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HowtoWriteaLetterofAskingforHelpLeadin•Readasampleofawritingpassageandfindoutthestructureandcharacteristicsofaletterforhelp.假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（LearningCenter）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.本人简历2.求助内容3.约定时间4.你的联系方式（Email:[e-mail];Phone:[phone])注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.结束语已为你写好。DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.I’mwritingtoaskforhelp.IcameherelastmonthandIfindmycoursesinteresting.ButIhavesomedifficultieswithnote-makingandIhavenoideaofhowtousethelibrary.IwastoldtheLearningCenterprovideshelpforstudentsandI’manxioustogethelpfromyou.IhavenoclassonTuesdaymorningsandFridayafternoons.Pleaseletmeknowwhichdayisokwithyou.Youmayemailorphoneme.Herearemyemailaddressandphonenumber:[e-mail];12345678.Thanksforyourkindnessinadvance.Lookforwardtoyourreply.yours,LiHua点明目的描述困难恳求帮助表示感谢•1.交代背景/询问对方，_________；•2.叙述现状，________，________；•3.寻求帮助，________，期盼回复。Commonstructure点明目的描述困难恳求帮助表示感谢Characteristics1.通常使用的时态：_______________；2.阐述要清晰，用词要恰当，注意语气委婉、真诚；情态动词多使用__________3.注意使用过渡性词汇，如：first,besides,also,what’smore,atthesametime,meanwhile,inaddition,unfortunately,luckily,thus,however,sothat等等。一般现在时would/couldUsefulexpressionsforwritingtheletter:•A.点明目的•B.描述困难•C.恳求帮助•D.表示感谢•E.期盼回复PresentationA.点明目的我写信是为了向你寻求帮助。1._________________________________2._______________________________________________________________Moreexpressions：3.Iamsorrytobotheryou,butIreallyneedyourhelp(with…)4.I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucanhelpme.IamwritingthislettertoaskyoutodomeI’mwritingtoyoutoget/askforsomehelp.afavor/givemeahand.B.描述困难我在英语学习方面遇到了一些困难。1.________________________________________________________________2.________________________________Moreexpressions：3.Iamnowconfrontedwiththedifficultywith…/followingdifficulties..4.ThereasonwhyIwritethisletteristhatIhavetroublewhenIdosth.Ifinditdifficultformetodosth.Ihavesomedifficulty/troubleindoing…(because…)C.寻求帮助/建议你可以帮助我吗？1._________________________________2._______________________________________________________________Moreexpressions：3.Facedwith/Facingsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoturntoyouforsomehelp.4.Itwouldbeveryhelpfulifyoucoulddomeafavor.5.Ireallydon’tknowwhattodoandexpectyoutogivemeyouradvice/suggestions.6.IhavenoideawhatIshoulddoandlongforyouradvice.IwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththeCouldyoupleasegivemeahand?difficulty.D.表示感谢如果你能帮助我/给予我建议，我将不胜感激。1.Iwouldbegrateful___________________________________________________2.Iwould_________it________________________________________________Moreexpressions：3.Iwouldliketoexpressmythanks/gratitudeinadvance(foryourkindness).4.Thankyoufor…ifyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions(onhowtosolvetheproblem).appreciateifyoucouldoffermehelp.E.期盼回复希望尽快收到你的来信。1.________________________________________________________________2.________________________________Moreexpressions：3.Isincerelyhopetogetyourtimelyreply.4.Yourkindearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.Expectingyourwritingbacksoon.Lookingforwardto/Hopingforyourearlyreply(andI’llbegratefulforyourhelp).PracticeExample1：（2011山东卷）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speechcontest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：a．询问Tom的生活和学习情况；b．谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；c．告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意：a．词数：100左右；b．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Step1：构思审题时态人称提纲（提取信息）Para1Para2Para3一般现在时第一、第二人称Tom上个月来到北京学习，询问Tom的生活和学习情况。我将去参加英语演讲比赛，在……等方面遇到了困难。打算赛后去看Tom求助，感谢Step2：提笔DearTom,IthasbeenamonthsinceyoustudiedinBeijing.①(问候)____________________________________________?IamgoingtoBeijingtotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestformiddleschoolstudentsinJulythissummer.However,②（搜集资料困难）__________________________________________whenIcollectusefulmaterials.Meanwhile,③（语言运用困难）_________________________inusingEnglishproperly.④__________,Imaybetoonervoustospeakinfaceofthousandsofaudience.⑤（求助并感谢）__________________________________________________________________________________.Hopefully,thegreateffortIammakingwillpayoff.IhopetoseeyouinBeijingaftertheEnglishcontest.Yours,LiHuaStep3：注意过渡，衔接，检查文章（如时态，主谓一致等）HowiseverythinggoingwithyouIamnowconfrontedwithdifficultyIstillhavesometroubleBesidesIwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeahandandthankyouforyourhelp（2017汕头一模）假如你是李华，最近在学习美国风俗，但国内有关这方面的地道书籍较少。你想麻烦你的美国笔友Mike帮你买一些这方面的书。现在请根据以下信息给Mike写一封信。1.说明买书的理由；2.对书的要求（如数量，寄送时间等）；3.会转账给他。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；生词：转账transfermoneyExample2：Step1：构思审题时态人称提纲（提取信息）Para1Para2Para3一般现在时第一、第二人称问候Mike，请他帮忙买书说明买书的理由（书籍少）；书的数量，寄送时间；会转账感谢，期待回复DearMike,①（问候）_____________________?②（写信目的）_______________________________________________________.Recently,③（我在学习美国风俗）______________________________________.④（国内有关这方面的书较少）______________________________________________⑤（请求帮助）___________________________________________________.Step2：提笔HowiseverythinggoingIamwritingtoaskifyoucanhelpmebuysomeinterestinAmericancustoms.However,inChinatherearefewbooksrelatedThus,itwouldbeverybooksinAmerica.Ihavegreattothistopic.helpfulifyoucouldbuysomebooks.⑥（书的数量）_______________________________________________________________________.⑦（寄送时间）___________________________________________________.⑧（我转账