八大话题写作课(volunteer)

中学英语中学九年级上学期主讲人沈莹区级学科带头人北大附中中考八大话题写作专项训练节能环保，健康饮食12志愿者活动，社会奉献3分析调查结果，阐述观点4提出建议（根据来信的烦恼提合理建议和忠告）5感谢帮助（对老师，家长和同学）7谈论未来，计划安排8家庭生活，家务劳动6难忘经历，人物描写志愿者活动，社会奉献2志愿者活动，社会奉献2011年石景山区第二次模拟试题某国际学校在自己的英文网站上发布了一个帖子准备招募一批志愿者，利用暑假到希望小学为学生辅导英语。假设你是李华，根据帖子的内容写一封申请信，首先请回答帖子中提出的问题，并谈谈你对这个活动的理解。Toall,Thissummer,wewantsomevolunteerstohelpthepupilsofHopePrimarySchoollearnEnglish.Whatareyouradvantagesindoingthisjob?What’syourplantodoit?ifyouareinterested,pleasewritebackbefore24th,June.Yours,xxx2012延庆二模学校志愿者协会招募新成员，打算在暑假期间组织志愿者活动。假设你叫LiHua,请你写一篇60词左右的短文给志愿者协会，报名参加此次活动。内容应包括：你自己的简要介绍；你要去哪个地方做志愿者？你能做什么事情？你对志愿者工作有什么感受或体会？请不要写出你的校名和姓名。提示词：LiHua,student,ClassFour,GradeThree,theOldPeople’sHome,sing,dance.审要点，审人称，审时态1.审题段落层次。详略得当。段落间自然衔接2.框架头脑风暴(话题相关词语或短语)3.头脑风暴基本句型，3a句，50个重点句4.组句作文8步走加上连接词，将要点之间衔接5.连接首段引入,尾段总结升华,首尾呼应6.首尾增加一些亮点句、加分句。7.打磨8查8.检查2011年石景山区第二次模拟试题某国际学校在自己的英文网站上发布了一个帖子准备招募一批志愿者，利用暑假到希望小学为学生辅导英语。假设你是李华，根据帖子的内容写一封申请信，首先请回答帖子中提出的问题，并谈谈你对这个活动的理解。Toall,Thissummer,wewantsomevolunteerstohelpthepupilsofHopePrimarySchoollearnEnglish.Whatareyouradvantagesindoingthisjob?What’syourplantodoit?ifyouareinterested,pleasewritebackbefore24th,June.Yours,xxx框架简单自我介绍(一句话)提出申请,想参加为什么想参加(简述）我的经验和优势我的计划(想做些什么)志愿者工作的体会和感受Volunteerpara.1Para.2Para.3BrainstormpassagessentencesphraseswordsUnit3Book5Atourschool,wesometimeshaveaspecialdaytohelpothers.Lastyearwewenttoanoldpeople'shomeandsangsongsandperformedaplayforthem.Theoldpeoplewereveryhappy.Weshouldbeallowedtotaketimetodothingslikethatmoreoften.Forexample,weshouldvisitprimaryschoolsandhelpteachyoungstudents.IwanttobeateacherwhenI'molder,soitwouldbeagreatexperienceforme.Otherstudentswouldliketodootherjobs.Forexample,myfriendTianGewantstowriteforanewspaper.Sheshouldbeallowedtovolunteeratthenewspaperofficeonceaweek.OnFridayafternoons,manystudentsaresleepyafteralongweekofclasses.SomestudentsshouldbeallowedtohaveFridayafternoonsofftovolunteerandhelpothers.Number77HighSchoolishometothreeveryspecialyoungpeople,LiHuiping,LanPei,andZhuMing.Thesethreestudentsallvolunteertheirtimetohelpotherpeople.Thisvolunteerworktakeseachofthemseveralhoursaweek,soitisamajorcommitment.Huipinglovestoread,andsheputsthislovetogoodusebyworkingintheafter-schoolcarecenteratherlocalelementaryschool.Here,shehelpsyoungchildrentoread.Linpeilovesanimals,andplanstostudytobeaveterinarianwhenheleavesschool.HespendseverySaturdaymorningworkinginananimalhospital.Zhuminglovessingingandwantstobeaprofessionalsinger.Hesingsforgroupsofpeopleatthecityhospitaltocheerthemup.Volunteeringisgreat!saysHuiping.NotonlydoIfeelgoodabouthelpingotherpeople,butIgettospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo.Peisayshehaslearnedmoreaboutanimals.Mingsayshehasmetsomewonderfulpeopleatthehospital.Thethreestudentsplantosetupastudentvolunteerprojectattheirschool.Don'tputitoff,saysHuiping.Beavolunteertoday!Unit5Book9想要参加•wouldliketo…•beeagerto…•Itmakessenseformetodo….3a中相关句子•.…volunteerone’stimetohelpotherpeople•.Huipinglovestoread,andsheputsthislovetogoodusebyworking…Para.1Apply•begoingto•plantodosth.•helpsb.todo擅长，热爱•begoodat•liketodo/doing/enjoydoing/Befondof•beinterestedindoingsth.•haveapassionfor…计划，措施Para.2Myexperience,advantage&plan曾经参加过此类活动，有经验•Iusedtodosth…•Ihavetheexperienceof•Iamexperiencedindoingsth段落3a句子1.NotonlydoIfeelgoodabouthelpingotherpeople,butIgettospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo.2.Don'tputitoff.Beavolunteertoday!3.Somestudentsshouldbeallowedtotaketimetodothingslikethatmoreoften.体会感受希望1.Ihopethat…2.Itisnotonlygoodtooursociety,butalsoachanceforustogrowandlearn.3.Makecontributionto…4.Byhelpingothers,Ifeel…Para.3opinionsandcomments框架简单自我介绍(一句话)提出申请,想参加为什么想参加(简述）我的经验和优势我的计划(想做些什么)志愿者工作的体会和感受Volunteerpara.1Para.2Para.3适当的过渡衔接词Inaddition，What’smore，Besides,Apartfromthat,Furthermore,除此以外再者优美加分句1.Asamiddleschoolstudent,IwillkeepitinmyheartandthatIamavolunteerandfillmyselfwithastrongwillofdevotion.2.Inowunderstandwhatismeantbythesaying“givingisreceiving”.Everyoneintheworldneedshelp,everyonecanofferhelpandeveryonewillbehelpedbysomethingkind.3.Makingtimeoutofmydayisahardtasktoachieve,forIbecomebusierandbusiereachday,.ButwhatIgetfromhelpingotherpeopleisendless,especiallywhenIseehowmuchIcanaddtoanotherperson’shappiness.4.IfindhappinessinhelpingothersandIfeelgoodwhenIvolunteertheirtimetodomanymeaningfulthingsforotherpeople.修改文章作文8查1.查文章主题立意是否准确？要点是否齐全？2.查是否分段？全文篇幅比例是否恰当？3.查时态、语态是否正确？4.自己发挥扩充的内容是否都围绕主题,有无“废句”？5.查句子是否连贯流畅？有无恰当连接词？段落之间过渡是否合理自然？6.查主谓人称是否一致？7.查单词拼写及大小写字母是否正确？8.查标点的使用是否正确？Writing30:00