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OEFLWRITINGTOEFLwriting太原新东方张靖MaggieTOEFL强化写作课程体系class1入题角度class2正文写作class3托福语言总体课程安排1列观点（逻辑）2写作错误3论证方法10日谈4段落写作托福模板句5句式变换6综合写作语言论证衔接TOEFL写作总论TOEFL写作考什么能力？1.语言2.逻辑用地道易懂的语言清晰表达观点美式直线逻辑–层层论证Taskfortoday1.托福写作得分点2.列观点入题3.常见写作错误1.托福写作得分点1.了解托福写作1.Integratedwriting2.Independentwriting3+3+20+2303:read3:listen20:write230:wordsIntegratedwriting30+350+18530:write350:words185:topicsIndependentwriting2.Requirements独立写作官方要求P122总要求DOLDevelopmentOrganizationLanguage总要求论证衔接语言1.论证--Developmentexplanationsdetails真题--北京2010.1.31Doyouagreeordisagreephysicalexerciseismuchmoreimportantfortheoldthantheyoung上义词下义词抽象具体basketball/football/swimming/badminton/volleyball/golfsportsphysicalexerciseTheyoung--swimming→toneupthebody•satisfytheskinstobesmooth•shapeawellproportionedbody•strengthentherespiratorysystem•givesyouthedividendofbetterhealthTheold--Taichi→alowimpactexercise•stabletheemotions•tunethespirit•putpeopleintoabetterframeofmind•contributestogreaterhealthandlongevity真题--北京2010.10.17ItisbettertorelaxbywatchingTVorreadingabookthandoingphysicalexercise,doyouagree?2009.1.17transitionalwords2.逻辑--OrganizationIfyouhaveachancetomeetafamousperson,whomdoyouwanttosee?真题--2010.1.9XX1.Good-looking2.Kind-hearted3.CooperativeGood–lookingTobeginwith,hisnoblenosealwaystakesmyfancy.EverytimewhenIlookatit,myheartjustpoundswithexcitement.Inaddition,I’mobsessedwithhisdeeplyblueeyes,whichseemtoseedirectlyintomysoul.Moreover,theinexpressiblywinningsmileuponhisfacehasalreadysunkintomymemory.Inmyview,ithasthepowertodissolveallthedepression.Sentencestructure3.语言应用--Languageuse句式多变我认为practiceIthink/state/claim/argueInmyviewAsfarasIamconcernedIamconvincedthatIwouldliketoshowthatTomeitappearsevidentthatNothingismoreevidentthanthatIampersuadedinmyownmindthat例如导致3.题库分类升学时和技工射鱼P96生活人物学习时代合作计划工业社会娱乐生活环境/节奏/习惯个人/他人方式/分数/作业/打工发明/交通工具/建筑个人/团体名人/职位/购物污染/濒危动物外表/钱/广告/风俗movie/TV/travel2.列观点P1231.步骤2.?Howtoplantatree?审题：准确--挖坑列观点：合理--浇水论证观点：适度--施肥语言：多变衔接--修枝TSSSES状语言竹状语言树非SSESESESTSTSTS1.审题2.表述观点–同意什么3.论证观点–why/how2步走TS–SS1.列观点步骤Practice1Filmscantellusalotaboutourlivesandsurroundings.Doyouliketoseeafilminacinemaorathome?事物类列观点大忌分论点含义宽泛Inacinema•hugescreen→clearpictures/colorfulimages/agrandsight→asenseofvisionroyalfeast•surroundsound→maketheeardrankinthemusic→letpeoplebeseducedbytheshockingeffects•ahostofpeople→amixedresponse→interesting/agoodwaytolearnaboutfriendsPractice2Attendingaliveperformance(forexample,aplay,concert,orsportingevent)ismoreenjoyablethanwatchingthesameeventontelevision人物类Practice1Ifyoucouldmeetafamousentertainerorathlete,whowouldthatbe,andwhy?Dengyaping人物介绍名字+人物解释Dengyaping--4timeOlympicgoldmedalistintabletennisPractice2Ifyoucouldtravelbackintimetomeetafamouspersonfromhistory,whatpersonwouldyouliketomeet?PremierZhouPremierZhou•adistinguishedpoliticianinthe1950s•oneofthegreateststatesmenintheworld,whoiswelllovedbyalltheChineseForyourhomework…stststststs妙计4法出观点列表分类替代推理法1.列表法对比找差异列表1.1方法Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Itisbettertobeamemberofagroupthantobetheleaderofagroup.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.例题leaderstaffresponsibility大小qualificationcomprehensivespecificpressure大小power大小contributionwidespecificabilityleadershipteamworkrolekeyimportantchallenge大小opportunity多多Socialconnection大小Informationchannel多少rewarding多少leaderstaffresponsibility大小qualificationcomprehensivespecificpressure大小power大小contributionwidespecificabilityleadershipteamworkrolekeyimportantchallenge大小opportunity多多Socialconnection大小Informationchannel多少rewarding多少人物模板个人他人生活外在感觉工作气质/外貌/穿着/吸引力素质诚实/正直/善良/修养/关心人权利/责任/能力/贡献/抗压/挑战/影响/综合素质/角色重要性人脉圈朋友圈认识不认识加深友情扩展感情dispositioncultivation1.2列表法注意事项clearreasonable→观点无重叠Chooseoneofthefollowingtransportationvehiclesandexplainwhyyouthinkithaschangedpeople'slives.automobiles/bicycles/airplanesPractice小试牛刀2.分类法宽泛、抽象细化、分类2.1方法增加2.2目的入题点讨论内容Somehigh-Schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotostudyinuniversities.Whichonedoyouthinkisbetter,andwhy?例题1：Somehigh-Schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotostudyinuniversities.Whichonedoyouthinkisbetter,andwhy?例题1-思路1high-schoolgraduates文科生：liberalartsstudents理科生：sciencestudents艺术类：artstudentsgotowork1.liberalartsstudentslibraries/newspaper/reporter/clerk→bettergraspofhigh-levellanguage2.sciencestudentscorporation/laboratory→businesstransaction→applyatheorytoactualpractice3.artstudentsartgalleries/museums→getaclosecontactwithrealartisticvalueSomehigh-Schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotostudyinuniversities.Whichonedoyouthinkisbetter,andwhy?例题1-思路2universitiesComprehensiveuniversityLanguageSchoolEngineeringschoolCollegeofartsShouldacitytrytopreserveitsoldbuildingsordestroythemandreplacethemwithmodernbuildings?Practice:小试牛刀Shouldacitytrytopreserveitsoldbuildingsordestroythemandreplacethemwithmodernbuildings?Practice:小试牛刀Oldbuildings不该拆1.buildingsofhistoricvalues2.gorgeoushistoricbuildings3.specialethnicarchitecture要拆1.unsafe2.spoilthecityscape1.buildingsofhistoricvaluescourtyardhouse/hutong/TheForbiddenCity•partofChin