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1、改变句子的开头方式句子不要一味都用主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词作状语等。试比较：TheotherdaymybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycle.MybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycletheotherday.Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.2.Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.2、在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式。在一篇文章中,要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。Itisthedogthathassavedmylittlesisterbravely.A.强调句ThedoghassavedmyLittlesisterbravely.Whatwehadtodowastostandthere，tryingtocatchtheoffender.B.主从复合句Wehadtostandtheretocatchtheoffender.Thedriverescapedwithoutstopping，leavingtheoldmanlyingontheroad.C.分词短语，由with或without引导的短语Thedriverescapedanddidn’tstop，helefttheoldmanlyingontheroad.Notuntil11：30didIgotobed.D.倒装句Iwenttobedat11：30.Whilecrossingthestreet，youshouldbecareful.E.省略句Whileyouarecrossingthestreet，youshouldbecareful.Hestoppedusanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.F.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力1.Hestopusanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextofffender.Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing.Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Earlyinthemorning,wemet…….试改变下列句子,使之变化多样,生动有力Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.WeakasIam,Iwillmaketheeffort.AlthoughIamweak,Iwillmaketheeffort.Singingandlaughing,Theywentbacktoschool.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.Heleftwithoutsayinggoodbye.Ｈeleftanddidn’tsaygood-bye.Open…,andyou….病句:Openthedoor,youcanseeabedonyourleft.Ifyouopen…,you….Hearingthenews,Iwasshocked.病句:Hearthenews,Iwasshocked.Iwasshockedatthenews.3.Thoughitlookedlikerainthismorning,___(turnout)(结果却是晴天).Ithasturnedouttobeafineday.7.___(give)(多给我们一点时间),wecoulddomuchbetter.givenmoretime8.___(difference)(无所谓)whetherhecomesornot.Itmakesnodifference.10.______(belief)(是我们的信念)thatimprovementsinhealthcarewillleadtoastronger,moreprosperouseconomy.Itisourbelief