第二步再求变,力争有功(用时8周)第三周并列句和状语从句的写作一、并列句并列句是由两个或两个以上并列而又独立的简单句构成。在并列句中,这些简单句常由并列连词连在一起。并列连词所连接的简单句被称为分句。(一)常见并列句的类型及并列连词while对比关系for,so,therefore,thus因果关系or,otherwise,orelse,either...or...,not...but...选择关系but,yet,whereas转折关系and,both...and...,notonly...butalso...,neither...nor...并列关系(递进关系)连词类型First,myEnglishisverygoodandI'mopenmindedandwarmhearted,soI'mgettingalongwellwitheveryone.(2013·天津高考满分作文)首先,我的英语很好,而且我性格外向、有一副热心肠,因此我和每个人都相处得很好。[即时演练]用并列连词完成句子1.人们可以把他们当做礼物,或者挂在自己的房子里。Peoplecangivethemasgiftshangthemintheirhouses.(2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)eitheror2.它不仅给了我们接近大自然的机会,而且能让我们在学习之余得到放松。Itgaveusachancetogetclosetonature,________gaveusrelaxationfromourstudy.(2013·江西高考满分作文)notonlybutalso3.因此,从现在起,让我们不要在一些不重要的事情上浪费时间,而要经常与我们的父母进行面对面的交流。So,fromnowon,let'swasteourtimeonunimportantthingshaveahearttoheartchatwithourparentsonceinawhile.(2013·重庆高考满分作文)notbut(二)并列连词构成的常用句式(1)and构成的句式①祈使句+and+陈述句(祈使句相当于一个条件状语从句,and后面的句子相当于一个表示结果的主句)。Workhardandyouwillsucceed.(=Ifyouworkhard,youwillsucceed.)努力学习,你就会成功。②名词词组+and+陈述句(名词词组相当于一个条件状语从句,其中常含有more,another等词)。Anothertry,andyou'llmakeasuccess.再试一次,你就会取得成功。(2)or(else)/otherwise构成的句式①祈使句+or(else)/otherwise+陈述句。Seizethechance,or(else)you'llregret.抓住这次机会,否则你会后悔的。②名词词组+or(else)/otherwise+陈述句。Morehealthyfood,oryou'llbreakdownsoonerorlater.多吃健康食品,不然你的身体迟早会垮掉。(3)when构成的句式①sb.wasdoingsth.when...某人正在做某事,这时……LastMonday,IwaswalkinginthestreetwhenIsuddenlysawanoldmanfalloffhisbicycle.(2013·浙江高考满分作文)上周一,我正在街上散步,这时突然看到一位老人从自行车上摔了下来。②sb.wasabouttodosth.when...某人正要做某事,这时……Wewereabouttosetoffwhenitsuddenlybegantorain.我们正打算动身,突然下起雨来了。③sb.hadjustdonesth.when...某人刚做完某事,这时……Ihadjustfinishedsweepingthefloorwhenthetelephonerang.我刚刚拖完地,这时电话铃响了。[即时演练]用适当的连词填空1.Standoverthereyou'llbeabletoseetheoilpaintingbetter.2.Startoutrightaway,you'llmissthefirsttrain.3.IworkedhardatEnglishanddevotedallmysparetimetopracticingit,Ifailedtopassthemidtermexamination.4.About9:00lastnight,Iwasbusypreparingformytomorrow'stestsuddenlyloudnoisescameintomyroom.andor/otherwisebutwhen5.HalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,______48%oftheboysfavorsportsstars.6.canstudentsimprovetheirwritingabilityinthiswaytheycanstrengthentheirselfconfidence.whileNotonlybutalso二、状语从句在英语写作中,状语从句的运用是高考英语高分作文的必需条件,所以必须学会并熟练运用状语从句。引导状语从句的连词分类when,whenever,as,while,(ever)since,before,after,till,until,assoonas,hardly...when...,nosooner...than...,scarcely...when...,eachtime,everytime,thefirsttime,thelasttime,themoment,theminute,thesecond,theday,immediately时间连词状语从句though,although,evenif,eventhough,as,while,whatever,whoever,whenever,wherever,however,nomatter+疑问词,whether(...)or...,whether...ornot让步because,as,since,nowthat,seeingthat,consideringthat,inthat原因if,unless,providing/provided(that),supposing/suppose(that),given(that),aslongas,solongas,oncondition(that),incase,ifonly条件where,wherever地点连词状语从句sothat,so...that...,such...that...,that结果that,inorderthat,sothat,incase,forfear(that),lest目的asif,asthough,as方式as,than,thesameas,notso...as...,as...as...比较连词状语从句IwentonwithmyworkuntilIfinishedwashingalltheclothes.(2013·陕西高考满分作文)我会继续工作,直到把所有的衣服洗完。EversincemyfriendXiaohuaenteredhighschooltwoyearsago,hismotherhasbeenpushinghimhardinhisstudies.(2013·湖北高考满分作文)自从我的朋友小华两年前进入高中,他的妈妈一直在学习上给他施加了很大的压力。Wheneverhedidn'tperformwellinhisstudies,shewouldblamehimbitterly,expressingherdisappointmentinhim.(2013·湖北高考满分作文)每当他在学习时做得不好,她总会训斥他,表达对他的失望。AsIwasbusypreparingformyfinalexam,Ididn'treplytoyouremailassoonasIreceivedit.(2013·山东高考满分作文)因为我正忙着准备期末考试,我没有一收到信就给你回信。Althoughcleaningstreetisnomorethananordinaryjob,itcontributestothesociety.(2013·广东高考满分作文)尽管清扫大街只是一个非常普通的工作,但对社会做出了贡献。Whatevertheresultis,weshouldacceptitwithasmile,becausewehavetriedourbest.(2013·湖南高考满分作文)无论结果怎样,我们都要微笑着接受,因为我们已经尽了全力。[即时演练]用状语从句完成句子1.当我还是个小孩的时候,就对未来充满了幻想。_______________________,Ihadmanyfancydreamsaboutthefuture.WhenIwasstillalittleboy2.他们向东走了30英里才看见一个村庄。Theywalkedabout30miles.beforetheysawavillage3.尽管因特网有很大帮助,但我认为花太多的时间在上面不是好主意。_____________________________________,Idon'tthinkit'sagoodideatospendtoomuchtimeonit.Although/ThoughtheInternetisofgreathelp4.只要你坚持下去,就一定会成功。___________________________,youwillsurelysucceed.Aslongasyoukeepontrying5.如果我们继续污染环境,地球将不再适合人类居住。______________________________,theworldwon'tbefitforustolivein.Ifwegoonpollutingtheenvironment[综合演练提升]Ⅰ.翻译句子1.好的习惯经常使得效率增高,而不好的习惯效果恰恰相反。___________________________________________________________________.(2013·四川高考书面表达)Goodhabitsalwaysleadtohighefficiency,whilebadonesleadtotheopposite2.当谈及选择时,我宁愿去旅游。____________________________________________(2013·山东高考写作)Whenitcomestoachoice,Iprefertogotraveling.3.如果方便的话,你可以在上午11点半到机场去接他吗?_________________________________________________________________?(2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)Ifitisconvenientforyou,canyoupickhimupattheairportat11:30am4.无论我做什么,我都会尽力做好。_____________________________________________.(2013·天津高考满分作文)NomatterwhatIdo,Iwilltrymybesttodoitwell5.另外,我会告诉他你长得什么样,以便你们可以容易地找到对方。______________________________________________________________________.(2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)Besides,Iwilltellhimwhatyoulooklikesothatyoucanfindeacho