shewastheonlywomenonthetopten.Janestartedherwritinginher20-year-old,including6rivernovels.用阿拉伯数字:年份、日期、时间;﹥100非整数;百分比9指代关系、单复数不清；词性混用Mary,thethirddaughter,anerd,sheispedantic,pride,affectedandsilly.BothMaryandElizabethwanttobeaknowledgeableladythroughreadingbookssothattheycouldbeimproved.Shealwaysfindschancestodemonstratehertalent.ButMaryseemsthatshehasn’tthetalenttobeaccomplished,onthecontrary,shegivepeopleanimpressionofstupidandsilly.Theywouldliketomarryamanforlivewithoutanypassion.Theirmarriagesareunhappy.Theyarelookeddownbytheirhusbandsandsubmittedtothemwithoutrespect.10论文中的引文信度：时效、数据NationalCrimeVictimizationSurveydata(?)showthatbothcrimesaimedatpropertyandcrimesagainstpersonsdecline.Andin1998theFBIdatashowedthatthemurderratewasthelowestinthepast30years.Butunluckily,westillhavetosaythatthiscountryisstillaviolentsociety.Afterthedecrease,therearestill16,000homicideseachyear.Eachdayabout70personsdieofhomicide(?).AndpeoplewhodieofhandgunsinonedayarefivetimesmorethanthatinEnglandinawholeyear(?).GovernmentestimatesthatfouroutoffiveAmericansmaybeavictimofviolenceintheirlife(?).365x70=2555011引文恰当性：改写+标注(1)…whenMr.Bennettalkedaboutherfivedaughters,hesaid“Theyhavenoneofthemmuchtorecommendthem”(p.2).“Theyareallsillyandignorantlikeothergirls;butLizzyhassomethingmoreofquicknessthanhersisters”(p.2).…whenMr.Bennettalksaboutherfivedaughters,hedoesnotthinktheyhave“muchtorecommend”becausetheyare“allsillyandignorantlikeothergirls,”buthereferstoElizabethasonewho“hassomethingmoreofquicknessthanhersisters”(p.2).12引文恰当性：改写+标注(2)e.g.Fromthebook,theimpressionofMrs.Catherinewegetishaughty,domineeringandcondescending,Thisgreatladywasnotinthecommissionofthepeaceforthecounty,shewasamostactivemagistrateinherownparish,theminutestconcernsofwhichwerecarriedtoherbyMr.Collins;andwheneveranyofthecottagersweredisposedtobequarrelsome,discontentedortoopoor,shesalliedforthintothevillagetosettletheirdifferences,silencetheircomplaints,andscoldthemintoharmonyandplenty(p.134).13Inthenovel,Mrs.Catherineisdescribedasaproud(haughty),demanding(domineering)andelegant(condescending)lady,adominantfigure“inherownparish”.Ifanyoneinthevillagetendstobequarrelsomeorshowsanydiscontent,sheisreadytobethereto“settletheirdifferences,silencetheircomplaints,andscoldthemintoharmony”(p.134).Thisgreatladywasnotinthecommissionofthepeaceforthecounty,shewasamostactivemagistrateinherownparish,theminutestconcernsofwhichwerecarriedtoherbyMr.Collins;andwheneveranyofthecottagersweredisposedtobequarrelsome,discontentedortoopoor,shesalliedforthintothevillagetosettletheirdifferences,silencetheircomplaints,andscoldthemintoharmonyandplenty(p.134).14EndofPresentation615请准备下次的课堂测验测验形式：开卷但不能互助测验题型：定义、填空、选择、改错等内容：讲稿、教材-相关概念、定义-论文、引文的规范格式GoodLuck!