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Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?——中考写作指导课basicstructure(基本结构的安排)DearMr.Know，I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Writetomesoon.Let’sgoforit!Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）basicrules(写作考试规则)search（审）list（列）add(加:开头和结尾)connect(连)beautifY(美：谚语/例子)健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork•如何度假•调查报告•倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。•Alotofpeopletravel.•Somepeoplestayathome.•Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.•Afewpeoplework.•Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginning）•Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）加(add)•加首尾，使结构完整。•可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.•Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)Writingskills（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用高级词汇Whichisbetter?他们很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.我们应该保护环境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.方法二:活用多种句型Writingskills（“写”的技巧）她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…方法三:妙用关联词Writingskills（“写”的技巧）1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示选择:or,either…or3.表示转折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort关联词(connectionwords)Let’stry•_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.•Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.•Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking.•_____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\Atlast•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.•Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)美(beautify)Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.Proverb（谚语）/saying集中注意力于学习Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.4.DoastheRomansdo.三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.Enjoysomeproverbs7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.覆水难收。一天一苹果，医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。方法四:妙用谚语和例子（多用于“thebody”）Writingskills（“写”的技巧）青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.For